Preeto ff-woh saat din-Last part-completed - Page 7

Originally posted by: snehapatro

Wonderful writing Madhu dear...👏 Keep up the guddd workkk...👍🏼Loved it ...plz come up with Part6 very soon...😃

Originally posted by: Raj_preet

Good job madhu...👍🏼 now waiting for ur next ff

Preeto ff - Part 7 - Day 5

Preeto tugged herself hard as she felt dragged back by something. She had assumed that it was her stupid saari again. But a stinging sensation told her it wasn't her saari holding her back. It was her bangle. His bangle...she mentally corrected herself. "It's no good trying rajbeer. I just can't fight all the memories of you."

Yeh To Mehndi Hai...Yeh To Mehndi Hai...

She had removed the bangle, not for the blood it had shed, but for the memories it was flooding her with. "Tumne mere liye vrat rakha he?" I can't lie to myself...and There's no denying the tears I'm crying for you. She had run to the hand pump to wash herself off his colours when her head again buzzed with the sights and sounds of the past. Everything I see, reminds me of you.

I can't break free from you. With every single day, it won't go away, the way I feel about you. She let the cold water gush on her hands, freezing the blood running underneath them. Her eyes not leaving sight of the still dark red spot.

She took a stone lying around and with a frustrated anger started rubbing it across her palm. I hate to feel this way. My days all feel the same. And yesterday was proof that tomorrow will too be the same. The rubbing increased in strength and speed. I've only got myself to blame. Nothing feels the same without you.

My heart is breaking in a million bits inside. But I can't forget you. Just can't fight it. Just can't hide it. I'm still in love with you. She dug her fist into her mouth & tried to stop herself from crying out aloud.

Sitting in a pool of cold water, preeto saw that the red spot that rajbeer had given had faded to give way to glistening drops of blood that she had given herself.

His dupatta...his painting...his love...and her hand...all bore the same colour. She closed her fingers into a fist as she couldn't bear any more of the colour red.

She gasped for air as the awareness of her sorrow & loneliness languished in her breaths. Does it hurt when you breathe too? Because it does when I do. Please...please rajbeer... ...Stop haunting my dreams... Please set me free...Please tell me what must I do. My memories haunt me... And I can't regret you, so I can't forget you because u'll always be the only one.

Nature joined her mourning as dark clouds gathered to veil the moon and just like heavy clouds in the sky...heavy hearts...are best relieved by the letting of a little water.

"Oil will help" Simran was telling. Her sudden appearance had taken preeto by surprise and she secretly thanked Babaji for the darkness of the clouds. "Love...it colours the darkness of solitude with our dreams",simmi chatted happily as she helped Preeto rub off the colour. Her eyes brightening as steadily as the colour on preeto's palm was fading. "Just the sound of his name makes me want to dance", she laughed shyly as a part of preeto was slowly dying. "You know preeto, now i finally know why people can't sleep when they are in love?" Simmi had left her hand and now faced preeto with an eager anticipation. Preeto smiled (that is she felt her lips tauten). "Because reality is finally better than your dreams." Preeto walked with Simmi as she pulled her indoors...a huge gaping hole in the place of her heart...a hole around which she had been walking all these years...and in which she had finally fallen tonight.

Madhu

wonderfull, I am speechless

Thank you so very much

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