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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi dear, read it now. Its nice concept.
Update soon
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When will u updata dear ...
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Chapter 1



Window is open of a room. The curtains are moving due to slow winds. A boy is sitting in the bed feeling the wind and writing something holding a pen and a diary.

"It is said that life does not stop for anybody. I have to stop my life. You may not be sure. Believe me at first is the life for me. All in all a family to me in my life. He tells me that I'm a little bitter, and Rude. I know I am. And I love that he says no one can change me. Well now no one can change me then what you do. That's not in my hands. And then why should I change and for what? I'm like, that's all love me. So I'm not going to change"

He closes his diary gets up from the bed and goes to the cupboard and keeps the diary inside and locks it inside the locker. Suddenly he hears foot step and close the right side of the door of the cupboard and finds Prem standing and looking at her smiling.

"What?" he asked.

"What?...Nothing" prem replied.

"Then why are you staring at me"

"When? I'm just staring at my brother Sid"

" So cool, Prem is staring at his brother. Then do I look like ghosts?" Sid closing door says

"Not me you are saying like this" Prem said roaming his eyes

"Wait I am showing you now" Sid angrily said

They both runs in the room

"Stop! Sid! Now I am tired" Prem stops and says breathing continuously

Sid too comes near him.

"Yes bro! Me too" he says putting his arm around Prem's shoulder

"Well when your wife will come then you'll forget this diary?" Prem says looking at Sid

"no. whatever may happens but I will not forget it."

" then your wife will give your diary's name as your girlfriend" Prem teased.

Sid sees him with eyes widened

"Prem!! I want a wife who will understand me. Who can know me and that too nicely...?"

"Cool. From now you are dreaming of her whom you haven't seen yet." Prem said smiling.

"Yes" Sid smiles and lye in the bed.

"She must be a little bubbly, be a little naughty. As if in anger and resentment only do I remove and talks of such things, to win everyone's heart.

"No you are not getting this type of girl" Prem says

Sid wakes up and stares at Prem who is standing folding his arms: "why?"

"Because you are so rude. So you will get a rude girl too"

Sid gets up and beat him with the newspaper beside him.

In vrindavan

A girl keeps her cycle in front of a house. Opens the door of the house taking out her bag from the bicycle and enters. She keeps her bag in the table, near a telephone. She is wearing a ankle whose sound is clearly heard and it is sounding so sweetly. She runs in her toe to a room along with the sound and keeps her both hands on someone's eyes.

The lady touches her hand and says: "Roli beta!"

She looks at the lady having a childish face.

"What happened? Why are puffing your mouth?" The lady asks

" Maa..Whenever I want to come quietly and want to put you in a little Confusion. you catch me forthwith." She sits beside her and tells.

"what to do? You are so sweet that you get caught by me" Her mom smiles pinching her chin and says

Someone calls to Jamnalal and shouts. Roli and her mom come outsidee and from another room Roli's sister comes. Roli sees the man and hides behind her sister. Her sister looks at her.

"Look how she has hidden behind her sister" The man says when he looks Roli hiding behind.

"Simar beta makes her understand. Every day she gets mangoes from my garden. If she will do this then how my business will be continued?" the man said to simar.

Everyone sees her.

"Yes. I did, I am doing and I will do. So what? I do not, but I will do so for those children, who are hungry bottom of the garden. You know when I give them to eat those mangoes they say that God Flan the garden and we got to eat. Just think Kaka because of the blessings of the children you are running a business."

The man thinks something and comes near Roli caresses her head

"Beta! May god gladly give you what you want? Be happy Beta"

Saying this man leaves. Simar and her parent are proud on Roli. Roli looks back at her parents and she can feel the pride for her in their eyes. She smiles and gets back smiles from them.

At night

Simar and Roli are in their room. Roli is reading a book

"Roli... what will you do if your life partner didn't have the qualities you want?" Simar asked her.

She closed the books looking at simar

"didi! You have to find a person who has the qualities as for my wish" she said.

Simar shake her head

"But Roli! We have to get this type of guy too"

"didi! We will get definitely. There would be someone made for me. Must be somewhere who thoughts about me only" Roli replied with a smile

"k..k. now let's go for dinner. We should talk later about your Prince charming." Simar said smiling.

"ya..Let's go" Roli too smile.

Both left for the dinner.

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Do tell me the length is ok or you want more lengthy.

Hope you like it.

Love

Aish

29/7/2014


Edited by AishPoojaKR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb waiting for next update
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its good to give 1/2 updates a day aish...but 2 is must after reading d ff😊..if u r busy its ok
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awesome 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Thanks all for your appreciatons and comments.. here's the next installment...


Chapter 2

Bhardwaj House

Dinner table

All were busy in eating when Mataji tells to Prem and Sid they have to leave for vrindavan tomorrow morning as her best friend called her to her grandson wedding and they have to go.

Prem and Sid looks at each other

"Mataji! Your bestfriend Means Sobha dadi?" Sid speaks

"Yes...I told her that I can't come because of my health but I did say that Sujata Bahu and Rajendar should go but they are denying" looking at sujata and Rajendar she said

"So it will be better if you both go"

"K. Mataji we will go and we will get break from work too. What says Sid?"Prem says.

