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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: smrth


Much as we all are looking out for various clues and pointers, I would like them to further ground their love for some more time. Remember, she is to be extracted from a 'failed' marriage- during and afterwards. Their interpersonal melding- not only physical- has to be on strongest footing before the saperation. I feel, towards mental integration, there is still some scope. Esp. for Kumud. And then our own wishes; to gather some more happy moments before sadism stats its reign.


I hope so too. The way she broke down hearing he was leaving, she still doesn't have the strength. I still don't have the strength to see their seperation so I am hoping we get to see some more happy moments. Today's episode Guman still has Kumari dancing on her finger tips and Kumari still believes her, not good but these lines stood out for me today. I felt those pangs of seperation, a feeling of despair thinking whether they are going to be separated or will they meet.

Iss matke ki tarah Kumud bhi thumhare bina adoori hai
Jaise ye katti huyi patang apne hone ka matlab doond rahi hai
Vaise hi thumhare lautne tak mein bhi apne hone ka matlab doond thi rahungi
Iss liye jaldi aana.

Beautiful lines, hats off to the writers. Loved the way they have brought in the kite to symbolise their feelings. In Guman's eyes their love will wither away like those flowers which fell down but Saras picks them up together. These symbolisms still hint that he will be around to pick up her shattered dreams.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
I have never felt the pain of separation as much as felt today just looking at their aghast faces when LN told about their departure to Dubai.. The pace, the slow build up of this inexplicable bond that they share, from the first shot where Kumud is making a sketch of those eyes, to Saras getting the first tantalizing glimpse of her on his computer screen, the immediate pull, then push, the first time he saw her face.. slowly it became more than the physical attraction they felt for each other.. how they grew to trust , admire and respect each other.. It took time and it all seem so justified now.. they have made this separation seem so realistically painful.. I could feel the tension and anxiety in Kumud when she wrenched the flower she was clutching in her hand...the sinking feeling .. Saras collecting the shattered petals ... only Dukhba could sense their emotions ..the black and white flashbacks actually drifted my mind back to all those times when they were together not realizing where they are heading for... that one day these memories will become the only hope for them to hold onto.. I don't know how they will survive without each other.. Its almost like cutting off oxygen in the air for them..
Glad Danny is staying back.. we might get to see a track with Kumari and him.. also in Saras 's absence its important for someone to take care of the family .. keep trouble at bay..
Edited by vaishali-AR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
^^
You know Vaishali, from now onwards Kumud appears more vulnerable somehow. Theme on these two is noticeably changing. First, it was Saras who could have- and have- done with an anchor. Kumud was sure and secured in her life. She extended an assuredness/ certainty to him.
Table is turned. Now She is anticipating a transit anchor, from a father's to a husband's. That's what she is expressing to him on the kite, I think. And now it's His turn, being shaped healed and complete, to return the call. That's the covenant.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: vaishali-AR

I... It took time and it all seem so justified now.. they have made this separation seem so realistically painful.. I could feel the tension and anxiety in Kumud when she wrenched the flower she was clutching in her hand...the sinking feeling .. Saras collecting the shattered petals ...


Interesting, Vaishali, you chose shattered to describe the petals. Kumud actually looked like her heart was breaking up into little pieces... Am still waiting (heart in mouth) to see how the separation works out...

Note to SLB- Please do not misplace our ultimate happy ending! Else you'll have lots of broken hearts on your its of sins...😲

p.s.
I really missed Arshi's CB thread when I ws travelling, only to come back and find she is away! 💔
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: vaishali-AR

I have never felt the pain of separation as much as felt today just looking at their aghast faces when LN told about their departure to Dubai.. The pace, the slow build up of this inexplicable bond that they share, from the first shot where Kumud is making a sketch of those eyes, to Saras getting the first tantalizing glimpse of her on his computer screen, the immediate pull, then push, the first time he saw her face.. slowly it became more than the physical attraction they felt for each other.. how they grew to trust , admire and respect each other.. It took time and it all seem so justified now.. they have made this separation seem so realistically painful.. I could feel the tension and anxiety in Kumud when she wrenched the flower she was clutching in her hand...the sinking feeling .. Saras collecting the shattered petals ... only Dukhba could sense their emotions ..the black and white flashbacks actually drifted my mind back to all those times when they were together not realizing where they are heading for... that one day these memories will become the only hope for them to hold onto.. I don't know how they will survive without each other.. Its almost like cutting off oxygen in the air for them..
Glad Danny is staying back.. we might get to see a track with Kumari and him.. also in Saras 's absence its important for someone to take care of the family .. keep trouble at bay..

vishali blue part-jenney and gautham fabulous ..i thought I am prepared for their sepearation but today seeing kumud I was like😭.
red-exactly and how will we survive watching them separated.
saras waiting for kumud and leaving to talk to ln
kumud waiting for saras and leaving a note for him and then saras coming.
is this pointing towards their future.kumud waiting, saras not reaching in time(because of some dhamaka by ghuman )and kumud leaving(marriage).
I hope I am wrong.
p.s missing arshi's cb.
Edited by psam4 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: psam4

vishali blue part-jenney and gautham fabulous ..i thought I am prepared for their sepearation but today seeing kumud I was like😭.
red-exactly and how will we survive watching them separated.
saras waiting for kumud and leaving to talk to ln
kumud waiting for saras and leaving a note for him and then saras coming.
is this pointing towards their future.kumud waiting, saras not reaching in time(because of some dhamaka by ghuman )and kumud leaving(marriage).
I hope I am wrong.
p.s missing arshi's cb.

agree loved d today epi...but we knw they r sepratng coz of spoilers...but tommoroe it would be more intense ..i guess..have 2 watch...

