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I think what could be a beautiful romantic tale is getting worse day by day!
Give Su some personality and for godssake discard those pukish clothes which normally even the maid at the middle class Su's house won't touch..ill-fitting, badly stitched huge tents which in no way reflect anything that a Bank Officer's kid would wear even in a dream.
Get her smart, stylish and out of the intial kiddish-ness..everyone grows up at some point...show how she did by revamping the whole story.
Get her out of the house and out of that sick maid's role..get her to some real-world work and keep the vamps guessing for a bit...It's quite clear that she looks quite a star when a little better groomed..make up doesn't have to mean skin-lightening...just let her be well-groomed and nicely dressed at least! none I know would be seen dead in the type of clothes she's wearing of late.
let her speak normally for godssake! she's long-winded without any purpose and getting to be pointless at best!
You initially showed her as smart!
Why? A smart girl (even an average) who can string a few events together to arrive at conclusion otherwise, not doing anything about : all the warnings by 'Maa', 'Sharath' and even 'Yuvraj' and constant angry, un-guestly and thankless and interfering behavious from dearest friend 'Somu' and constant verbal and other attacks by 'Rags', 'Nani' & 'Menaka' not awakening any self-respect in her?
If she were an absolute idiot even then, by now she would create some routine and a goal and strive in excelling in that... and keep outta the trouble makers way ATLEAST. since, you are showing her as not having any gumption at countering anything.
Please guys do something for us - the audience that followed so far! To be honest, the way this track is shaping up of late is absolute crap!
Few Ideas...
Let dadi throw out Su and let Yu follow and let them start their life as a smart and sweet couple elsewhere.
with Yuvi waking up to the fact that each class has its own charm and the ability to buy lot of clothes is not the beginning & end of the world! Make him somewhat a less wasted person if not outright hardworking!
OR
let that school teacher Businessman to whom Su gave a presentation offer her a plum post and keep her on her toes being smart and doing great work..it will allow you guys to still keep the vampinas busy and sharath go about protecting and Somu can get back to her cafe job which she seemed to be quite good at! and romance Krishna minus the in-laws and rekindle her married life...it wasn't so bad for Somu with the hubby cooking and trying his best to please her in her initial days of marriage...or show her as pregnant with krishna's child and make her go back to him. just do something!
btw you initially started 'Suhani' as a dark but nice-looking and smart girl. I am not sure why she's now shown as dark, ugly, terribly dressed and super-dumb after marrying a super-rich man!
Are you saying that plain girls that marry into richer families suddenly become ragged maids? Don't you think that the audience won't buy this logic beyond a certain point?
Yet otherwise another idea here-
Let Suhani wake up to the reason behind Somu's behaviour. Let her assume that Yuv is only pitying her and not really loving her. You can show that Yuv in the meanwhile actually did start caring for her and loves her. Let her go off to her parents place and with her father supporting her. She can get into a job, get a chance to use her brains a bit, become smart along the way...with 'Su' not around and 'Somu' still at her antics and 'Yuv' not responding...dadi hopefully will get tired of all of this and send off the pregnant 'Somu' to Krishna...She can offer him a job as compensation to Somu losing her modelling job.
Or Whatever...but please do get Su to use her brains and show her as human being and not some sort of a rag mopping about!
Give Su some personality and for godssake discard those pukish clothes which normally even the maid at the middle class Su's house won't touch..ill-fitting, badly stitched huge tents which in no way reflect anything that a Bank Officer's kid would wear even in a dream.
Get her smart, stylish and out of the intial kiddish-ness..everyone grows up at some point...show how she did by revamping the whole story.
Get her out of the house and out of that sick maid's role..get her to some real-world work and keep the vamps guessing for a bit...It's quite clear that she looks quite a star when a little better groomed..make up doesn't have to mean skin-lightening...just let her be well-groomed and nicely dressed at least! none I know would be seen dead in the type of clothes she's wearing of late.
let her speak normally for godssake! she's long-winded without any purpose and getting to be pointless at best!
You initially showed her as smart!
Why? A smart girl (even an average) who can string a few events together to arrive at conclusion otherwise, not doing anything about : all the warnings by 'Maa', 'Sharath' and even 'Yuvraj' and constant angry, un-guestly and thankless and interfering behavious from dearest friend 'Somu' and constant verbal and other attacks by 'Rags', 'Nani' & 'Menaka' not awakening any self-respect in her?
If she were an absolute idiot even then, by now she would create some routine and a goal and strive in excelling in that... and keep outta the trouble makers way ATLEAST. since, you are showing her as not having any gumption at countering anything.
Please guys do something for us - the audience that followed so far! To be honest, the way this track is shaping up of late is absolute crap!
Few Ideas...
Let dadi throw out Su and let Yu follow and let them start their life as a smart and sweet couple elsewhere.
with Yuvi waking up to the fact that each class has its own charm and the ability to buy lot of clothes is not the beginning & end of the world! Make him somewhat a less wasted person if not outright hardworking!
OR
let that school teacher Businessman to whom Su gave a presentation offer her a plum post and keep her on her toes being smart and doing great work..it will allow you guys to still keep the vampinas busy and sharath go about protecting and Somu can get back to her cafe job which she seemed to be quite good at! and romance Krishna minus the in-laws and rekindle her married life...it wasn't so bad for Somu with the hubby cooking and trying his best to please her in her initial days of marriage...or show her as pregnant with krishna's child and make her go back to him. just do something!
btw you initially started 'Suhani' as a dark but nice-looking and smart girl. I am not sure why she's now shown as dark, ugly, terribly dressed and super-dumb after marrying a super-rich man!
Are you saying that plain girls that marry into richer families suddenly become ragged maids? Don't you think that the audience won't buy this logic beyond a certain point?
Yet otherwise another idea here-
Let Suhani wake up to the reason behind Somu's behaviour. Let her assume that Yuv is only pitying her and not really loving her. You can show that Yuv in the meanwhile actually did start caring for her and loves her. Let her go off to her parents place and with her father supporting her. She can get into a job, get a chance to use her brains a bit, become smart along the way...with 'Su' not around and 'Somu' still at her antics and 'Yuv' not responding...dadi hopefully will get tired of all of this and send off the pregnant 'Somu' to Krishna...She can offer him a job as compensation to Somu losing her modelling job.
Or Whatever...but please do get Su to use her brains and show her as human being and not some sort of a rag mopping about!
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