ff yuvani : saawre(ch 1) 16th march

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Hi everyone, before I begin I'd like to mention that I have been inspired to write this FF based on my favourite movie "mujhse dosti karoge" and few other books i read and love. but it would have my flavour in it aswell. some of it will be same and some of it will be different.

NOTE: anyone who wishes to get a pm for this will have to buddy me and pm me telling they are yuvanians so i can keep record as my buddy list is flooded with friends from different fandoms.

*i really hope and pray that i complete this as i have alot of pending ff's.

do read and leave your comments or atleast hit the like button as it can be very encouraging for a writer.

18 years ago

mr birla stood with his loving wife pratima his ever so class concious mother chandarkala birla and four sons saurabh , yuvraj ,anuj and sharad, sharad who was pratima's dead sister's son much to her mother in law dislike but mr birla and pratima treated him like their own at Allahbaad station with his childhood friends, pankaj who worked in a bank his wife lata and two daughters bhavna ,suhani and mr birla's other close friend mr bharat his wife and daughter somya. they lived together but now mr birla was moving to uk as he was offered a good deal for his company birla and sons. so they were at the station for good byes. the three friends were chatting with their wifes and chandrakala birla was also saying her good byes but in her heart she was happy to move out as she never consider pankaj and his family good for their class and status but she was quite happy with mr bharat and her special interest in somya as she was very pretty, she always had this interest of her darling grandson yuvraj getting married to somya in near future. she smiled looking at somya who was happily standing with bhavna and suhani. yuvraj ran and get hold of somya's hand and moved to the corner while suhani followed them . yuvraj who also had a crush on somya said

yuvraj: see somya like our fathers friendship is never gonna end the same goes for us. me you and suhani (he looked at suhani and smiled) will always remain friends and ill never forget you both. actually i am going to write to you somya. i am going to email you.

somya who was least interested said :ya ya... but i dont have a computer

she said all of a sudden

suhani intrupted: but i do .

somya gave a look to her best friend/sister

yuvraj smiled and put his palm on little suhani's cheek

yuvraj: suhani you are such a good friend .

he looked at somya

yuvraj: somya i am gonna write it to you on suhani's computer. We will always stay in contact

the train gave the last horn and mr birla with his family moved in. yuvraj kissed somya's cheek and ran to his family waving to both somya and suhani

somya: freak

suhani smiled : its cute i will miss you yuvraj

ill miss you

she told herself.

after a month

somya just got off from suhani's computer while she and bhavna eyed her

suhani: kia howa somu

somya: how boring suhani. ab internet pay beth kay email ka reply karo. yeh yuvraj bhi na he is so boring .

bhavna: somya he likes you

somya: whatever!

suhani : station pay toh bht keh rai thi that you will reply him now he will be disappointed

somya: kaha hoga . agar tujhe uski itni pari hai suhani toh tu reply karday mai chali i have my dance class.

she kissed suhani and went.

suhani looked at bhavna who arched her eyebrows: jo tujhy theek lagay suhani

suhani than looked at the computer screen which flashed "I MISS YOU SO MUCH SOMYA"

suhani came and sat on computer reading his full mail and smiled bhavna stood behind suhani and smiled because she always knew that suhani had a soft corner for yuvraj

suhani replied to yuvraj mail and in the end wrote: lots of love suhani ..

she didnt entered and backspaced it writing: lots of love somya.

Bg

"janay wo kaisa hoga reee"

she pressed the enter

years went by

suhani kept on replying with somya's name to yuvraj on the other side yuvraj was so happy and shared the same with his dadi and sharad who was the closest to him.

suhani and yuvraj shared their life with eachother. likes dislikes preferences, pain, emotions moments .

