premar & rosid ff 'DESTINY' part 8 updt - Page 19

Originally posted by: VildanaROSID

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I loved this part yaar...park scene was just so funny 🤣 well written...Update ur next part soon and thx for the pm...

Originally posted by: HarryAustralia

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Lovely and hilarious update.

Originally posted by: suju.

superb update... 👏👏👏 rosid too gd... 😉

Originally posted by: .Nisha.

oh shit how i can i forget to post comment i am really sorry ani

i read early but i am the last comment 😭

awesome update 👏 👏 👏 👏 ani i love it so much too good

waiting to next part

Originally posted by: HemaG

u r back with a bang...

lovely story...

and hilarious too...'

thanks for this very long and beautiful update..

Originally posted by: sita_rama

wonderful update .
I think the elders are going to ask simar for sid and roli for prem.
I am waiting to no whether my guess s correct or not
thanks for the update

Originally posted by: napu

Awesome update 👏

loved it specailly the park scene 😆hope the family members will pair sid with roli and prem with simar😕 don't want opposite of that 😭but i know at end our ROSID will be together 😳

thanks for ur PM and update next part soon 😃

Part 6

Roli (room)

They are coming... what will I were??? I have to look best today... I have to impress them.

She takes out all the dresses from the cupboard but she was not satisfied by any of them. At last she gets a white salwaar and smiles looking herself in mirror.

Simar (kitchen)

They are coming... what will I cook?? I have to make something special today... I have to make a good impression at them.

She gets busy cooking and then she too gets ready.

1 hour later

Door bell rings. Rosim runs to open the door. But jamnalal does it. They sees mata g and sujata maa at the door. Jamnalal welcomes them.

Jamna: mata ji, they are my daughters, Simar, and Roli. Simar, she is mataji, one of the most reputed people in the society and she is sujataji, her DIL.

Rosim: Namaste!

Both: be happy!

Mataji: jamnalalji, today I came taking my grandsons marriage proposal for ur daughters.

Rosim gets excited.

Jamana: my daughters??? But mataji, you are from such a big family and I...

Mataji: so what??? Don't big families need good DILs?? From our side it's fixed.

Jamna: it's my goodluck, I never thought, such a good proposal will come for my daughters.

Roli runs in happiness. Simar turns to go.

Sujata: then it's final, we like Simar for Siddhant and Roli for Prem.

Simar shocks. She was unable to believe her ears. She was tensed; she decides to talk to Roli about this.

Roli(room)

I am going to marry siddhantji... my (simar comes) my dream is going to be true. I will be his wife.., I will dress up in bridal for him. I am so happy today. So.. so happy..

Simar was heartbroken. Their choice was same from the beginning. But she never expected that they will choose same man as their life partner. But she was helpless. she can't break roli's dream like this!

That's the time when jamnalal calls them. Rosim goes.

Jamna: today is an unforgettable day for me. So great proposal came for you, that from their side, but I want to ask you once, Simar, are u ready to marry Siddhantji????

Roli was shocked. Did she hear right?? Was it really siddhant's name???

Simar(smiling): yes papa, I m ready to marry Siddhantji.

Roli closes her eyes hearing this and tear starts rolling. She was too heartbroken. Every time simar gave her everything she wanted, but this time, she was taking everything from her. But how was that possible???

Jamna: Roli, are you happy to marry Premji??

Roli(smiling): yes papa, I am happy.

Simar closes her eyes when these words struck his ears and tears roll down.

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BHDWJ house

Mataji and sujata reaches home. Presid comes down.

Sujata: Siddhant, Prem, your marriage is fixed. Take this and see their photo once.

Both takes and goes up. Then prem rushes to terrace and sid to bedroom. Prem sits on the swing and Sid sleeps at the bed. They then slowly take out the pic from the envelope.

Prem: Roli!!!!

Sid: This girl... I have seen her somewhere... ah, the park lady! But... How is it...?

Prem: possible???? Perhaps it's some misunderstanding.

Both go down. But before they could say something,

Sujata: you liked them... siddhant... you like simar na??

Sid: simar????

Prem was too shocked.

Sujata: and Prem, u liked Roli na??

Prem: Roli???

They were again shocked. It wasn't a misunderstanding, it was all fixed. They decided to meet Rosim. The girls were in stress, but they agreed for the meeting. For them, it was for the last time.

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PREMAR

Prem: what's all this simar??

Simar: I have done right prem.

Prem: right?? U know very well that I love u, you let my marriage fix with Roli,,, and you think its right??

Simar: from childhood till now, mine and roli's choices are same. But I never expected that our choices will be same in this matter also...

Prem: simar...

Simar: prem, whatever she wanted I gave her at any cost. This time cant step back... you have to marry my sis, she loves you..

Prem: but at least listen to me once,

Simar: we will not talk about it anymore. Can't u do such a little thing for me???

Prem: I can do anything for you.

Simar: then marry roli, and don't discuss about it with her otherwise you will see my dead face.

