Breakup to Patch up - Shakhi TS

Hey guys,

I was really frustrated with the track, not seeing SS onscreen for so long and the never-ending family drama instead of fun-filled college days.. Bas likh dia aise he because I want the Goa track to end already.. Man kare to padhna.. Offend ho jaao to gali de dena.. Achi na laage to apni ending bana lena..

Backstory- SS was kidnapped by some resturant staff since they saw him in a bad state and knew how much he spent during birthday party.. Vinit's involvement was limited to just knowing that SS is gayab and trying to make easy money..

SS was found by Ahir and his family was informed who took him to villa.. All kidnappers were arrested, Vinit was arrested for domestic violence and ransom call.. Ahir informed Anokhi that SS was found.. Anokhi went to Villa to meet SS and as usual was stopped by BM door pe..

A- Mai unse ek baar mile bina nahi jaaungi.. Aap unko bula dijiye.. Ek baar baat kar lungi to chupchap chali jaungi..

Anokhi was frustrated.. Frustrated with everything and everyone.. The more she tried to control her feelings and herself, she was dragged into the hole of despair more.. She had no chance of winning in the situation.. Either of the choices handed her defeat.. She couldn't choose him and feel secure, she couldn't let go of him and stay happy.. Why was everything so complicated in her life?? She would just see him once and then stay away or atleast that is what she told herself..

BM- Dekho tum abhi isi waqt yahan se chali jao.. Mera beta kaafi muskilo ke baad hume mila hai.. Bahut kuch ho gaya uske saath pichle dino tumhari wajah se.. Lekin ab mai uske saath kuch galat nahi hone dungi, samjhi tum..

Astha- Bhabi aap Anokhi ko in sab ka zimmedar kaise bol sakti hai.. Usse is baar mai kuch pata bhi nahi tha..

Astha was pained.. She saw Anokhi at the same position where she stood 25 years ago.. Humiliated, helpless, misunderstood and alone, forced to make choices that would change her life and make her unhappy forever.. The circumstances and relations might be different but the pain and dejection she saw in Anokhi's eyes reminded her of another woman who was forced to choose between two choices that broke her..

BM- Tum apni wakalat apne ghar pe karna.. Ye mera ghar hai.. Yahan kaun aa sakta kaun nahi wo mai decide karungi.. Tum yahan sirf isiliye khadi ho qki tumne mere bete ko janam dia tha aur wo andar beemari ki halat mai so raha hai.. Iska matlab ye nahi hai ki tum kisiko bhi mere ghar ke andar uthake le aaogi..

SS- Badimaa kya ho raha hai??

Shaurya came out of his room on hearing loud noises from the drawing room and saw her or maybe imagined her.. Why would she come to meet him when she was over him?? Why would she come to see him when she didn't bother about him when he was missing?? Why would she care about him when she considers him below her standards??

Shagun had told him everything.. She had given up on him.. She wasn't interested in him anymore.. She had no problems in seeing him with Shagun.. She considered him the guy who wanted to control her future, her ambitions and her especially her.. But wasn't that what he always intended to do, atleast before her.. He might have changed but was it enough for her to fall in love with him or stay in love with him.. Did he make enough efforts for her?? Shaurya tried to remember their interactions in past where he could have proved his intent, trustworthiness and dedication for her, where he could have encouraged her, fought for her and he felt he had tried to do his best in every situation but it hadn't been enough for her.. Not enough for her to love him, trust him.. He had nevet bern enough for anyone..

BM- Shaurya tum q uthke aa gaye beta.. Kuch chahiye tha to mujhe bula lete.. Is haalat mai uthke nahi aana chahiye tha na..

SS- Mai theek hu badimaa.. Aap mujhe ye bataiye Anokhi ghar ke bahar q khadi hai..

BM- Wo beta, wo ladki tumhe pareshan karne aayi hai.. Mai bas usse jaane ke liye bol rahi thi..

SS- Anokhi mujhe pareshan nahi karti hai badimaa, milne aayi hogi wo mujhse.. Aapko ache se pata hai ki kya jagah hai uski mere zindegi mai, phir bhi aap usse aise treat karti hai.. Anokhi chodiye, koi bhi kisi se bhi is ghar mai milne aaye, to kya ye sahi hai ki hum usse ghar ke bahar khada rakhe?

BM- Beta tum samajh nahi rahe ho..