the one mistake suhani did was she never told yuvraj that it wasnt somya but it was her. And yuvraj was in love with the bond he shared with who he thought was somya. He was in love with the thought hat she understands him so much even when they are so much far away still

yuvraj: kitna khoobsurat rishta hai yeh bina dekhay phir bhi kitnay kareeb hain. I mean she understand me so much

he smiled

18 years later

email conversation

yuvraj: somya atleast send a picture of yours , i just have this old picture with you and suhani in it

suhani: waisay toh kehty ho that i am the closest person to you.i live in your heart toh tasveer ki kia zarorat

yuvraj read it and laughed: tasveer ki kia zarorat hai mai toh tumhay dekhty hi pehchan jaon ga. tumhari tasveer toh meray dil mai chapi hai

suhani: liar!

yuvraj: sach jhoot ka decision bhot jald hojaye ga ,acha listen there is good news. we are coming back. I am coming back

suhani's eyes got bigger

yuvraj: i cant wait to see you i know bachpan ki tran abhi bhi tum sabsay happening aur sabse beautiful hogi.

suhani read it and stood up. she went to the mirror. faced herself

suhani: wo mai nahi yuvraj. wo mai nahi..

she exclaimed..

the end

okay so here it is.. tell me how did you find the first part.

points: suhani somya are best of friends more like sisters. somya is committed to krishna and suhani knows about it.

about birlas . saurabh and anuj are married to ragini and maneka. there is snoopi too and ramesh isnt left behind.

and the most basic thing. this ff has nothing to do with dadi's racism.

because suhani is beautiful its just that yuvraj is in love with somya as he thinks she is the one who wrote him emails.

dadi is just class concious and her behavior is different

the obsessed evil is ankit and rishi who are total bad guys

but he is the son of pankaj and bharat business partner

so how is that??????
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Posted: 10 years ago
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links to my yuvani works

ff suhani si ek ladki: yuvani ... my way after sweater fiasco (ongoing)
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4270735




yuvani ff haan mujhe bhi hogya... (on going) picnic track
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4306783



meray di ki duein hain ... yuvani.. my first ff ... not completed just a part and locked
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4073394



other links to work
ragna ff mujhe teri zarorat hai ek villain types(on going)
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4092952


jeeman virman virika links and it has my other stories link too from previous account(will not update further as of now)
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4026810


meet (meher preet) kis desh ff (on going)
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3949756





this ff
saawre : yuvani
parts links

introduction: pg 1

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4329943


chapter 1: pg
coming soon



Edited by yusramazhar1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow extremely nice throughly enjoyed it update soon cnt wait for the next part. And its cool that this time yuvraj is cheated
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You brought back sweet memories of this movie and it suits Yuvraj-Snaky-Suhani very well...in fact this trio is much better than the originals.
Yus...enjoyed it very much...pls update soon.
Edited by Elita - 10 years ago
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Its really good I liked the description
Please update soon
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OMG I looove the movie watched it sooo many times, even now I watch it when I have time or listen to the songs loved Rani and Hrithik.

This suits Suhsni Yuvraj and Soumya great start keep rocking
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Super👏👏.. FF inspired by my all time favorite movie.. Waiting to see how this goes???
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Originally posted by: sandiab

Wow extremely nice throughly enjoyed it update soon cnt wait for the next part. And its cool that this time yuvraj is cheated


yes sandi yuvraj is cheated but not his heart
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Originally posted by: Elita

You brought back sweet memories of this movie and it suits Yuvraj-Snaky-Suhani very well...in fact this trio is much better than the originals.

Yus...enjoyed it very much...pls update soon.


its one of my favorites movies...
i will update soon eli behna
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everyone

" saawre " " yuvani ff " CHAPTER ONE

suhani runs to somya's room and shouts

suhani: wo wapis araha hai

somya turns cutting her long conference call with the love f her life krishna

somya: kaun wapis araha ha?

