LakshMila SS- Their Story

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mina

@minamma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Haayee

Me mar gayi

What a fab updt

Plzz continue soon

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pragprag

@pragprag

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Wow this is an amazing story so far.Plz update,im dying to read the next part😊

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pragprag

@pragprag

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

I luv how u included Malyavan in the story not many writers do that😊

Plz update,Im dying to know what will happen next.

Edited by pragprag - 9 years ago

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daydreamers

@daydreamers

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Srutha first my rants...

Update the index on the first pg 😡 title na sahi pg no. toh de re

Cmn to the story.. It's wow 👏 👏

I have many ideas with these 4 couples but time constraints 😕

Its almost ouch!!! 🤢

I loved the story..

One request and suggestion 😆 pls waste some time on building their bond. I ges u'll be doing the same 😉

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: daydreamers
Srutha first my rants...
Update the index on the first pg 😡 title na sahi pg no. toh de re

Cmn to the story.. It's wow 👏 👏

I have many ideas with these 4 couples but time constraints 😕
Its almost ouch!!! 🤢

I loved the story..

One request and suggestion 😆 pls waste some time on building their bond. I ges u'll be doing the same 😉

Yep. I will be building their bond. Always.
Thank you Jan 😊

I will update soon :P

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daydreamers

@daydreamers

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Srutha check ur pm dabba

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saishree

@Saishree97

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Srutha
First pls update index nah...it always become difficult for me! U know right I m totally a lazy girl...lol!

Coming to the story...

U are an amazing writer! Just love how u have written it yaar...

Yahi toh fierce nature I totally love of urmila! She is the perfect blend of everything...

U have nicely talked about the brothers bonding!

Update soon...
Waiting eagerly

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archana

@sarchanu

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

hi please update soon
i love this story
ur writing is awesome

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shibaniana

@shibaniana

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#49

A lovely start. You know, I don't think many writers portray Urmila as the determined and clever woman she was said to be.. Even in Siya ke ram, Siya and Mandi are painters when in fact, Urmila was, right?

So, I love the way you wrote Urmila; and of course...

Waiting for more 👏

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KCool6419

@KCool6419

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Amazing story so far. I know I am late but please update this story and if possible post it on wattpad. it is amazing and I cant wait to read more. I know you are working on other amazing stories and if you have time please come back to this one and finish

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