SKR SS: Newly Married! ~|| Chapter 10 : page 20 ||~ - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a lovely update
From where to Start... Ram n Sita taking care of each others needs...OMG Urmila want to have 6 kids 😆 Laxman's reaction was worth watching 🤣
Awww SiRa they are so cute
Hehehe Laxman's dialogue 'Tum shishu se kam thodi ho.. tumhe sambhalne ke liye tou mujhe puraskar dena chahiye' 🤣
Loved it
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb. It ws vry cute.
Urmi ko 6 bache 🤣.

U made me cry on last line. 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely story thankya fr the update 😳 pls give next update soon sooner soonest 🥳 🤔 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
All the eight parts were superb.
You are an amazing writer

Do continue the lovely updates.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
please update soon di
i am eagerly waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful scenes ❤️ So wish to see them on SKR also
Sad part which you mentioned Ram not able to play with his own kids..

I love reading your story..so can you please send me PM too, so that
I don't miss them 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai. Very romantic updates. Please. Update the next part soon waiting eagerly. Thank u😛
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please update soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry sorry sorry!!!!!
I know I'm very late...but kya karu yeh hospital waale!😡 anyways...I hope u guys like this...I'll really try to update soon...
Showwieee!* baby face*


Chapter 9:


Ram and Sita were still playing with the child when Dashratb and and Kaushalya saw them and went up to them...

R&S: pranam pitaji, ma...
the two greeted them with the baby's soft hand caressing Ram's cheek...

D: tum dono iss shishu ke saath atyant prem se khel rahe ho...iska tatparya jaanti hai Maharani?

K: ji...tatparya?

D: ki mere potra ko iss vishv ke shresht v sarvatha adhik prem karne wale mata-pita praapt honge...kyu?
He raised a naughty eyebrow at the two...


Ram and Sita were blushing like anything. ...as if there was no tomorrow to blush again...

K: ( teasing) Maharaj...bas bhi kijiye...dono ke mukh dekhiye...laal hogaye hai...

With that they left the blushing couple alone...


Next came the other teasing party. ...
Ur: jijashree mujhe toh aisa aabhass hota hai ki aap vishv ke shresht pita banenge...main na apni chah ki chah ( 6) santaano ko unke mausa-mausi ke paas hi rakhungi...sumitra nandan se aasha rakhne ka koi arth nahi...

L: kya? aapka tatparya kya hai?

Ur: ( sympathetic face) nahi vo kya haina aapki naasika par krodh ka sadaiv vaas hota hai na kahi mere chote chote putra-putri aapko dekhkar palayan na kar jaaye...

Lakshman looked bewildered. ...and the others ( including Ram and Sita) covered their mouths or else they'd have laughed badly clutching their stomachs...

L: haan haan kabhi swayam ka mookh dekha hai?

Now it was Urmila's turn to be wide mouthed...
Ur: aap na...huhhh!!!!
She said and looked away angrily and so did Lakshman...

Ram and Sita looked at each other and sighed...as if saying " kya karen inn dono ka!"



Just then Sumitra came there...
Su: Lakshman...kyu meri putri ko chidhaane ki cheshtha kar rahe ho?

L: main??
He asked pissed off by now...

Su: aur nahi toh kya...dekho bechaari kitni murjha gayi hai...

L: arrey waah!! toh ek kaam karte hai aap apni iss pyaari putri ke saath rahiye...main chala!

Lskshman stormed off angrily leaving a perplexed Sumitra behind...

Su: Ram..ise kya hua?

R: kuch nahi mata...keval thoda chidh gaya hai...main use baat karta hoon aap chintit na hoiyye...

Su: avashya...tumhare hote kaisi chinta...
She said cupping his cheek fondly...


Su: achcha...main yah batane aayi thi ki Maharaj v Kaushalya didi aap sabhi ko bula rahi hai...

S: ji mata...hum jaate hai...aapka dhanyawaad...
Sita replied politely...


