my first OS pls do read

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Hi guys i have tried of writing something this is my first short story hope you guys like it. It was their anniversary, and Suhani was waiting for her husband Yuvraj to show up.
Things had changed since their marriage, the once cute couple couldn't-live-without-each-other had turned bitter.
Fighting over every little things, both didn't like the way things had changed.
Suhani was waiting to see if Yuvraj remembered it was their anniversary!
Just as the door bell rang she ran to find her husband wet and smiling with a bunch of flowers in his hand.
The two started re-living the old days. Making up for fights, then was d plan for champagne, light music And it was raining outside! It was perfect.
But the moment paused when the phone in the bedroom rang.
Suhani went to pick it up and it was a man. "Hello ma'am I'm calling from the police station. Is this Mr Yuvraj Birla's number?"
"Yes it is!"
"I'm sorry ma'am; but there was an accident and a man died.
We got this number from his wallet; we need you to come and identify his body."
Suhani's heart sank.!!! She was shocked!
But my husband is here with me?"
"Sorry ma'am, but the incident took place at 2 pm, when he was boarding the train."
Suhani was about to lose her conscience.
How could this happen?!
She had heard about the soul of the person coming to meet a loved one before it leaves!
She ran into the other room.
He was not there. It was true! had left her for good!!
Oh God she would have died for another chance to mend every little fight! She rolled on the floor in pain. She lost her chance! Forever!
Suddenly there was a noise from the bathroom, the door opened and Yuvraj came out and said "Darling, I forgot to tell you my wallet got stolen today".
LIFE MIGHT NOT GIVE YOU A SECOND CHANCE. SO NEVER WASTE A MOMENT WHEN YOU CAN STILL MAKE UP FOR YOUR WRONGS!!!
so guys pls do comment and I am ready for all your juttas but please do comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
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that was a lovely os dear
I liked the anticlimax very much😆
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Originally posted by: shamil

that was a lovely os dear

I liked the anticlimax very much😆


Thanks 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice, well written, Short and sweet
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nimmu96

Nice, well written, Short and sweet


Thanks dear well I know it's a disaster 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashleyluvtv


Thanks dear well I know it's a disaster 😕


It's really very well written👏
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aww how adorable very nice chapter
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Originally posted by: sandiab

aww how adorable very nice chapter

thanks Sandi dear ❤️
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[QUOTE=nimmu96]
It's really very well written👏
[/QUOTE ] ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its very cute... liked it 👍🏼

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