Prem: simar.., I'll do whatever you want, but never say this again.

Simar: I just want Roli's happiness nothing else. I love you prem..., I will marry Siddhant.

She was going.

Prem: simar..., can I expect something from you???

Simar: What???

Prem: a last Hug... Perhaps...

Without thinking for a single moment, she hugs him tightly and vice versa.

Prem(in mind): I wish I could tell you Simar, that you are not giving your sis happiness in fact, you are spoiling her happiness.

Then kissing her head, "I love you"...

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ROSID

Roli: I know what you want to ask but I did it knowingly.

Sid: I know that, but why did you do it??

Roli: from childhood till now, she+ gave+ me everything I wanted, and today it's my turn, how can I step back??? I+ can't be so selfish...

Sid: what do you mean???

Roli: I mean, Simar didi loves you.

Sid: what rubbish!!

Roli: it's the truth. That's why she agreed to marry you na...

Sid: whatever it may be, if you cant, I m going to+ tell Simar I love you and I can't marry her.

Roli: you will not do anything like this Sidhanth...

Sid: I will.

Roli: u have my promise. You will not talk to di about us.

Sid: but Roli... I can't live without you. You know very well that I have took out my feeling after so many problems... and..

Roli: I understand, but u also try to understand me...,

Sid: is it easy for you to marry my bro???

Roli: no. but it's not so hard too.

After a while,

Roli: siddhant, can I get a hug???

Sid: no...

Roli: plz...

Saying "no" sid kisses her forehead and hugs her tightly followed by her.

Sid: I love you yaar...

Roli: I love you too yaar... But I have to marry Prem...

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BDWJ House

Sujata: do soon... Everything should be done in time. (presid comes) engagement is tomorrow and many work is left to do. I hope Janhvi reach soon.

Presid gets tensed hearing Janhvi's name. As both of them had shared about Simar and Roli with her, they were scared of her reaction after knowing all this.

ROSIM

Simar is cleaning her room and she finds prem's photo under her pillow. She takes it and looks at it smiling seeing his cute smile.

Then she heard a voice,"what are you looking at?"

She turns and finds herself with Prem at a distance.

Sim: Nothing,

Prem: liar...

Sim: who me???

Prem: yes... u!

Sim: but y??

Prem: because you are smiling looking at my photo, and...

Sim: your photo?? No no, u have some misunderstanding,

Prem: then what are you trying to conceal from me??

Simar: ah... nothing...

Prem: show me.

Simar: prem...

He forcefully takes it from her and finds that she's trying to join his and her photo.

Prem: what is this??

Simar stays quiet.

Prem: you don't need to do this. We are already together, and no one can separate us...

Dream breaks and simar then recalls what she had said Prem. She then puts Prem's photo in inverse and starts crying.

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Engagement day

Roli is getting ready for engagement.

She suddenly hears a voice:

Roli: siddhant, stop siddhant... sid wait...

She sees sid running and roli behind him. They then slips and falls down they they looks at each other and laughs loudly.

Sid: my god! I had never felt such a great experience before!

Roli: I know, you don't know how to enjoy life... we must celebrate small to small happiness in life...

Sid: cool! Roli I want to ask something.

Roli: hmm...

Sid: you knew from very long that I had a allergy type from girls... then also you...

Roli: I loved you... I love you, and will always love you...

Sid: but...

Roli: pyar to dil se kiya jata hai. Aur mujhe aap k dil se pyar hua hai. App bahar se jitney sakht dikhte hain sayad dil se utne nahi hain.(love happened heart 2 heart and I love your heart. And how you look so strict and rude types from outside I know you aren't like that from inside) one wish of my heart was to get your love and marry you and don't care that if I die after marriage on d same day.

Sid: how can you love me so much???

Roli: why can't I??

Roli gets her senses back. She cries a lots recalling all the moments spent with siddhant.

BGM:

pyaar hai ya saza ai mere dil bataa

Is this love or punishment, tell me my heart

toot ta kyon nahi dard ka silsila

Why doesn't break this chain of pain

iss pyar mein ho kaise kaise imtehaan

In love why are there such tests

yeh pyaar likhe kaisi kaisi daastan

What stories does love write?

ya rabba

O my lord

dede koi jaan bhi agar

Even if someone gives their life

dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na koi asar

Let no effect there be on the one I love

Rosim house.

Engagement ceremony starts. Guests appear. Bhardwaj family also comes. Mataji introduces Roli and Simar with Jhanvi. After sometime, Rosim and Presid are called for the ring ceremony. Sid looks at Roli and Prem looks at Simar and vice versa. Then Simar and Siddhant stand together and Prem and Roli stand together.

Mataji: sujata Bahu! Take out the rings.

Sujata: jhanvi where are the rings?

Jhanvi: oh god! I think I have forgotten it in the car. Let me bring it.

Sid: janvi wait. I will do it.

Rajendar: no today you are VIP. You enjoy.