They both looked at eachother

suhani: somu.. (she paused) yuvraj wapis araha hai

somya was blank and irritated as she just had to cut her call for this new freak name yuvraj

somya: kaun yuvraj ?

she asked asking with her eyes open

suhani looked down like a theif and thought here somya not even remember his name and she wrote all those emails using somya's name.

suhani cursed herself "suhani devi tu bhi na

somya looked suspiciously

somya: suhani tell me what did you do?

somya asked with hands on her hips ..

suhani gulped down

suhani : woh...

and than she filled somya with past 18 years.. and after like one hour the house roar with somya's voice

somya: WHAT ? ARE YOU MAD SUHANI? Yeh kia kiya tunay? I mean how ...

why?

tunay wo saray email meray naam say ku likhay?

suhani came and held somya's hand

suhani: maine jo kia wo kia. Ku kay yuvraj tujhsay baat karna chahta tha he said he will email you

but ab yuvraj kay anay kay baad you have to pretend that you wrote all those emails

somya took her hands out of suhani's grip

somya: nahin mai aisa kuch ni karo gi i am happily committed to krishna from past 5 years and you know that and if he finds out this. wo mujhy toh definitely ni choray ga aur tujhy bhi ni choray ga suhani.

i mean come on we were planning on telling the family and getting married and you. Tu uskay anger issues janti hai

suhani made a cry baby face

suhani:aur tu yuvraj keh ni janti I hav talked to him I know he is different

somu somu somu ... please na kuch hi time ki toh baat hai and than he will return. tab tk just pretend .

aur somu maine aj tk kitna kia hai teray liye . teray homeworks kiye. tujhy paper mai pass karya aur tujhy aur krishna jiju ko milaya bhi toh mainy

suhani blackmailed and somya sighed

somya: chup kar drama queen. start kardi apni ehsano ki list ginwana. This is madness but teray liye I will try

she pointed her finger

somya: acha theek hai i will pretend but krishna ko pata ni chalay okay?kisi bhi keemat par ni warna mera aur tera kia hoga pata nahin and once he returns topic finished paka?

suhani excitedly hugged somya

suhani: paka paka ...

somya: waisay kab arahay hn mr yuvraj. aur dikhta kaisa hai? have you seen him?

Bg(slower tone)

"chori say chupkay chupkay

Betha ha dil mai chupkay"

suhani smiled: handsome hai. halki dari bikhray baal aur kal araha hai

she folded her arms and went to the window to see the moon and smiled to it repeating lightly :mr halki dari bikhray baal.

in bhavnas room:

bhavna: suhani tu aur somya yeh galat kar rai ho.i mean suhani you cant lie. Bhot problem hojaye gi baad mai

its just yu have to admit wo aye ga go to him and admit that it was you . better option suhani maan ja

suhani hugged bhavna from back

suhani:bhavna dii please gusa mat karo na. ap janti hoon mai sach ni keh pao gi I mean aj tak yuvraj khushi say somya say baat karta aya hai

bhavna gave bigger sister look to her

suhani: I mean samjhta aya hai that it was somya

bhavna: suhani yeh dhoka hai dhoka

she repeated

suhani: sach boldia toh usko dhoka lagay ga dii aur wo bachpan say somu ko pasand karta hai

bhavna: aur tu?

suhani turned around not meeting her dii's eyes

suhani: mai kia?

bhavna shooked her head she knew suhani would never admit but deeply and irrevocably her sister was in love with the thought of yuvraj.

bhavna: khair aj ka sach yeh hai meri behn kay somya loves krishna aur yuvraj is fooled by the names .. because u chupa lay its your choice but somya krishna k pyar karti hai and the email girl is you

somya entered

somya: aur ni toh kia bhavna dii suhani bhi aek number ki pagal hai kia musibat galay bandli

suhani glared at somya

bhavna: i am warning you both bohat bura phaso kay dono

suhani and somya both hugged bhavna from eachside

somya and suhani: phas jaein gay toh ap bacha laina na

all three laughed

in london

yuvraj and sharad

sharad: dekho dekho guru kay face say th khushian ja hi nai rai ..

yuvraj smiled

yuvraj: ab nazar mat laga.. cant explain how excited I am. Ill meet her . you know wo mujhy ktnay achay say samjhti hai ? itnay dur reh kay bhi she knows me inside out

how beautiful of a person she is

sharad: kabhi dekha hai somya ji ko?

