My First Poem - Please Read and Comment

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello

This is my first poem. I hope you all like it. Please comment!!! Good or Bad...PLEASE COMMENT!!! 😳

Blindness
nothingness,
all around me.
I hate it,
but do I have a choice?
no.
being blind is not a choice.
who would want,
nothingness,
emptiness,
darkness.
and most of all,
blindness.

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bazingaaa thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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No Comments!! Is it that bad!! [:'(]
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Posted: 12 years ago
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as a beginner ...nice attempt !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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As u say its ur first 1 realli good done !

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