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R: ma? pitaji? aapne bulaya?

D: haan...putra main aur tumhari mata soch rahe the ki aaj sandhya mein ek samarav ka aayojan kiya jaaye...

R: kis karan? aaj koi vishesh divas hai kya?

D: ( laughed) nahi putra...parantu main chahta hoon ki main Ayodhya ke bhaavi Maharaj v Maharani ko vishv ke samaksh ghoshit karu...bas isiliye...

All looked happy as happy whispers broke out...
Bh: yah toh atyant shubh samachaar hai Pitashree! Ram bhaiyya...aapke vastra main hi tayyar karunga!
He said making Manthara clench her fists...

D: meri ichcha hai ki main sanast vishv mein...humare sabhi sambhandiyo ke samaksh inn dono ko Ayodhya ke bhavishya ke roop mein prastut karu...

Su: avashya hi isse uttam kya hoga Maharaj? chaliye didi ( to Kaushalya & Kaikeyi) hum tayyariyaan aarambh kar dete hai? samay hi kitna shesh hai?

All sisters: Sita didi hum sabhi aapko tayyar karengi!!!
They sqeauled excitedly...

The next few hours were soent fussing over the two...

Bharat's chamber...

Bh: bhaiyya...aaj aap iss haar ko dharan kijiye...

L: aur yah kade...

Sh: yah kundal ...

R: offohhh! bas bhi karo tum teeno! mera vivaah nahi hai! kitna sajaoge ab!
He spoke bored of this constant ye pehniye vo pehniye...


L: arrey kyu? bhaiyya aap Ayodhya ke bhaavi raja hai. .

Ram just shook his head and surrendered...


R: jaisi tum teeno ki ichcha... iss vishay par toh aadesh toh door ki baat mera nivedan bhi sweekar nahi karoge tum...

L: bilkul sahi...toh ab chaliye...isse dharan kijiye...



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"Daasi kripya vo laal odhni la dijiye!"
Urmila's bubbly voice echoed in the room...


S: Urmila tumhe gyaat haina mujhe adhik shringaar pasand nahi...

Ur: nahi didi! aaj hum aapki kaya palat denge! aur jijashree aap ko dekhkar stabd hojaayenge...

Sita shook her head...


S: aaj aisa punah prateet ho raha hai mano humara punar vivah ho...
She laughed to herself. ...



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K: putra aaj tumhe dekhne waala har vyakti mantramugdh hojayega...
She said caressing his face...Ram smiled and held her hand that was on his face...


The tinkling of anklets made him turn his face towards thr source of the sound...that is when his wotld froze seeing his wife looking like a heavenly beauty who'd just descended on earth...

She stood there dressed in a heavy maroonish outfit heavily embroidered with golden threads and embedded with precious stones...her long silken tresses curled into an elaborate hairstyle decked with fragrant flowers. ...


Sita blushed at his intense gaze and lowered her eyes...adjusting her veil properly. ...

L: kuch aur der bhaabhi ko isprakasr dekhte rahe na toh ve bhaag jaayengi...

Ram immediately moved his gaze...coughing awkwardly. ...


Sita gave a shy smile as she started walking towards Ram & Kaushalya...
She shivered as her slender arm brushed his strong muscular one...


She bent to touch Kaushalya's feet and was recieved by a motherly hug from her...

K: putri tum atyant sundar lag rahi ho...aaj toh purnah vishwaas hogaya mujhe ki tum dono ki jodi swarg mein bani hai...

She said making Sita blush...Sita slowly walked to her husband and stoof beside him...
Ram looked at her and so did she but immediately looked down unable to meet his loving gaze...


The two were escorted to the elevated platform where there were thrones arranged for the two of them as well as the Maharaj and Maharani...


Manthara seethed in anger as she saw Ram and Sita and Dashrath and Kaushalya on the thrones. ...


Ram smiled at his shy wife and inched closer to her ear and whispered...

R: aap aaj atyadhik sundar lagrahi hai...Sitae...
He whispered lovingly...