@bold:...is this happen novel too...i would hate if ghumann does this to samud...well if some other thngs happen d way around...would be new 2 n diiferent 2...but i gueess there is lot big tym that 2 happenn...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: vaishali-AR

I have never felt the pain of separation as much as felt today just looking at their aghast faces when LN told about their departure to Dubai.. The pace, the slow build up of this inexplicable bond that they share, from the first shot where Kumud is making a sketch of those eyes, to Saras getting the first tantalizing glimpse of her on his computer screen, the immediate pull, then push, the first time he saw her face.. slowly it became more than the physical attraction they felt for each other.. how they grew to trust , admire and respect each other.. It took time and it all seem so justified now.. they have made this separation seem so realistically painful.. I could feel the tension and anxiety in Kumud when she wrenched the flower she was clutching in her hand...the sinking feeling .. Saras collecting the shattered petals ... only Dukhba could sense their emotions ..the black and white flashbacks actually drifted my mind back to all those times when they were together not realizing where they are heading for... that one day these memories will become the only hope for them to hold onto.. I don't know how they will survive without each other.. Its almost like cutting off oxygen in the air for them..
Glad Danny is staying back.. we might get to see a track with Kumari and him.. also in Saras 's absence its important for someone to take care of the family .. keep trouble at bay..


Vaishali, lovely write up. The pain in her eyes was heart wrenching. I agree with you, the time which they had spend together and the moments they shared makes it really painful. Dughbaa has sensed their relationship from the time she understood Saras and today she understood Kumud's pain. Even I am glad Danny is there seeing that Guman wants Kumari to inform her of every movements.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: smrth

^^

You know Vaishali, from now onwards Kumud appears more vulnerable somehow. Theme on these two is noticeably changing. First, it was Saras who could have- and have- done with an anchor. Kumud was sure and secured in her life. She extended an assuredness/ certainty to him.
Table is turned. Now She is anticipating a transit anchor, from a father's to a husband's. That's what she is expressing to him on the kite, I think. And now it's His turn, being shaped healed and complete, to return the call. That's the covenant.😊


Samarth you are absolutely right. Today we could see a vulnerable Kumud. Her anguish in hearing Saras say he will leave was so evident in her eyes. Guman's first victory today seeing her unhappy. Today without him she is incomplete and I almost have to say insecure. But Saras reaction was different. He was unhappy to go away from her but was confident that she is there for him, she will wait for him and he will be back for her. He is now a confident man who seems to have the love of everyone dear to him. Thinking about it in this angle, we still have time for seperation. Role reversal has to be played out.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: smrth

^^

You know Vaishali, from now onwards Kumud appears more vulnerable somehow. Theme on these two is noticeably changing. First, it was Saras who could have- and have- done with an anchor. Kumud was sure and secured in her life. She extended an assuredness/ certainty to him.
Table is turned. Now She is anticipating a transit anchor, from a father's to a husband's. That's what she is expressing to him on the kite, I think. And now it's His turn, being shaped healed and complete, to return the call. That's the covenant.😊



In a way I agree... She has always seemed like the one in control..but today there was fear, anxiety and insecurity.. what if he doesn't return? what if he changes his mind? what if something goes wrong..? when you love something so dearly, that it seems like your whole life depends on it, then there is always a fear of losing it at the back of your mind .. She was clutching on to the last hope of change of mind, or decision or even a delay of 24 hours in the plan (notice how her face lit up when LN asked Saras to leave the next day ), but when he made his decision, that last hope shattered to pieces and fell on the floor... terrific scene where Saras watches them fall on the floor from her limp hands.. waits for everyone to leave, then silently walks towards it and gathers every single petal..

@bold red- happens with all girls I guess.. atleast most of us..

Edited by vaishali-AR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: happychappy


Interesting, Vaishali, you chose shattered to describe the petals. Kumud actually looked like her heart was breaking up into little pieces... Am still waiting (heart in mouth) to see how the separation works out...

Note to SLB- Please do not misplace our ultimate happy ending! Else you'll have lots of broken hearts on your its of sins...😲

p.s.
I really missed Arshi's CB thread when I ws travelling, only to come back and find she is away! 💔



I agree.. she was crushed from within.. like the flower in her hand.. she was hoping against hope that Saras will stay back or delay the trip because clearly no one was prepared for this .. She was barely able to get out of the frenzy state of mind that she must have been in after getting engaged to the man she loved and suddenly everything was snatched away..so suddenly.. there was so much panic on her face..

I was waiting for the separation track tbh.. ironically this is the phase thats gonna make the story the most interesting..ofcourse if handled well.. of whatever I saw today , my expectations have risen.. Glad the original writer is back.. that petal scene was such a powerful scene..this is what is required in the writing.. rest will be taken care of by the actors.. they are too good

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