ROSID FF: EXHAUSTIVE LOVE upd 49-53 Completed FF

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Banumathy Prasanna

@banuprasa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sahithi28
Hi di
It's very nice to start next one di

Thanks sahithi dear

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sheetal

@sheetal1979

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

nice concept dear gud luck for ur new ff

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Banumathy Prasanna

@banuprasa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Part 1

Mumbai city...

Commercial capital of the country..

One of the busiest city..

The trains are carrying the passengers more than its capacity since early morning...

Though so many trains are moving every few minutes, all the trains are equally filled with people...

Even after the train is filled, the stations are again fully crowded waiting for the next train..

Kalyan Junction...

Roli Divedi was waiting for the train in platform no. 2.

She suddenly heard the announcement.

'Attention to the passengers the fast local from Titwala to CST is arriving on platform no. 5 instead of platform no. 2'

Roli: Oh God! The platform is now changed..

She looked in the outer and found that the train is arriving in the outer which will reach the platform in a minute.

Now she need to run from platform no. 2 to 5.

Roli started running with the other passengers who were also running towards the platform no. 5 on hearing the announcement.

Roli was running towards the platform very fast.

She was finding difficult to breathe...

Still she cant afford to miss this train which is reaching from Tilwala as next train will be from Karjat which will be more crowded than this.

Finally when she was getting down the stairs the train already entered into the platform.

She was rushing towards the near by first class compartment...

Two eyes were looking at her admiring from head to toe.

The eyes were admiring at her..

Long & wet hair with a small clip holding small bunch of hair.

Small sticker in the middle of her eyebrows.

Beautiful eyes.

Sharp nose

Lighty lipstick shaded lips

Beautiful cotton chudidar with embroidery work in green color.

Black color sandals.

By now Roli reached near that door of that first class compartment and train is about to leave...

She tried to hold the rod in the entrace for support while the train with a jerk started moving.

She was about to fall down while strong arms hold her hands and pulled her inside the train.

The arms belongs to the same person whose eyes were admiring Roli..

On sudden pulling she fell on his chest.

Roli tried to move back to make space between them.

As she was moving back towards entrance, the arms hold her again to save her from falling down.

She realised it and moved inside.

She released her hands from his hold.

She did not even opened her mouth to convey her thanks to him.

She was holding the small handbag which she was carrying with her and stood on the other side of the entrance as she was not finding any seat to sit.

Her eyes were just looking outside the train.

Though her eyes were looking outside her thoughts were in deep thinking inside.

The beautiful eyes were revealing her tension too...

After few minutes of travel, she got down in Dadar Station where he too got down behind her.

Roli rushed towards the steps and was mixed in the rush.

His eyes were searching for her, but was unable to locate her in that most crowded station...

Edited by banuprasa - 10 years ago

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sheetal

@sheetal1979

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

wow beautifully u narrate the update yaar fab once again gud start dear

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Banumathy Prasanna

@banuprasa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Part 2

Roli came out of the crowded Dadar railway station and walk towards his office which is few streets away from the Dadar station.

While walking she planned a little on the works to be done on that day.

After few minutes of walk, she reached that building were few commercial offices were there.

The building was not new, but painting work was done last year.

Roli entered into the gate and climb up the couple of steps made to raise the height of the building from the road level.

She can remember those steps were around 5 when she was child and came to this office with her father.

But as the road height increased the 5 steps now reduced to only 2 steps.

The security of the building was sitting on the steel chair near the entrance of the building.

The right side wall was showing the name boards of the companies present in that building.

One of such name board was showing '3F - TEXTILE DESIGNERS'

3 is the floor number & F is the door number while Textile Designers is the company name.

Roli was nearing lift and found few people already waiting for the lift.

She was sure there is no use of waiting for the lift as the people who were waiting already exceed the maximum capacity of the lift.

Roli moved towards the steps and started climbing the steps..

She remembered herself running up & down in the stairs as a child when she come there with her father during her holidays.

After climbing stairs of 3 floor finally she reached her office.

She lift her face & looked at the board 'TEXTILE DESIGNERS'

As she entered all the staffs started wishing her 'Good Morning'

Roli just gave a dry smile as response and moved towards her cabin.

She sat on her seat and switch on the laptop.

Manager rushed to her cabin on seeing her head.