SS- Mai samajh raha hu Badimaa, aapki baat bhi, baaki sabki baat bhi.. But aap nahi samajh rahi ki mujhe hak hai apne faisle lene ka..

BM- Le lena apne faisle, ek baar thik ho jao tab tum sab apne hisab se kar lena, nahi rokungi mai tumhe..

SS- Mai abhi bhi is halat mai hu ki apne faisle le saku.. He turned towards Anokhi and said- Andar aao..

Aapke saamne drawing room mai baat kar raha hu.. Itna to hak hai na mera badimaa..

A- Mai bas aap se baat karne aayi thi.. Wo aap.. Kaisi hai tabiyat??

He looked bruised and beaten.. He looked weak and tired.. What did they do to him in 2 days?? How could be people so cruel to kidnap a sick man and keep him tied just for money?? He looked sad and hopeful.. His eyes called to her.. They made her wish that everything was different.. They made her want to let go of everything and just run to him but she couldn't..

SS- Thik hu mai.. I am fine now.. Aur kuch bolna tha??

A- Wo Vinit Jiju, wo mai..

BM- Acha apne jijaji ki rahai ke liye request karne aayi ho..

A- Nahi aap galat samajh rahe.. Mera aisa koi intention..

SS- Wo yahan Vinit ke liye nahi aayi hai BM..

Koi madat chahiye tumhe Vinit aur Babli ji ke case mai??

A- Nahi wo manage ho gaya, wo jail mai rahenge ab, ACP Ahir ne..

Kya karti hai Nikki, unko ACP Ahir pasand nahi aur tu unhi ki baat kar rahi.. But he didn't seem disturbed or agitated.. He seemed unaffected rather.. Anokhi felt something had changed and didn't know how she felt about it..

A- Mai bas aap se yahi kehna chahti hu ki Di aur mujhe is baare mai kuch pata nahi tha..

SS- I know that.. Tum logo se kisine kuch pucha kya? I mean from the police..

A- Nahi wo..

BM- Shaurya tum jaante nahi ho aisi ladkion ko.. Aisa kaise ho sakta hai ki isse kuch pata nahi tha..

SS- Aap mujhe jaanti hai na? Meri baat pe yakeen hai na? Mere kabiliyat pe yakeen hai na??

BM- Haan beta, mai to bas wo..

SS- To meri baat maan lijiye jab mai bol raha hu ki Anokhi ya Babli ji ka koi involvement nahi tha is kidnapping ya fake ransom call mai..

Kuch aur bhi bolna tha tumhe?

A- Haan wo.. Haan baat karni thi mujhe aapse wo.. Baat karna chahti hu.. Magar..

Anokhi looked around.. How does he expect her to talk to him infront of his entire family about them? Why does he want her to humiliate herself infront of everyone especially when his fiancee was present as well.. She pleaded with her eyes, pleaded him to grant her a private audience where she could pour her heart out, tell everything that was eating her up, tell everything that she always wanted to say..

SS- Thik hai baat karenge hum, but usse pehle mujhe kuch sawalon ke jawab chahiye, aur jawab haan ya na mai chahiye..

A- Kaise sawal?

She tried to read his eyes but it held nothing for her.. They were empty, empty of anything for her..

SS- Kya tumne Shagun aur phir Badimaa se kaha ki tum mujhme interested nahi ho??

Anokhi wanted to lie, lie so badly for the first time in her life, lie for herself, lie for him, lie for them.. She wanted to take her words back but they were already spoken.. Those words hung between them separating them, breaking them..

A- Wo mai..

SS- Haan ya na mai jawab chahiye Ms Bhalla.. I don't think that's too difficult for you to understand..

There was a distant calmness in his voice and she knew it was over for them.. He wasn't angry on her, he wasn't demanding of her and she wanted him to be, wanted him to fight for them..

A- Haan..

SS- Okay.. Okay so you aren't interested in me anymore.. It's fine.. Sab thik hai.. Everything will be fine..

Next question.. Aap iska jawab apne andaz mai de sakti hai.. Jitna bhi kheech ke chaahe.. When did I last ask you to choose between me and your education?? Kab maine tumhe padhne se roka?? Kab meri wajah se tumhari padhai mai problem aayi??

A- Maine aisa nahi bola.. Mera matlab wo nahi tha.. Mai aapse..

