contributing some shayari

hey guys, i am a new member at she O shayri and i would like to contribute some of my own shayri, i hope you all like it and plz do comment, even if there is anything wrong with it, coz feedback is the only way i will get better

*Ek umeed ka diya jalaya tha aapke pyar ko pane ko,
Par adhura reh gaya mera sapna ek hone ko,
Yaad karte hain hum aapki yaadon ko
Aur barsa dete hain in aansuon ko…*

*Door ho kar bhi tum kabhi door nahin huwe
Tum har waqt dil mein ehsaas ban kar mojhood jo rahe
Dhukh is baat ka nahin ke hum tumein paa na sake
Dukh to is bhaat ka hai ke bhichar kar bhi hum tumein bhula na sake*

*Bewafa log, wafa nibate hain duniya ke dikhave ke liye Par wo nadhan itna bhi nahin samajhte ke yeh Allah ki taraf se bahana hai unke dil mein payar jagaane ke liye*

*Kinaron ke beech mein dariya behte hain…jo mohabhat karte hain, na to unko kinara milta hai, aur naa hi unki pyas bhujti hai.*

*Zindagi bewafaa hai, Najane kab dokha dekar chali jayegi, Asli dosti to mot ne nibhayi hai, Kyun ke ek din zaroor ayegi… (Without any shaq)*

i hope you enjoyed my written work, and plz do not forget to comment, thank you 😊

nice shayari 👏 👏 keep it up!!

realy liked this one:

*Door ho kar bhi tum kabhi door nahin huwe
Tum har waqt dil mein ehsaas ban kar mojhood jo rahe
Dhukh is baat ka nahin ke hum tumein paa na sake
Dukh to is bhaat ka hai ke bhichar kar bhi hum tumein bhula na sake*

they were great/...
thanks for sharing... 😉

awwww they were awesome 😛