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Posted: 12 years ago

Guys I m sorry I really hurt u. I didn't mean 2 hurt u. I m extremely sorry. And thank u all 4 so much patience. So here is my next part.

Part 21

Police searched roli bt not found her. Sid is unable 2 control himself. He is behaving like a mad. Simar is so tensed she is always telling prem 2 find her roli soon. Otherwise she ll go and search her. Prem is now in tense whom 2 relax.

Now its night. sid goes out 2 search his roli. But he return home empty handed. He is broken. Prem tell him nt to worry roli ll come back. Sid is going 2 his room when"

Sim: roli!(looking towards the main door)

Sid look back and shocked looking roli. She has bandage her fore head. She has some scratch on her hands. Sid rushes 2 her.

Sid: roli! Roli wht happened? Roli wht is dis. And how u got this scratch.

Roli is about 2 tell something bt she faint. Sid make her lay on sofa and sprinkle water on her face. Roli then gain conscious.

Sim: roli tell naa? How dis all happen?(crying)

Roli: didi actually when today I was going 2 temple someone take me in 2 d car. I saw a man there he told me that he is d same person who was scaring me and now he ll take me wid him. then I shouted frm d car and a guy stops d car. He take me out of d car and he beat the man. Bt again the man take me inside d car and starts driving and he hit d car wid a truck. I became unconscious and when I open my eyes I was in hospital.

Sid: hospital!? Who took u 2 hospital?

Roli then show her pointer towards d door. Everyone look at d door and

Sid: veeru!

Premar: veeru!

He came inside.

Sid: veeru. U saved roli?

Veeru: yes siddhant. Was passing by d road and heard someone shouting and then I went and after the accident. Roli was unconscious and d man was dead. I took her 2 hospital and then we come here.

Sim: thnk u so much veeru. Today u save my sister life. I m so grateful 2 u. thnk u so much.

Sid: veeru really today u not only saved my roli's life bt also my and simar's life.

Prem: k. k. now control ur emotion. After a long time our friend has arrived. Ask some coffee soffee 2 him.

Sim went 2 kitchen

Sid: so veeru where u living?

Veeru: hotel.

Prem: hotel? Veeru why r u staying in hotel why dnt u stay in our house.

Sid: yes it's a good idea.

Veeru: but how can i?

Mataji: how cant u? u have save our daughter in law. U shld also give us chance 2 make some khatirdari naa.

Mausiji: are haan haan. Akhir tune meri roli ki jaan bachai hai. Tu to ab yahin rahega.(yes. After all u have saved my roli's life. U ll stay here only.)

Veeru: lekin……(but)

Roli: ruk jaiye naa.(stay naa) plz……..

Sid: lok now roli has also tell. Now u can stay naa?

Veeru: yes.

Prem: that's our friend.

Simar brings coffee 4 every one. After taking coffee everyone goes 2 their room. Sid take roli 2 room. Roli sit on bed.

Sid: roli u take rest.

Roli: siddhantji I m so scared.

Sid: roli now nthng is 2 scare as d man has died now and no one ll do anything 2 me and 2 u.

Roli: bt siddhantji!

Sim: now no bt roli. U come home safely and then also u r in such tension.

Prem: yes roli up 2 now u hv not a single son then how u got tenson?

Roli: jiju(smiling)

All laughs.

Prem: roli d hurdle is gone now u shld enjoy ur life.

Sim: prem ji is right. U dnt worry abt anything.k. now u take rest. Good ni8.

Rosid: goodni8.

Premar: gudni8.

They then leaves. Rosid then sleep. They r in a deep sleep. Roli then feel thirsty and she wakes up 2 drink water. She see d jug is empty and turn 2 sid who is in a deep sleep wid a cute smile. Roli thinks nt 2 wake him she herself shld go 2 kitchen drink water and ll come back. Roli goes down towards d kitchen. She reached. Goes and open the fridge. Taking out bottle (behind her back some shadow is seen as if someone standing.). she feel someone is behind her and she turns bt no one is there. she thinks: wht roli? No one is here. Why r u fearing?(someone is coming towards her shadow is seen) roli thinks something and turn back and about 2 shout when her mouth is closed.

Sid: roli! Wht? Why r u going 2 shout its me. Siddhant!(removes his hand frm her mouth)

Roli: siddhantji! (she beats him on his shoulder) why r u scaring me and that also in night.

Sid: roli I didn't scare u. u urself is fearin. I jst didn't see u in room so I came here 2 search u.

Roli: oh!really…..

Sid: yes. Now I ll nt leave u alone anywhere. I ll b always there wid u.

Roli: promise?

Sid: pakka wala promise..

Rosid then goes.(someone is standing in d kitchen). Rosid r going when sid see veeru's room is open.

Sid: roli u go I m coming.

Roli: siddhantji. U now promise u ll not leave me alone.

Sid: roli bt i…..k. lets go. (sid going wid roli loking towards veeru's room)

Next day

All r worshipping 2 matarani. Except roli no one woke her. As they thaught she shld take some rest.

Sim: hey matarani. Thnk u 4 saving my sister and I prays u 4 her wellbeing and happiness shld always b wid her. Plz u safe her frm all hurdles coming in her life.

Sid: matarani. Yesterday I promise roli I ll nt leave her alone at anytime or anymoment. U plz help me so that I ll make my sherni always happy.

They then goes 4 breakfast. Mataji tell simar 2 take roli's breakfast 2 her room. Simar then takes her breakfast.

Sim: roli! Roli! Where dis girl is?

Roli: di I m in bathroom.

Sim: roli I come wid ur breakfast. And ur soup.

Roli: di u keep d soup and take d breakfast wid u…I m coming after 2 minutes.

Sim; k as u wish.

Keeping soup simar leaves. She goes downstair and tell dat roli wants only soup nt breakfast.

Someone comes 2 roli's room. Searched here and there and then get that roli is in bathroom. Then slowly look at d soup.

Downstair

Sid: where is veeru? Dnt he feel hungry?

Veeru: I m here. I m feeling so much hungry.

Prem: yes veeru come and sit.

Simar serves him.

Suddenly everyone hear roli's voice. She is shouting loudly…..

2 be continued………….

So guys wht happened 2 roli catch me in my next update…………..

.Divya thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
huhuuu... Am the first

Oh my god...Anu u again ended with a suspense...Veeru entered BW house... Dont know what will happen...??????????????????

It is more interesting dear...👏👏👏...Thanks for updating ur ff and pm...Love u sweety <3
Edited by diyasri - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
heheee....m te second.🥳...haha...near 2 my di.😛..
oye...u again ended in a suspense...ek baat kahoon?...tumhe college student nahi..uske badle mein detective hona chahiye😉..when i read ur ff..m feeling like m reading a detective novel lol😃..haha😆..anyways it was superb.👏👏..sid is a lil detective..hehe...loved it yaar.❤️..all te best👍🏼..update soon...
Edited by shikhanair - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
u always ended in a big suspense yar and nice update plz update ur next part soon
Edited by rosid - 12 years ago
hangok thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohhh god, i have a feeling that veeru does something...
he cant be so good,
hope nothing happens to her
HerFiction thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks 4 d pm. Cnt wait. Pls update soon.
vidyasuresh thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
U again ended with a suspense anyway waiting 4r da next updates dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
di thanks a lot for continue the ff it was your ff was my insipiration to write ff so very nice update hope roli is all right and thanks for the pm 😃
love u di ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
really awesome thanks for the pm plz update soon
wamavasant thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
wooo anamika di nice update keep it up and update soon and tell my jaaneman too update soon its weekend as per promise she has to update sunday or saturday i m waiting

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