SS- Tumne aisa aur bhi bahut kuch bola aur socha hai Anokhi jiska matlab mai dhundne ki kosis kar raha hu.. Apni galti dhund raha hu taaki mere dil ko ye manwa saku ki tum galat nahi ho... Usse ye yakeen dila saku ki tum mujhse pyaar karti ho.. But pyaar karna aur har ehsas ko pyaar samajhne mai farak hota hai..

Chandigarh wapas chali jao Anokhi.. Concentrate on your studies.. Tab mujhse baat karne aana when you are sure, when you have decided..

A- Aap mujhe galat samajh rahe ho.. PS mai..

He looked disappointed in her.. And she felt defeated.. There was nothing she could do or say to convince him.. How could she convince him when she couldn't convince herself?? She ran away from the place, away from him because she couldn't bear the hurt and disappointment she saw there...

Finally in your story SS would be present. Otherwise aakhe Taras gayi hai usko dekhne k liye

I really love how Shaurya directly asked Anokhi all the questions so there is no scope for any misunderstanding. And thi chamkili by God kya karu uska to. I just wanna kick her out of the house😡 always trying to manipulate Shaurya but good he doesn't believe her and confront Anokhi.

Btw end is so sad 😒

Hope so they will meet soon and clear all their misunderstanding😊

Please Jigz keep writing🤗

I liked this OS a lot

Even though understanding things but frustration bhi bohot hai dimaag main

Tumne meri bhadas nikal di

Res

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This hits right into the bullseye. Shaurya’s questions are bang on. Shagun has left no chance to poison Shaurya’s mind. ShaKhi don’t get the much needed alone time to talk through things. Anokhi runs away because she is hurt but also guilty as charged. Too many emotions.

Shaurya took a stand for Anokhi in front of BM. That’s something which was sweet.
The OS is brilliant Jigs 🤗 I loved it💓 The open ending is amazing as you’ve left it on us to think and close it in our own way 😆

Originally posted by: Bhavisweet03

Finally in your story SS would be present. Otherwise aakhe Taras gayi hai usko dekhne k liye

I really love how Shaurya directly asked Anokhi all the questions so there is no scope for any misunderstanding. And thi chamkili by God kya karu uska to. I just wanna kick her out of the house😡 always trying to manipulate Shaurya but good he doesn't believe her and confront Anokhi.

Btw end is so sad 😒

Hope so they will meet soon and clear all their misunderstanding😊

Please Jigz keep writing🤗

Mere story mai SS nahi hoga to kaise hoga.. 😆

Yeah I want them to have them that 1 conversation so badly.. But itna kuch ho gaya ki I dunno if 1 is enough.. They should take time to sort out the mess..😔

Pata nahi happy ending nahi hui mujhse.. But serial mai milegi hume.. 😆

Fabulous. Just the way things should pan out.

There should be a simple confrontation with simple no over dramatic questions.

Anokhi calling him a bhagoda and not seeing herself do the same is quite idiotic.

Isn't she running away too?

Well Shaurya needs to give her that space to sort her mind out .He needs to ask her the questions and and in return she needs to unravel the answers by herself.

Originally posted by: Jiggy7

Mere story mai SS nahi hoga to kaise hoga.. 😆

Yeah I want them to have them that 1 conversation so badly.. But itna kuch ho gaya ki I dunno if 1 is enough.. They should take time to sort out the mess..😔

Pata nahi happy ending nahi hui mujhse.. But serial mai milegi hume.. 😆

But you can write another one with ShaKhi's private moments and conversation

Aww Jiggy 🤗

After reading this I am sure you have lost hope for the MU to get cleared.

This made me cry. I hope this does not happen in the show. Like we are going to wait for more than 2 weeks, the wait should be worth it?

It was great perspective though. Shaurya was dignified and BM was well.. BM..

I wish Anokhi could explain her side of the story though..

Originally posted by: Soulfuldream

Fabulous. Just the way things should pan out.

There should be a simple confrontation with simple no over dramatic questions.

Anokhi calling him a bhagoda and not seeing herself do the same is quite idiotic.

Isn't she running away too?

Well Shaurya needs to give her that space to sort her mind out .He needs to ask her the questions and and in return she needs to unravel the answers by herself.

She is too stuck up now.. I still have hope she will think, realise and reach the correct conclusion..

Both need to stay away, grow up, learn, sort out issues in their own life and their feelings before coming together..

Good one

But sad ending