SKR OS: Siya Ke Bin Ram

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi!
Writing an OS after a while again!

Here it is...this is based after Sita returns back to mother earth. ...


SKR OS: Siye Ke Bin Ram



Ram walked back into his chamber after a tiring day...handling various issues at the royal court...

But all his tiredness flew away as he saw his twins on the bed...

He went up to them and kissed both...
R: toh?..aaj mere putro ne kya kiya?

K: pitashree...yeh Lav sadaiv mujhe chidhaata hai...kehta hai ki main chota hoon...main sabse chota hoon?
He asked with a cute pout that resembled Sita's he remembered as his eyes moistened at her memory. ...

R: ( taking him on his lap) tumhe gyaat hai aisa mukh kon banata tha?

L&K: kon pitashree?
The two perked up...

R: tumhari mata...
Ram replied with smile that hid his unshed tears...

L& K: ma???
They asked excitedly...

R: hmmm...jab unhe mujhe kisi bhi karan manana ho...yadi main unse kabhi krodhit ho jau...

K: ( sad) pitashree...ma kaha hongi iss samay?
Ram hugged Kush tight...

R: jisprakar tum apni ma ke sanidhya mein rehna chate ho...main apni mao ke usiprakar tumhari ma bhi apni ma Dharti ke sanidhya mein rehna chahti hai...

L: parantu ve hume chodkar kyu chali gayi? ve toh dharti ko bhi hamare saath yaha bula sakti thi na...
Lav asked innocently. ...


R: ummm...Ayodhya tumhara nivaas thaan hai usi prakar dharti unka hai...unhe bhi apne nivas thaan mein...apne ghar mein rehni ki ichcha hoti hoga..haina? aur ma hume chodkar kahi nahi gayi...tumhari ma aur meri Sita yahi hai...yaha...yaha tatha yaha...


He said pointing ay his heart and their hearts...

K: satya pitashree?

Ram nodded with a smile...
R: achcha chalo...dekho kitni raatri hogayi hai...sojao tum dono...


Lav started crying hearing this...
R: Lav?...kya hua putra?
Ram asked picking him up and kissing him...

L: pitashree...ma...sadaiv katha sunaakar sulaati thi...aapki veerta ki katha... parantu ab...

R: main hoon na...tumhe konsi katha sunni hai?

Ram asked making the two lay down on the bed and covered them with a blanket...


K: ma ne Lankapati Ravan ke vadh ki katha sunayi thi...aap hume bataiyye ki aap aur ma ka vivaah kaise hua...

Ram smiled remembering that golden day he got the love of his life whom he eventually fell madly in love with...and when Ravan kidnapped her he had git so mad that he even asked trees and mountains for her whereabouts. ...


R: shaitaan!
Ram pulled Kush's nose...but the too shot him such cute looks that he couldn't refuse...

R: achcha theek hai...
Tumhare taatshree...Raja Janak ne apni putri Sita...ka swayamwar aayojit kiya tha...Sita bhoomija thi arthaat fevi bhoomi ki kok se janmi unki putri jo Raja Janak ko kheto mein hal chalte samay praapt hui thi...

Swayamwar ki shart thi ki jo vyakti Mahadev ke dhanush par pratyancha chadhaayega usika varan tumhari mata karengi...


L: aapne swayam mahadev ke dhanush utha liya? uspar pratyancha bhi chadhayi?

R: haan...parantu mujhse vah dhanush toot gaya...

K: dekha Lav! mere pitashree kitne balshaali hai!!!

L: keval tumhare???? ve mere bhi pitaji hai samjhe... sarvapratham ve mere pitashree hai...


K: mere

L: mere

K: mere

R: arrey bas! main jitna Lav ka pita hoon utna hi Kush ka...

L: samjhe! moorkh!

Kush looked at him with a wide open mouth and Ram & Lav burst out laughing at his expression and Kush angrily turned away and hid underneath the blanket...

R: Kush?

K: nahi...main aap dono se krodhit hoon...
R: achcha?

K: haan...

Ram envoloped him from behind with the blanket...
R: Lav...koi atyadhik krodhit hai...haina?

L: haan..hai toh...

Ram removed the blanket and saw Kush's puffed cheeks...


Ram smiled remebering an old incident. ...

FLASHBACK...

This is after RamSiya return to Ayodhya and Sita is pregnant...

Ram entered their bedchamber with a guilty expression and found his wife glaring at him...

R: ( to himself) tum toh gaye Ram!

Sita felt too strong arms wrap around her waist and a chin rest on her shoulder. ...
Ram caressed her slight baby bump with love...

S: antatah apni iss garbavati patni ka smaran ho aaya Maharaj?

R: Sitae...apne swaami ko shyama nahi karogi...
He asked with a puppy face... .

S: nahi...
Sita replied angrily her pregnancy hormones taking over...

R: abhbhi nahi...
He asks placing a soft kiss on her cheek...

S: ( breaking the hug and facing him with a pout) aap sadaiv mujhe isiprakar manaate hai swaami!

She sulked cutely...

R: tum bhi toh isiprakar maan jaati ho mere priye!
He said naughtily pinching her cheeks softly...

With that she shyly hugged him...

S: mujhe shyama kardijiye swaami...mujhe samajhna chahiye ki aal sarvapratham Ayodhya ke raja hai...uske paschaat mere pati...

R: iss awastha mein aisa hona aam baat hai...
He said kissing his baby bump...
and they started talking about their baby/ babies...



FLASHBACK OVER...




Finally he was able to make both sleep. ...
R: ( caressing Kush's hair) Kush...putra tumhare pitashree itne bhi balshaali nahi...


He said wiping his tears missing Sita so badly...


The night went on as Ram cried himself to sleep...soaking his pillow yet again with his tears of longing...longing of his love...



He had none to share his feelings with...he was the king and had to be strong and set an example. ...only he knew how much he hated himself for abandoning his wife...who was his everything. ...


Some hated him thinking he did wrong to his wife but none saw how much he broke doing that to her...he loved her beyond limits...he had loved her as much as none had ever loved someone. ...



The End😳



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SweetSau thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Di
Such an awesome OS.
You made me cry!😭😭
How can you write such beautiful pieces so perfectly?
Love your writing!
Lots of love
Sayli
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Emotional OS
so touching...indeed none know Ram n his pain...neither anyone ever loved Sita like Ram...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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You are amazingly gifted, as it is I cried with bidai today, now you made me cry..!! Love Ram Siya forever..!! God Bless you dear..!!👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome OS.
Loved it😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A very touching Os Indeed
Could imagine the whole scene being played in front of me 😭😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww...it ws so cute
U made me cry 😭.

Fantastic os, keep writing.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww this was such cutu nd emotional OS .. ❤️

you brought tears in my eyes


And just like SiRa Luv Kush r choo adorable .. luved the FB scene of SiRa ..

dont knw how SKR going to handle this track but while reading i was thinking about SKR SiRa only .. hope to get something similar like this 😊
Edited by Thushi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hai.
Really I have no words. Only. Tears Amazing and touching.
The line. Of ram tum are pitashrre itne bhi bhalshalee nahi hai
Just have no words. The. Pain. 👏👏👏Superb. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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first of all hii dear..
i am new to this forum
i really loved sira aka ashish and madirakshi
loved your peace of writing
its truly awesome

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