Yuvraj: dekhny ki zarora nahi.. bohat logo ki bheed mai say bhi pehchan loon gai. Actually mai ni yeh dil.. yeh dil pehchanta hai usay. Abh toh kal hi dekhein gay somya aur suhani ko I missed my friends

Sharad: smitten?

Yuvraj: in love ! sochta hoon kabhi kabhi kaisi hoi wo...

Bg

Yuvraj:

Andekhi anjaani si pagli si deewani si, jaane woh kaisi hogi re

Chori se chupke chupke baithi hai dil me chupke

Jaane woh kaisi hogi re

He played with snoopi and laid back on his head smiling to the thoughts

Suhani:

Mere khayalo me na jaane kitni tasvire banane lagiHey hey hey Yuvraj : Bas aasmaano pe do dilo ki takdire banane lagi Suhnai looked in the mirror and danced Bin dekhay hai aisi bechaini tauba Hoye raba dekha toh janay kia hoga Yuvraj went to his laptop table and get hold of somya and suhani's picture Sapno mai anay wali Needein churanay waliJaane wo kaisi hgi re Suhani saw the moon Palkn kay upar neechay dil ki dharkan kay peechay Janay wo kaisay hoga re... Yuvraj went to his window aswell Na janay kia hoga kia na hoga Pehli mulakat mai Hey hey hey Suhani hided her face Kaisay chupaon gi chaand ko mai Is chandni raat mai Yuvraj excitedly Bas ab toh mai uska ghungat kholon gaChupkay say dekhon ga kuch na bolon ga Suhani revolved in her room Oye hoye yeh bechaini Oye hoye eh betabi Janay wo kaisa hoga re YuvrajJisko dekha na barso Dekho ga mai kal parso Janay wo kaisi hogi re Both jumped o their respective beds and smiled thinking Yuvraj : janay wo kaisi hogi re Suhani: hmmm janay wo kaisa hoga re ... The closed there eyes

next morning

the train stopped with the screeching halt and suhani's heartbeat raced like a horse running in a race .

she was standing with somya who noticed it and she nudged suhani

somya: calm down wo khaye ga nahi tujhy . itni himat ni uski ky meri suhani ko chuvay.darr mat chill hoja mai hoon

suhani: somu please. Krishna jiju atay hai and tumhari saans urr jati hai .

janti ho na hum aur jhoot kaisay hain?

kahi iss halki dari bikhry baal ko shak na hojaye

somya: chill suhani hafta rahay ga aur phir chala jaye ga tera yeh halki dari bikhray baal.

Yeh humara kuch nahi bigar sakta..

birlas got down and everyone was meeting eachother.

suhani was searching for yuvraj who wasnt seen in all .

yuvraj peeked out from the train door , finally he was back in Allahbaad, his city.

he got down and met both bharat uncle and pankaj uncle who was extremely happy to see him.

yuvraj hugged both of them

suhani and somya who were standing a little away were looking at him

somya: halki dari bikhray baal is finally here .

suhani just smiled thinking what yuvraj told her in the mail

"tasveer ki kia zarorat hai tumhari tasveer to meray dil mai chapi hai mai toh tumhy dekhty hi pehchan jaon ga"

Suhani shooked her head thinking "aisa bhi kabhi hota hai"

yuvraj turned to look at two girls standing .

one was wearing long skirt and shirt and other was wearing salwar suit.

yuvraj started to walk towards them. both somya and suhani got nervous.

yuvraj walked past somya and stood infront of suhani.

suhani couldnt believe that he really recognized her.

how can he.

Suhani was shocked

yuvraj looked at suhani amd smiled : somya?

he asked and suhani got hit by reality that she wasnt somya.