Manager: Good morning Madam.

Roli nod her head with same dry smile.

Manager:Shall i bring those new designs which we prepared.

Roli: Ok.

Manager rushed out and bring bunch of drawing sheets with new designs.

ROli was looking into each & every designs.

She analysed it.

But she expressed only dissatisfaction.

Roli: These designs are not upto the level.

Manager: Madam, then tell us what is your expectation. We will try it.

ROli: All these designs are normal designs which is in the market since long. We cant get any new order with all these old designs. We need something new. We need some innovation.

ROli gave some ideas.

Manager: Ok Madam, I will tell the designers to try again.

Roli: Please make it quick.

Manager: Madam, Today one big textile owner is coming to our office.

Roli: Ok. Which textiles?

Manager: 'Exclusive collections' is the name of the company. The textile is now taken care by the son of the owner. The owner and your father are good friends.

Roli: Oh Ok!

Manager: He called me yesterday and said his father insisted to have business association with us considering our long relationship. So his son the new MD is interested to come our office & look for the designs.

ROli: Good! Let him come & i wish new deisgns to be prepared before that.

Manager: Ok Madam.

Roli started checking the mails received in the company id and started replying one by one...

Edited by banuprasa - 10 years ago

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Banumathy Prasanna

@banuprasa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sheetal1979
wow beautifully u narrate the update yaar fab once again gud start dear

Thanks a lot Sheetal dear..

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justloverosid

@justloverosid

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Beautiful narration Banu 👍🏼
Please update soon 😉

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Banumathy Prasanna

@banuprasa

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: justloverosid
Beautiful narration Banu 👍🏼
Please update soon 😉

Thanks a lot Ani dear.

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avikadoll

@avikadoll

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

super introduction banu😃

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Banumathy Prasanna

@banuprasa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Part 3

Roli looked into her watch after clearing all the mails.

It was showing 1 O clock.

She thought of having food.

At that time, the office staff came for taking some signature from her.

Roli gone through the files and signed the papers.

She returned the file and found the time to be 2 O Clock by now.

Her stomach was crying for food badly.

She took out the lunch box from her bag.

Roli started eating the food leaning on her chair in deep thinking...

Manager in the meantime was checking with the designer staffs for the readiness of the new designs.

He push them to get the designs ready as Roli wanted those designs before that Textile owner comes.

ROli was sitting on her chair holding her paining head while the clock was showing 3 O Clock.

ROli was wondering what happend to the designs she asked for.

She called Manager in the intercom.

Roli: What happend to the designs? It is already 3 now.

Manager: Just ready madam. Bringing it.

Manager rushed with drawing sheets in 5 minutes to her.

Roli took those sheets from him and looked into it.

ROli nod her head as 'No' with irritated expression on her face.

Roli: Can you please call those designers here immediately.

She said with angry face.

Manager rushed out and called those 3 designers to come to her cabin.

Manager was standing on the other side.

Those 3 designers were standing in front of her.

Roli: Did you atleast tried to understand what was my expectation?

No answer.

Roli: Manager, did you told them what i told you?

Manager: Yes madam. I did.

Roli: Then is this what i get as output.

Designer1: Madam, These are the designs we have been doing all these days which your father well accepted. If you tell us to do something in your mind how can we do it.

Designer2; Yes Madam. We learn these designs only and can do only these. Where can we go for designs which is never there.

Designer3: Yes. I too agree with what these two said.

Roli: See the designs you learn is only sample and they dont teach you the designs which you need to prepare till your retirement. by keeping the idea of the sample, you need to create your own designs. If such creativity is not there, then what is the use of you people working as designers.

Designer1: Madam, please dont insult us. If you are not interested us in working here. We are ready to go out.

Roli: Please do that first.

All the 3 were shocked. As they thought she will please them to continue if they threaten like that.

Roli: Manager, you can settle the accounts of all these three immediately. You three please get lost from my sight.

The designers went out and Manager went behind them.

Roli was very much irritated on what happend.

She took the design sheet on her hand and looked at it with anger.

ROli to herself: I dont know how father was managing with these idiots all these days.

ROli took those sheets and in anger throw it towards the cabin door.

That was the moment the cabin door was opened and he entered.

All those drawing sheets almost near him like hitting his face & dropped on his feet.

Roli was shocked...