SS : akward first night

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Posted: 9 years ago
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its was their turn
kaushalya- chalo lakshman an tumhari Baari, tumhare dono Bhaiyo ne to apne upar apni biwiyo ka rajya maan liya. aangutihi(ring) dhundne ki rasam mai apni biwiyo se haar gaye , an tum dono mai kispe kiska rajya chalta hai yeh dekhna hai.

lakshman & urmila dono apna hath milk ki thali mai dalte hai , aur ring search karate hai , suddenly unke hath apas me touch karta hai , they have a small eye lock with a mischievous look in both pairs of eyes.

urmila - hume mil gayi , chirply said , suddenly realised atmosphere around her , become silent.

Shanta - lo ma lakshman ko bhi apne upar apni patni ka rajya manye hai (all laughs )

sumitra - (in her mind ) I so happy ki urmila ki shadi lakshman se hui as she consider urmila as crispy cirpy bird who will show lakshman beauty of life with following ur duty.

after rasam everyone departed 2 their chambers including newly wedded brides.

lakshman's chamber:-

it was beautifully decorated with all kind of flowers specially roses , aroma of flowers were covering d room, with moonlight coming from d chamber windows make a d room perfect 4 first night.on king size bed with rose petals covering it, newly bride urmila was sitting with netted veil covering her face fully. she was continuously looking at d enterance door as any moment he may came in , by thinking this she blush.

apne kesh ( hairs ) ko bandhane , ka matlab kisi she bandhjana hai , ek mate rishte ko aapnana hai, ab tum apne kesh sirf apne pati ke samane kholna kisi aur ke samane nhi samjhi , remembering her mother's words she blushed heavily.
suddenly entrance door open , lakshman entered , he saw urmila sitting on d his bed , he corrected their bed waiting 4 him decked in bridely attire , he turned , closed d door , started moving towards bed , seeing him coming 2 bed urmila started getting nervous but Lakshman sat opposite side of d bed , there was awkwardness b/w them . before marriage lakshman had kept his condition before urmila which she accepted it. before this night , they always use 2 fight with each other on silly things , use 2 pull legs & tease each other but today equation changed now they r life partners . there was silence in d room both of them don't know how 2 start a talk
"thak gaye ho ge na" !! suddenly both said this together , ending d silence burst out laughing
L- thak gayi ho gi aaram kar lo
he left 4 changing , while urmila starts 2 remove her jewellery. after some time he returned in simple silk dhoti only saw urmila struggling with her necklace which got stuck in her hairpin. urmila suddenly felt 2 hands helping her as she saw lakshman in d mirror of dressingtable, they have a eye contact , while lakshman removes d hairpin , opening her hairs , suddenly urmila looses her balance but lakshman catches her . only urmila know what a lady will feel when she is in strong arms of lakshman , she running her hand on his bare chest. lakshman removes d long tresses from urmila's face which were blocking his view. he caress her cheeks with his thumb.
L- u look beautiful with open hairs.
Edited by deepikagupta9 - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing start !!!!!!
Loved LakshMila 😉
Plzzz give next part asap 😃
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Nice start.
Continue soon nd add me to ur PM list
Dnt want to miss out ny update
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super awsum start...bang on👏...seems interesting...do continue soon😊
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Very interesting... Please continue soon
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A great start!!!!
Loved it.

Please do continue.
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Lovely start !!
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I enjoy such stories as much as any other person but I think we should refrain from writing such stories about God like people such as Lakshman and Ram. Does anyone else feel the same ?
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Plzzz update next part !!!!!
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great start...
please update the next part soon

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