S: swaami...aap yaha...


R: iska arth hai ki kahi orr karne ki anumati hai mujhe?
He asked naughtily...


Sita's mouth was wide open...
S: j...ji...m..mera vah tatparya...n..nahi tha...


R: ( naughty) mujhe apna taatparya samjhaayengi?
He teased...making her pout slightly...


K: putra...iss sab ke liye har vivahit jode ke paas apna kaksh hota hai...smaran haina?...tum aajkal atyadhik shaitaan hogaye ho...kyu meri bechari putri ko chidha rahe ho...
She said holding his ear...making him smile...


Today not just the guests but all of Ayodhya was well...to meet their beloved Princes and their wives persnally specially their eternal favourite Ram...


All the three queens looked at each other...smiling...
Kk: dekhiye na didi...kitne prasann hai humane 4 putro v unki vadhue...

K: haan Kaikeyi...aur Ram toh adhik natkhat hogaya hai...Sita ke aagman ke pashchaat...

Su: Lakshman bhi...ek avsar nahi gavaata apne priya bhaiyya-bhaabhi ko chidhaane ka ...

Kk: haan...Bharat bhi...pehle itna shaant hua karta tha aur ab...inhe pustak likhni chahiye...Ram bhaiyya aur Sita bhaabhi ko chidhaane ke sarvottam upay!!!


With that all three started laughing. ...

Dashrath coukd do nothing but dmile at his family...
D: gurudev...ab toh bas mere Ram ke raaja banne ki der hai...aapne dekha hai ki samast Ayodhya use kitna prem karti hai...Ram unse kitna prem karta hai...

V: tumhara kathan sarvatha uchit hai putra...Ayodhya inn dono jaise Maharaj aur Maharani paakar dhanya hojaayegi ... Ram aur Sita jaise Raaja-Raani v pati patni na kabhi the na bhavishya mein honge...( to himself)Narayan v devi Lakshmi ne Ayodhya ko apne aagman se pavitra kardiya hai...


S: pitaji!
Sita gasped seeing Janak and Sunaina along with Kushadwaj and Chandrabhaaga...

Ram smiled to see a childlike glee in her eyes...
Janak reached where they were sitting and greeted Ram with joined hands...but Ram held their hands...

R: mata-pita ke haath pranaam karte hue nahi apitu apne putra ko aashirwaad dete hue hi shobha dete hai...


All they could do was look at him proudly. ...
Sun: aap jaisa putra praapt hona saubhagya hai Kaushalya nandan...
She said caressing his cheek with motherly love...making him smile...


Sita was touched to see that her husband cobsidered her parents as his...it was mandatory for a girl to accept her husband's parents..like it or not...but here her husband too accepted hers and treated them just as he would treat his...



S: mujhe kabhi kabhi aabhaas hota hai ki main itni bhagtashaali kisprakaar hogayi jo aap mujhe apne jeevan saathi ke roop mein mile...meri maata ka utanhi sammaan karte hai aap jitna aap mata Kaushalya, mata Sumitra v mata Kaikeyi ka karte hai...



R: jisprakaar mata Kaushalya,mata Sumitra v mata Kaikeyi meri maatae hai...aapki maatae hai kya usiprakar mata Sunaina v aapki choti ma bhi meri maatae nahi?


Sita couldn't help but smile...as tears of happiness filled her doe eyes...



The function went well and all kings and others even thise jealous of bkt being able to win Sita had to admire the divine couple. ...



RamSiya chamber...

S: swaami main aapse ek karan se rusht hoon...

R: kis karan Sitae? aapka mujhse rusht hona mere liye asehniya hoga...

S: aap aajkal mujhe atyadhik chidhaane lage hai...

Ram made a sorry face and knelt doen before her...and held his ears cutely...

R: mujhe shyama kardijiye Sitae...

Sita panicked and immediately and held his hands before he could complete his sentence. ...

