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Posted: 12 years ago
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When I didn't want to come close to you but still keep supporting you
You made me stay away from you keeping four steps between us
Everytime I came closer you asked me to stop
And distanced me away from you
All I wanted was to be near you and I was happy.

But one day the storm came, it hurt you so badly
It hurt me too and I couldn't control myself anymore
I blurted out my feelings, shared a moment with you
A moment which never should have happened to me
Now I want to be away from you and see you happy.

When I didn't want to come close to you but still keep supporting you
You made me come close to you wiping the four steps between us
Everytime I ran away you asked me to stop
And pulled me towards you more
All I wanted was to be away from you and I was happy.

But one day the storm came, it hurt me so badly
It hurt you too and I couldn't control my sadness anymore
You blurted out your feelings, shared a moment with me
A moment which I never thought would happen to me
Now I want to be near you and see you happy.


Two souls ripped apart, one yearning to be loved, one yearning to love
Is there a place they would meet to be loved and in love again,...


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P.S : thx for reading this 😊

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Samsangeetha thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful. It was painful though. Still love to be soaked with their love.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tishana

wow...luvd dis one😃


Thank you. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Samsangeetha

Beautiful. It was painful though. Still love to be soaked with their love.


It is painful to see their pain but realised their feelings. A start alteast 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yes, that so beautifully expresses what's happening between them

He expressed his feelings that night

But now wants to undo it

She cannot understand

Why he left his baat adhoori

He is giving her mixed signals

And poor thing doesn't know what to do now!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Confused Saras is confusing kumud..poor both
btw very well written dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshicritic

Yes, that so beautifully expresses what's happening between them


He expressed his feelings that night

But now wants to undo it

She cannot understand

Why he left his baat adhoori

He is giving her mixed signals

And poor thing doesn't know what to do now!


I know Arshi, she is in a real dilemma. She understands he cares for her but doesn't understand why he is running away from her. I can almost feel angry for Saras but when I see from his side he is a confused person whose hurt runs deep. He doesn't realise that whatever he is doing hurts her more, he just wants to run away from those feelings he openly expressed. Actually he is in more dilemma than her and doesn't know what to do.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow I never knew I made you so excited 😉 thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anki_KJSG

Confused Saras is confusing kumud..poor both
btw very well written dear


Thank you. Yah he is already confused person, now he is confusing her as well. Really feel bad for both of them.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaadal


I know Arshi, she is in a real dilemma. She understands he cares for her but doesn't understand why he is running away from her. I can almost feel angry for Saras but when I see from his side he is a confused person whose hurt runs deep. He doesn't realise that whatever he is doing hurts her more, he just wants to run away from those feelings he openly expressed. Actually he is in more dilemma than her and doesn't know what to do.


Ya I do understand him, but I wish he wasn't such a confused soul!

Guman and his dad have really messed him up.

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