This name wasn't hers

suhani shooked her head to yuvraj whose expression changed as his heart voiced out something else .

suhani signalled him towards somya .

suhani: she is somya. hi i am suhani.

yuvraj blinked twice and gave a half smile turning towards somya.

yuvraj: hi i know you must be hurt that i said that i would recognize you but sorry

he said and hugged somya who got startled she dint hugged back and looked at suhani shooking her head

suhani turned around holding her emotions

yuvraj: i missed you somya .

suhani gulped her emotions and whispered: I missed you too yuvraj

and turned around

suhani: aur humay? humay miss ni kia?

yuvraj looked at her : suhani? Right this time?

did missed you.

He accepted

pratima came towards suhani who bend and took her ashirvad

pratima: suhani toh meri pyari bachi hai.

yuvraj looked at somya who just did a namastay while his mother blessed her.

suhani: aunty ji humny apky hath ky parathy bht miss kiye. bhoolay ni hum.

somya: haan aunty suhani always missed your food.khana kabhi nahi bhulti yeh madam

pratima smiled

yuvraj: aur tum what did you missed?

somya got silent while suhani's smile got affected.

she didnt knew why it all affected her

somya: i miss people who are worth of missing

suhani: ehum ehum ... iska matlab hai miss toh unhy kia jata hai jinko bhulaya jaye..

somya glared at her

saurabh: hi suhani hi somya. mujhy aj bhi tum dono ki wohi memory zehan mai ati hai jab tum dono crackies say darty thy

anuj: i remember that too aur mai jaan bojh ky inko darata tha.

suddenly a dog came barking towards them suhani got startled and held onto yuvraj's arm who looked at her , her touch was soothing. There was somethng different in her touch

suhani: yeh toh snoopi hai na..

she blurt it out .

yuvraj once told her about snoopi.

yuvraj looked at her stunned how did she know maybe somya somya told her

somya hid behind suhani: dur karo is kutay ko. aplog dog bhi laye hn oh God.

Yuvraj: kuta nahi somya his name is snoopi

Sharad: yvraj bhaiya ka khaas hai

Somya made a disguted face

pankaj: chalo sab ghar chalty hn baki batein baad mai karty hn ap log thak gaye hongy.

all moved except yuvraj amd sharad.

yuvraj was confused

sharad: guru kia howa?

yuvraj: nothing just somya isnt somya i mean mujhy laga jab usko dekho ga toh kuch alag feel hoga but nahi i mean

sharad: email pay batein karna aur amny samny milna doo alag batein hn thora wakt doo unko.

yuvraj nodded. both of them moved.

it was decided that there will be a pooja in the house in evening. yuvraj was in his room. he was thinking about somya and suhani

when bhavna entered

bhavna: hi yuvraj

yuvraj: bhavna?

bhavna: ya.. (she smiled) i am sorry mujhy kaam tha isliye lainy a ni pai. abhi abhi i met everyone socha tumsay bhi mil lu?

yuvraj: no problem . everything and everyone has changed look at you . bigger and prettier .

bhavna laughed.

bhavna: thankyou yuvraj. acha shaam ko milty hn pooja mai abhi maa ki help karni hain chalty hn

yuvraj: bhavna?

Bhavna: hmmm?

Yuvraj: wo sya and suhani ...

Bhavna noticed his facial expressions changed

Yuvraj: nothing tum jao

she turned to go when she clashed with sharad.

both bhavna and sharad looked at eachother.

bhavna looked down

bhavna: sorry

and she moved out while sharad was just lost.

yuvraj noticed it and cleared his throat. sharad looked at him

sharad: kia?

yuvraj: kia?

sharad: guru...

yuvraj: sharad

sharad: guru tum somya say milay

yuvraj: ghar akay ni i was just thinking of meeting.

sharad: toh jao...

yuvraj went out just to stop at the terrace just to see suhani playing with little kids. she looked like a baby playing with kids. laughing with them. there was something in her laugh, something in her eyes, something in her touch...

oh God yuvraj mentally slapped himself

yuvraj: somyaaa...

he told himself...

so ppl how was that?

Agay jakay its not totally mujshe dosti karogi

Its something else

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