ShaKhi Drabble: The One who Belongs - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
#11

unres!!

Akshu!!!! I'm finally getting a chance to sit down and react to this properly because it was absolutely beautiful. I've read it a few times and it makes me so emotional about Shaurya!! I adore the way he went through describing his feelings for her. Especially these lines:

"In a very peculiar way, he was tied to her, yet he felt positively liberated.Shaurya Sabherwal is finally the one who belongs."

He finally found home with her, a person who will unconditionally love him without making him feel suffocated or beholden to her. Despite growing up in a house full of people, he only found belonging with her 🥺🥺🥺

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

Simply beautiful!! Gladdened my heart❤️❤️

Thank you so much 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#13

Ha ha. you got it so right!!! Written beautifully as per usual. Imagine me,my sister hatesss Shaurya and im always talking about him. i can feel your pain

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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

Nope not tired at all , do continue with your Shaurya jaap😅...short & sweet...Shaurya belongs💖👍

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Posted: 4 years ago
#15

Keep writing more and aise chote chote shaurya dose dete rho.😳

Even I'm obsessed with him😁

Toh uski baare mai aap jitna bhi likhegi woh kam hi hoga for me☺️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

This is after Banjara VM 😲

Wow ❤️✨

Sukoon bhara laga


Tired of Shaurya jaap

Girl! Most of us do that ☺️😆

Ab toh Acp k bhi jaap karne lagi hoon main 🤪🤣

Shaurya is adorable 🥰

Haq se jaap karo 😎 (also because I want more such amazing drabbles and One shots 🙊🤣)

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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

This was such a crisp, adorable piece! Loved the wrap up lines.


In a very peculiar way, he was tied to her, yet he felt positively liberated.


Shaurya Sabherwal is finally the one who belongs.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#18

Oh God! It's too good. ❤️

Your version of Majnu Shaurya stole my heart. I'm travelling to home right now and if not for the mask I'm wearing, the stupid smile on my face might have invited perplexed gazes from the fellow passengers. 😆

Thought to read through the pending ffs, drabbles and os and now I can't stop smiling after reading this lovely work. Loved it.

I hope we'll get to see such a glimpse of Shaurya in the show.


And yeah, do write more like this. Would love to read them. Loving your Shaurya-ism . 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#19

Why did you stop couldn't you make it little longer

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Posted: 4 years ago
#20

Akshu🤗

Finally catching up to your writings!😳

Okay so Anokhi lives rent free in this man's mind! 😆I love how he is so overwhelmed with her, he feels wholesome and content not only in her presence, but also with memories of her. How beautiful is that? Really!❤️

I love how you depicted that Anokhi is some kind of safe haven for him - the space where he can really be the person he is, the Shaurya who is not a son, a professor or director, but just someone in love, desiring to be loved with the same intensity.❤️

And who am I to complain about your obsession...hum bhi ussi line mein hain!🤣


Keep these little gems coming girl, im a fan😘😘😘

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