Prem: no papa! We will bring it.

Presid goes and brings it. Sid goes and stands before Simar and Prem stands before Roli. Then presid looks at each other and exchange their place. Prem puts ring in simar's finger and Sid put in Roli's. All are shocked after this. But jhanvi stays in a smiling position.

Sujata: prem! Siddhant! What have you done?

Prem: we have done right maa.

Mataji: will you please elaborate?

Siddhant: let me explain. Last night...

***********flashback************

Prem is thinking something. Siddhant arrives.

Sid: bro! Where are you lost?

Prem: it's nothing.

Sid: want to lie me. It's impossible.

Prem: (thinks) what should I do? I should talk to him or not?

Sid: prem! What happened?

Prem: I want to share a most important thing with you. I don't know you know about it or not... but...

Sid: get to the point.

Prem: Roli loves you Sid.

Siddhant looks at him in a shock.

Prem: ya it's true. She was the one who always cared of you; she always informed me whenever you use to do danger things. And she loves you more than anyone else.

Sid: you know everything... then also you agreed to marry her.

Prem: let me clear... do you...

Sid: yes. I am too in love with her. But I can't understand if you know everything then why did you say yes?

Prem: because of Simar. She took promise from me to marry Roli and my hands were tied.

Sid: you mean...

Prem: yes. She is the same girl dreaming of whom I used to hold you tightly at night. She has misunderstanding that Roli likes me.

Sid: both the sisters are same. Roli thinks the same. So she too told me to marry Simar. So I...

Prem: but what will we do now?? Tomorrow is our engagement.

Sid: don't worry we will be engaged but to whom we want.

*************flashback ends******************

Prem: so we told jhanvi to leave the rings in the car and you all know the rest.

Sim: Roli! Why didn't you tell me anything?

Roli: not even you.

Sim: but I am elder. You always ask me before doing anything and today you took such a big decision. Today you proved you don't need me anymore.

Roli: didi...

Sim: no Roli! You didn't do right.

Jhanvi: and what you did? Was that right? No! That was too wrong. You were the one na, who wanted to do arrange marriage??? Who preferred arranged than love?? But you changed your thinking. You changed your decision after meeting my bro... you stand with love marriage. You loved simar, you loved. But you stepped back from marriage.

Simar downs her eyes.

Janvi: and you. Roli. You are the same girl na, who dared to love such a guy who hated girls??? Even you jumped in water to save my bro without knowing swimming. And of course you had one dream only to get sid's love and marry him even u don't care if you die on the same day. You believed you will change him one day. Right?? You changed him roli... but you changed yourself too.

Roli downs her face.

Prem: simar, you love Roli very much naa...? You have given her everything she needed, but didn't you think for a while to ask for your Prem to her. As you know she will never refuse you because she loves you the same?

Sim: thought, I thought about it Prem but when I went to Roli to talk she was in her room talking to herself.

"My dream is going to be true. I will be his wife.., I will dress up in bridal for him. I am so happy today. So... so happy..."

I thought she was saying about you. She had never seen mom for her I am her mother and how could I break her dreams like this? How could I do this to my child? How can I say her, don't dream of him, forget him, because he is mine. Give me my Prem. How could I? If you would have in my place, what have you done?

After a silence.

Sid: Roli! (roli looks him) simar gave you everything you needed, you asked her, having your rights on her. Then why didn't you ask for your Siddhant?

Roli: it happened so fast that... I was unable to understand anything. And after hearing "yes" from didi for you I too said yes for prem. He is my friend and I believed he will understand me. Didi gave me happiness in every moment of life even putting stone in her heart, she never disappoint me, then how could I take away such a big happiness from her siddhant?? Now it was my turn then, where was I wrong siddhant???

Janvi: you are right at your place roli, but you have a very big wrong concept. We never do for others in expect of return gift, we always do because we like to do, we take it as our responsibility, and she never cared of you expecting any sacrifices from you (to simar) I am saying this all to her that doesn't mean that you are right. Do you know simar what's your problem? You think you are elder, so only you have all the right to sacrifice. But let me tell you one thing sometimes being selfish is good for us as well as others. What both of you think? You were doing very great work? You were sacrificing? No simar, Roli, you were not sacrificing infact you were spoiling 4-4 lives!

Rosim looks at each other in teary eyes.

Jamna: what were you going to do this???

Mataji: no jamnalal ji, it's your teaching only that today two sisters are fighting for each other's happiness. You should be proud of them. And we shouldn't think what they were going to do or what may have happened? We should be happy that we knew everything on time. Now I can proudly say these two are going to be my DILs.

Janvi: what are you more waiting for? My brothers' fingers are waiting for your rings now also. Come on! Let's complete the ceremony.

Rosim puts ring on presid's fingers.

Janvi: I know you two are still angry on each other but come on forgive each other. Or are you practicing being devrani and jethani? My dear "BHABHIS".

All laughs including Rosim. They hug each other and everyone claps.

To be continued...