S: aap isprakar shyama mat maangiye swaami ...
She said still holding his hands...

R: parantu aapko chidhaane mein bada aanand aata hai!
He completed naughtily making Site give him a *haww* look and looking away...making him laugh and pull her closer. ...

R: aap jaanti hai mujhe aanand kyu aata hai?

S: kyu?
Sita asked him still pouting...

R: kyunki aapka yah mukh ( hinting at her pouting face) mujhe atyant priya hai...aap bohot pyaari lagti hai.. .
He said slightly poking her her soft puffed cheek...
and the the two broke into laughter...


S: aap jaante hai mujhe kya priya hai?

R: kya?

S: ye...
She said touching his dimple that came as he smiled...

R: maine kabhi apni jevansangini ke vishay mein vichaar hi nahi kiya...maine socha ki mere maata pita jise meri patni chunenge main use hi apbi jeevansangini ka sthaan dunga...parantu yadi ki hogi toh avashya aapki tarah hi hoti...apne swatantra vichaaro waali...


Sita blushed...
S: maine sadaiv aap jaise pati ki kaamna ki hai...jinki ardhangini ka sthaan keval mera ho...jo keval ek baar prem kare...mujhse...
She said shyly. ...making him smirk...


R: aap har roop mein sundarta ko punah paribhaashit karti hai priye...parantu aapko mera aapka sabse adhik priya roop gyaat hai?


S: ji?
Sita asked confusedly...


Ram just gave her his serene smile and held her shoulders turning her against him...
Sita felt shy as she felt his hands unpinning her heavy veil...


He slowly removed it to reveal her beautiful tresses decked with flowers curled in an elaborate hairstyle...
She breathed sharply as he started removing the flowers from her hair...


Soon the silken brown threads fell into his palns like a cascading waterfall...he placed them on her back...

With that he turned her towards him...
R: iss roop mein...
He said as she felt herself smile shyly...feeling very shy of her husband. ...


S: j..ji..main..vastra badalkar aati hoon...
She said hurriedly and just ran away feeling so very shy...Ram just smiled at his shy wife...


R: iss bhaavna ka aabhaas mujhe keval aapke saath hi hota hai. meri Sitae...mujhe gyaat nahi ki yah kya hai...parantu jo bhi hai... keval aapse hai...aapke liye hai...
He admitted...



Next morning. ...
R: main aasha karta hoon...mera yeh uphaar aapke hruday ko bhaajaayega Sitae...he smiled as he held the silken bag to his heart...

His eyes drifted to her sleeping figure besides him and he smiled...
R: na jaane kyu aapko aanandit kar mujhe swayam hi aanand aata hai...mera hriday prafullit ho uthta hai aapki hasi dekhkar...
He whispered not wanting to wake her up...caressing her hair ever so gently. ...


Kk: ise prem kehte hai putra!

Ram got up as he saw Kaikeyi approach...
R: pranam mata...
He said a bit softly. ...


Kk: ajay raho putra!
She said moving her hand through his hair...


R: aap iss samay...aapne kasht kyu kiya mujhe bulva leti ...
He said since the sun too hadn't risen as yet...



Kk: kasht kaisa Ram...achcha tanik pare hato main bhi toh apni soti vadhu ko dekhoon...


She said and walked across him and smiled seeing the sleeping Sita cuddled into the pillow. ...


She turned towards Ram and that is when she noticed something in his hands...
Kk: tumhare haatho mein kya hai?
She asked and Ram embarrassingly showed her the packet...


Kk: yah chooriyaan aur gajra mere liye..haina Ram?
She teased and Ram smiled getting the hint...

Kk: ( patting his cheek) Parihaas kar rahi thi! Sita atyant prasann hogi!

She smiled before leaving. ...


Ram retreated back to his place besides Sita and sat down..once again caressing her hair with love...




TBC😃






Edited by akyabiggestfan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful superb update
loved it
loved the SiyaRam moment so beautiful n their siblings ...their bonding
loved it

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