Just friends - Sushaan FF pg 1 Intro 13.02.11

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys,

My name is Nupur, I'm 18 and I've been a silent reader on IF for a long time. I just started a fan fiction on Sushaan and am posting the introduction here. It's a very basic attempt at writing so please be brutal and let me have it. Comments and criticism are more than appreciated and if anyone wishes to be added to the PM list please let me know. Ok so here goes the introduction. ________________________________________________
Hi,
I'm female, aged 21, living in New Delhi, India (which according to me is the best city in India).

I live with my dad and my younger sister, and am in my final year at DU doing Media Studies. Some day I want to be the greatest women writers of my time, and hopefully this dream of mine will come true'.. Some day.

Now people will be wondering who am I and what is all this about. Well we'll get to my name in a bit, but for now what I can tell you is that I hate cliches. I used to think they make no sense at all until something happened to me and changed my whole perspective about this.

They say a guy and girl can never be just friends or best friends, there has to be another relation that defines them. Now I was one of those people who used to laugh at this particular cliche and say that it is baseless by citing the example of me and my best friend (who BTW is a boy! Hawww!!)

I know you people are still confused so let me make it clear, this is NOT some fairy tale romance where the oh-so-handsome prince sweeps the beautiful and impeccably dressed princess off her feet, NO sir! This is my story and I'm going to tell it the way it happened. Most stories start off with the 'once upon a time' catch phrase and then end with 'and they lived happily ever after', mine is more or less the same and yet different.

In this, the prince is handsome but he doesn't love the princess who is his best friend (well he doesn't love her initially), the princess is NEVER well dressed or even well spoken for that matter. Ok I decided not to confuse you anymore.

My name is Suhana Bajpai(Yep that's me!) and this is the story of how I fell in love with my best friend Ishan Kashyap (Hmmm... *dreaming*... sorry just his name is enough to send me into lalala land and start day dreaming and drooling like a love sick puppy but more on that later) and proved that clichs are after all made due to idiots like me who think they can prove them false.

Enjoy!

PS: Senti people read at your own risk! There is no guarantee that you won't cry!

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Ok guys, let me have it.

Take care =)
Nupur
xoxo
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--sree-- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start
please continue
please pm me
Edited by anusreepradeep - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sorry..double post..check out my nxt post..!
Edited by trueraginifan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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First of all..welcum to our forum dear..i m Vipra...ppl here call me Vipu/Vips..
Cumin to ur FF
WOW..!!!
What an interesting intro...i lovd it..!
The FF seems 2 b vry promising...lukin 4wd to the 1st part..!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Welcome to SGP forum active members' gang sweety....🤗

Intro looks interesting with a "self " intro of main lead...

I am a senti person and I am ready to take the risk...So please PM me whenever you post your next part....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG!!!(Suhana Style 😉) It's awesome!!!!!! I can tell from the introduction itself that the story is going to be AWESOME!!!!!! Best of Luck.... oops..... All the best 😉!!! Please start, I am getting really excited now!!!!! And I am ready to take the risk!!!! Please PM me when you post something new!!!
Edited by ymanjushree10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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The story is interesting, continue to write more
Edited by abhi786 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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dear....
awesome intro...
Loved it ful too...
plz continue soon...
loadz of luv,
Harika
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very impressed by this different and unique way of starting a story..it is looking quite promosing😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: anusreepradeep

nice start

please continue
please pm me

Thanks a lot!!!
I will be posting the first part by this weekend for sure!
Will definitely PM you!

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