ANURAJ FF- BECAUSE LOVE JUST HAPPENS! CH 5 UPDATED PG 4

Cinnamon_Kisses thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#1

ANURAJ FF- BECAUSE LOVE JUST HAPPENS!

so friends not keeping you all waiting for long I present two you my second anuraj FF. the character sketch remains the same but the treatment and perception of each character is different! so please enjoy and kindly give me your views.

CHAPTER 1- THE FIRST IMPRESSION

shastriji has shifted to the sareen house with his daughters just 2 hours back and they all are busy unpacking their things and setting up the house, as they are busy upstairs rajat arrives from the office and sees his father...

rajat- what are you doing dad?

sareen- fauji, my friend has come and they all are busy upstairs so m just going to help them.(minty calls him). beta I need to go but pls go upstairs and give this bag to anu, she forgot it down.

rajat- sure dad (he goes upstairs and meets peeya who is carrying a bag full of books) excuse me tanu, you left your bag downstairs pls take it

peeya- but m not tanu, m peeya

rajat- oook so where is tanu

peeya- arre baba it's not tanu it's anu and she is there (pointing towards the table where both dev and anu are standing, as rajat moves towards them, anu goes to the storeroom, so he sees dev)

rajat- excuse me miss anu, its your bag

dev(as she turns, she is just stunned seeing a very goodlooking man in front of her and seeing him she is not able to utter a single word)

rajat- excuse me anu, excuse me, are u ok (and dev comes out of her dream)

dev- yeah m fine but m not anu

rajat- oh god, I came to return her bag

dev- u keep it here I will give it to her

rajat- you know what? I have been roaming around with this bag for the last 10 mins so now m very keen to see who anu actually is? tell me where is she?i will give the bag to her myself

dev- she is in the storeroom

rajat- ok then, see you

dev- hey shankarji I so badly wish that I was anu

as rajat enters the storeroom he sees a girl who is sneezing continuosly, her clothes is full of dust and all her hair on her face

rajat-(POV)- I don't think she is anu, just look at her clothes so dirty and her hair all messed up, she must be the new maid mom was talking to call in the morning!

rajat- excuse me gangu bai, you know today some new girl has arrived here, her name is anu do you know where she is?

anu- excuse me mr. is this the way to talk? you are calling me gangubai, by the way for your very kind information, m not gangu bai

rajat- so who r u?

anu- I m the one you came asking here for!

rajat- so you are anu,(looking at her top to bottom) but just look at you, your face, your clothes, your hair, I thought anu was...

anu- what did you think who anu is, is it written on my face that m anu or gangubai

rajat- but why are you trying to clean all this, its just the storeroom and look at your condition, you lost your breathe sneezing

anu- you know I like to keep my space clean but and when I entered here, it was not oxygen but fine particles of dust that welcomed my nose and what are you doing here?

rajat- you know what when you open a locked room after 8 months, its not fragrance of fresh roses that's gonna welcome you right and heyy I came to return your bag

anu- but you could have kept it outside what should I do with it in such a dirty place, just keep it outside and pls let me work

rajat- OK (POV)- hey matarani, how rude can that be and more than that how weird can that be she did not even have the courtesy to talk to me properly!(and he comes out of the storeroom)

anu- hey shankarji, who was this fellow and from which angle do I look gangu bai, he did not even have the courtesy to ask my name

so friends I hope you enjoyed reading it and now please give me your feedback!

Edited by poorva22 - 10 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

30

Views

8.5k

Users

10

Likes

77

Frequent Posters

awida thumbnail
Deal or No Deal Thumbnail 12th Anniversary Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Yayy finally we got the next FF from you.
Directly we had AnuRaj meeting. I am happy that you wasted no time Poorva.

I liked this Rajat he is a bit funny ..and challenging. I liked the way Anu behaved with him. But she could atleast thank him for bringing her bag.

Any way it is a gr8 start. I am looking forward for the upcoming chapters.
Cinnamon_Kisses thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: awida

Yayy finally we got the next FF from you.

Directly we had AnuRaj meeting. I am happy that you wasted no time Poorva.

I liked this Rajat he is a bit funny ..and challenging. I liked the way Anu behaved with him. But she could atleast thank him for bringing her bag.

Any way it is a gr8 start. I am looking forward for the upcoming chapters.


thanks awida, i told you na you will not miss your anu and rajat by my side! so i will keep it updated and you enjoy
..Happy.. thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#4
wow !!
loved it !!!
waiting for the next chapter !!
Waida1234 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#5
That's a good one poorva...loved the concept...Gangu Bai...lol...🤣🤣
Cinnamon_Kisses thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: amfi123

wow !!

loved it !!!
waiting for the next chapter !!


thanks amfi i will try to update asap
Cinnamon_Kisses thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: Waida1234

That's a good one poorva...loved the concept...Gangu Bai...lol...🤣🤣


thanks waida,
Joyness thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Loved the beginning. .waiting for the update
Fahmiii93 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#9
amazing...ur fast at writing...i really liked it actually i loved it so plz update soon..i'll be eagerly waiting for it...
shrividhya thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#10
Congratulations for ur second AnuRaj ff poorva!!!!
Wow!!!! Wat a nice meeting!! The store room- a standard place for romance to blossom 😆
Jus loved the gangu bai!!! Looking forward to this ff also poorva!! 😉

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".