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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

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Edited by RagingBlaze - 8 years ago

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

The prologue seems to be quite intresting and filled with mystery ... So Harman is waiting at the bus stop bcz his car breaks down in a bad weather adding to his woes 😆😆 and there he meets a lady ..

The lady seems to be quite fiery , witty and bold ... I liked the way the story is going simultaneously in past and present from Harmans POV while describing about certain things 👏👏👏 So Harman met Sumya or a girl resembling Saumya's face ... Now this is something new and a great twist 🤣🤣

So she seems to be a doppelganger of Saumya and I would love to see this doppelganger of Saumya as well as real Saumya in the same frame and how story of Saumya unfolds in past as well as present with this doppelganger 🤣🤣 I hope you're keeping this doppelganger in the story along with Saumya for some interesting twists and shocks for your readers 😆😆

Whattt😲 Did I read right or did I read right that Harman said "I killed her with my own hands" ??? No no no , you can't make my hero a murderer of a beautiful girl 😭😭😭 I hope its just someone else who has killed Saumya and you're just confusing your readers bcz Harman can never kill Saumya 😭😭

Waiting for the chapter ASAP to unfold the mystery . Good writing 👏 and update the chapter FAST 😳😳😳

Edited by RagingBlaze - 8 years ago