"Yes and I too needed some breaks" Sid replied smiling.

"k. so leave tomorrow morning" Mataji smiles.

Prem and Sid shake her head with a yes.

Next day Prem and Sid leaves for Vrindavan and here in Vrindavan in Sobha's house everyone are engaged in some preparation and decorations. Sobha standing and looking to her entire house, checking, if, everything is perfect or not.

Her mind is distracted by a voice: "dadi! Dadi!" the voice is now close to hear. She look back and says" yes Sameer tell"

He shake his head and tells "dadi Why are you so bothered? Look everything is perfect and you are reacting as if it's not your grandson's marriage but of this house"

Then suddenly they hear laughing sound from the main doors. Both looks and smiles at Prem and Sid standing at the door. They both come inside touch Sobha's feet and then greet Sameer with hug.

Sameer tells them acting as if angry "You both are coming now? Don't you know that your friend is going to marry?"

"Hey! You have changed a lot" prem laughs at him and says. sameer sees him raising his bows.

"oh dude! He means that the guy who never talked without fighting, he is now showing only anger" Sid says.

Sameer smiles and tells Prem and Sid to stop teasing and takes them to their room. Prem and Sid in there room and Prem is thinking when Sid ask him he replied

" I am thinking may the bride would have some sisters so that I can find one among them"

"prem is there anything in your mind except this?" Sid says to Prem

"Nothing will happen to you" Prem replied holding his head and leaves the room.

Marriage day comes. The groom and the barat leaves to the bride house. All were dancing in the barat, enjoying every song except the angry young man Sid who is sitting in the back sit with the groom. He is feeling restless and can't control this sounds and else. Prem was too sitting with him but he get down from the car to enjoy. They now reached the bride's house. The house is decorated beautifully with lights. The roof is decorated with flowers of yellow petals. The baratis were welcomed by some girls standing both sides of the entry they were giving each and everyone a red rose. They were impressed with the welcome. Everyone enter and directly goes near the mandap. Ceremony started and priest tells to call the bride. The bride comes downstairs with some girls holding her. Prem and Sid are sitting when Prem looks at a girl wearing a yellow anarkali having some diamond works in it. He was staring at her beauty.

Someone called her "hey Simar where you were yaar! You look beautiful"

"Thanks" she replied with a smile.

Prem is now in heaven knowing her name. Here Sid feeling suffocation of the crowd he was going when suddenly he bumps with someone. Sid holds and sees it's a girl, she has hold his collar tightly hoping not to fall in the ground with her eyes closed and his hands are holding her waist. He could see feeling of scare on her. And also he is gazing at her beauty. The marron lehenga with diamonds works really looks perfect for her body. And her loose hair is making her more beautiful. Slowly she opens her one eye and finds a guy holding her and suddenly she could hear a word "beautiful" she widened both of her eyes and tries to straight up but she lost in his two eyes gazing at her two beautiful big eyes which are widened. They share an eye lock when again Roli tries to free herself. Sid is gazing at her and due to Roli's movement he gets his senses and made her stand straight. Roli looks at her keeping her both hands in hip and stare.

"What?" Sid asked

"Who are you to compliment me haan?" she tells,

"excuse me!" Sid is confused and was about to leave.

Roli stops him.

"Excuse me. Mr. erm... "

"Siddhant... Siddhant Bhardwaj" Sid says folding his both arms.

"Yes whatever. How dare you? I know about all boys like you"

"Really what you know haan? And instead of telling thanks why are you talking like this?"

"Shut up...What you think that I don't know your intentions. I know everything. First catch a falling girl, give her compliments, then take thanks from her, make friendship, then act as if fallen in love with her and then do what..."

She stops looking at him who is just staring at her with a smile gazing her beauty.

"Roli where are you?" Someone called her.

She looks at the side where the voice is heard

"Coming" saying this she leaves.

Sid is still standing there staring at her who is going to a direction and met a girl who gave her a juice tray having glasses of juice in it She hold the juice tray and starts serving to the Baratis. Sid is staring at her when someone holds him and jerks him. He turns back and sees Prem.

"What?" Sid asked

He asks as if someone has disturbed him while watching a beauty in front of him.

"Sid... where are you lost? I am calling you since 15 minutes" Prem said

Sid comes to his sense

"Nowhere, by the way why were you calling me?"

Prem puts his palm on his forehead " ya. Sameer has to change his cloth and dadi told that it is in the room upstairs" he said

Sid looks him and says "Yes so?"

"So I was telling that you go and get it. I am going. Get it k."

Sid shakes his head in yes and suddenly says "hey" as if he was unmindful and agrees in Prem words.

"God! In which trouble I came...Now to which room I will go?" He looks upstairs noticing rooms.

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Love

Aish

31/7/14


So how is it? Give reviews and comments. And yes don't forget to press like buttons.

And yes from next i will try to give long parts..

Edited by AishPoojaKR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
hey pls give very long one...i know till where dis ff stopped earlier..so pls update that whole part & continue from there with ur ideas...i'm really excited to know how u r going to present it...all d best...thanks for d pm..
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Its truely awesome update soon...
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It is fabulous Aish looking forward to next update

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