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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi every1 this is the first time where in i m giving an update...!!hope u all like it...!!

epi starts with dushyant n shaku in terkhana...!!
they both face each other..!!

shaku - aap yaahan...?? dush - yeh toh humara ghar hai tum is terkhane pe kya kar rahi ho..?? shaku - ji hume rani maa murti laane ke liye bheja tha..ab hume mil gayi hai toh hum jaa rahe hai...!! dush - acha behtar yeh hoga ki tum bahane banana band karo aur chali jaao yahan se.. shaku - hum bahane banane ya jhoot bolne ki aadat nahi hai..!!

dush gets angry ... shaku turns n leaves frm there... dush keeps on screamin chali jaao yahan se...!!
she reaches at the main gate n tries to open it but fails to.. dush comes there n even he tries to open but is nt able to... she bangs the gate n screams ki bahar koi hai hume yahan se bahar nikale...!!dush bangs the door..n look at shaku n says..
dush - ab yahin ked raho..!!shaku - hum sach keh rahe hai hum to yahan rani maa ke kaam se aaye te. hume toh yeh bhi nahi pata tha ki aap yahan pe hai... dush - tumhare kehne ka yeh matlab hai ki yeh sab humari galti hai shaku - humne toh aisa toh nahi kahan.. dush - tumhare kuch kahe bine hum sab kuch samajh jaate hai aur tum humara picha kyu kar rahi ho..?? shaku - hume yahan se bahar jaana hai..
dush - toh hume kon sa yahan aap ke saath ked rehna ka shok hai...??
shaku feels bad n starts bangin the door again then she comes back n both of them feels very awkward .. dush tells shaku - agar yahan se bahar jaane ka rasta hai toh woh sabse pehle hume milega tumhe nahi..
shaku - aap rehne dijiye hum bahar nikalne ka raasta kud dhoond lenge... dush - acha to soch kya rahi ho dhondo... shakutries searchin a way out... then dush tells her - aur agar puri raat bhi dhondogi tabhi tumhe kuch nahi milega..iss terkhane se bahar jaane ka sirf ek hi raasta hai aur woh hai yeh darwaaza...
shaku turns bach n looks at the door.. she goes there n starts bangin the door again n screams koi hai darwaaza kholiye hume yahan se bahar nikaliye.. koi hai ...?? dush tells her - iss mahal ke darwaaze kuch aise hi hai ki yahan ki koi awaz bahar nahi jaati... shaku is shocked.. n tells - kya..?? dush - ab jab tak hume koi dhoondhte dhoondhte yaha nahi aata hume yahin rehna hoga..
the scene changes.. veer is waiting for gauri... finally gauri comes there...they both come near n are crying.. gauri - ap toh hume chod ke chale gaye te na toh phir vaapas kyu aaye..?? agar humare swayamvar ka tamasha dekhna aaya hai toh chinta mat kijiye
ill complete it after some time...!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Dear Pleas Tell Mona u have done the Update so her hardwok doesnt go waste!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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very well written update honey thanks so much..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thankyou so much for all your hard work and effort it is very much appreciated. If it is possible
please spare a thought for all the non hindi speaking people on the forum. I would really love to
know what is being said. I look forward to being able to read the updates so that I can
fully understand what is happening. THANKYOU AGAIN.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i m really sorry for an incomplete update n writing in hindi... actually it was my first time....!!
i m very much sorry...!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: divscool12

i m really sorry for an incomplete update n writing in hindi... actually it was my first time....!!

i m very much sorry...!!

np sweety u tried its the best thing no matter hindi..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: divscool12

i m really sorry for an incomplete update n writing in hindi... actually it was my first time....!!

i m very much sorry...!!

np sweety u tried thats the best thing no matter hindi..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ginac

Thankyou so much for all your hard work and effort it is very much appreciated. If it is possible

please spare a thought for all the non hindi speaking people on the forum. I would really love to
know what is being said. I look forward to being able to read the updates so that I can
fully understand what is happening. THANKYOU AGAIN.

I appreciate your hard work, but I agree I didn't understand what was happening. I'm learning HIndi, but its a process and it takes time to understand everything. But thanks for thinking of posting the update nonetheless.

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