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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Part 6

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A very long and serious confrontation b/w dakshna

Naina's office

Naina is explaning atul and seema about some work.Just then Daksh comes there ek dum gusslewali mood pe.😡Looking at daksh naina understands the situation and entrusts atul and seema some work which needs to be out of office.They both leave

Daksh furiously looks at naina, closes the door with force and comes to her

Daksh; naina..woh sab kya tha? kya kehrehti thi MRjoshi se..Wedding arrangements? kis shaadi ki?😲

Naina; daksh tum bhi na ..tumhari aur meri...after few seconds..mazaaq kar rhathi..tumhari aur sonakshi ki..aur kiski?

Daksh; Meri aur sonakshi ki? tumhara dimaag to teek hain na? tum jaante bhi ho ki tum kya kehrahi ho?😡😲

Naina; mera dimaag bilkul teek hain aur mein achi se jaante hoon mein kya kehrahi hoon

Daksh; acha..tho tum mujhe samjhati kyu nahi? bolo aur mein sonakshi se shaadi kyu karunga?

Naina; kyunki sonakshi tumse pyar karti hein aur 4 din mein shaadi hain?

Daksh ; aur hamara pyar ..uska kya?

Naina; ye baat itni zaroori nahi hey, jab ayi ne mana kar diya tho....

Daksh ki dimmag ki batti jal jati hain, and he remembers he never told naina what his ayi said. aur uske ander ka lawyer jaag jaata hain

Daksh; tumhe kaise pata ayi ne mana kar diya? mein ne tho tumhe nahi bataya?

Naina realises her mistake and covers up by saying; Isme kaunsi badi baat hein , agar ayi maan gayi hothi tho tum aisa utara hua chehra le kar ghoomte kya? aur mein ne tumhe pehle se kehdiya ki ayi ki aashirvaad ke bina hum ek nahi ho sakthe.

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Daksh right now is not in a condition to analyse facts..so he gives up

Daksh; Ayi ne nahi mana kiya iss ka matlab ye nahi ki mein sonakshi se shaadi karlunga aur hum dondo alag ho jayenge,

..He cools up lil

Daksh comes near naina and says; Mein tumhe kisi bhi kheemat par khona nahi chahta..kisi bhi kheemat par nahi.. Mein itni aasani se hamare pyar ko haarne nai dunga❤️

. Maine ayi se sirf ek baar baat kiya..iss baare hum dono saath mein jayenge aur ayi ko manalenge..ayi zaroor manegi..chalo abhi chalte haina

He holds naina's hand and starts moving..but naina doesnt move.Daksh stops and turns at her.Naina already know what ayi's answer would be but she doesn't want to make daksh feel that its ayi who is villian in love story so she decides to take blame on her self

Daksh; naina , kya soch rahi ho ? chalo

Naina; nahi daksh. ayi se baat karna ka koi fayida nahi..agar ayi ne maan bhi liya ,hum ek nahi ho sakte

Daksh; aisa kyu keh rahi ho?

Naina turns her back to daksh and after few moments she says; kyunki main tumse shaadi nahi karna chahti...

daksh is shocked(obviously)

Daksh; kya kaha tumne..phir se kaho

Naina; mein tumse shaadi nhai karna chahthi

Daksh ki ander ki dard aur gussa combine ho jaate hain and he holds naina with two hands and says' kyu nahi karna chahti?

Naina; kal raat jagde ke baad mujhe ehsaas hua ki hum dondo saath mein khush nahi rehsakte..hamesha jagda hota rahega,Mein ek peaceful life chahthi hoon aur

Daksh; cuts the sentence in between and says aur.( sarcastic way). lagta hain bahut jaldi ehsaas hua tumhe iss baat ka ,aur uss pal ka kya jab hum ek doosre saath khush the..unn ki koi value nahi aur mein nahi maanta ki kal ki jagde ki wajah se tum ye keh rahi ho

daksh; Naina..iss se jayada serious jagade hue hein hamare beech mein aur maine tumse maafi bhi maanga..phir problem kya hain..kyu aisi keh rahi ho? kyu.??.

Naina; main koi explanation nahi dena chahti...saying this she starts leaving , daksh holds her hand tightly and stops her

Daksh; Tumhe mere sawalo ka jawaab dena padega.naina.Tum iss tarah apne pyar mein mujhe paagal banakar, beech mein nahi chodsakthi.

Naina; ye meri zinadagi hain aur mein jo chahti hoon kar sakti hoon

Daksh; acha..tumhari zindagi..tumhari nahi damnit.. ye.hamari zindagi ka sawaal hai naina..uss pal jab humne apna pyar confess kiya.uss waqt se tum aur mein " hum bangaye hain aur hamari zaindagi faisle tum akele le sakthi..ye baat ache se samajhlo

Naina is speechless and keeps looking at daksh with blank expression..Daksh cools down a bit

Daksh; naina , mein tumse bahut pyar karta hoon aur tumhare bina jeene ke baare mein tho mein soch bhi nahi sakta ,I luv u naina

Both get lost, dakshu fully emotional ho jaat hain aur aankhon mein se asu nikalte hain

Naina comes into this world and takes daksh hands off her and says

Naina; kya daksh? itne saare film ke dialogues( u idiot, sry cdnt control)..aur kisi ke bina marjaana..ye sab sirf kehne ke liye,Waise bhi mere aane se pehle bhi tumhari khud ki zinadgi thi...tab kaise jeete the

Daksh; puts hands on naina( Aadat hein)...and says..' haan tum teek kehrahi ho.Tumhari aane se pehle bhi meri ek zindagi thi..lekin uss waqt..bas meri zindagi jaa rahithi.kuch bhi khass nahi tha...kuch bhi nahi..Leki tumhare aane se meri zinadagi badalgayi..poori tarah se

Arey mujhe ye bhi pata nahi tha ki mein bhi kisis se pyar karsakta hoon, mera dil bhi kisi ke liye dhadak sakta hain..

Jab mein peeche mudh kar dekhta hoon tho mujhe aisa lagta hain meri zinadagi uss waqt se shuru huyi jab hum pehli baar mille the aur uss waqt poora hua jab tum meri pyar bani..mujhe tumhari aadat pad gayi ya phir ye kahu ki I am addicted to u...tumhara bina nahi rehsakta...

Iss adhoore daksh ko tumne pooraa kiya naina ..tumne..tumhara pyar ne,ab isse phir se adhoora mat banavo..seh nahi pavunga..dil tooth jayega mera..aur ye kisi film ke dialogues nahi..mere dil ka hein

( I always have a feeling that the love daksh puts in his words in SSBN for naina is verymuch less compared to what is expressed in his eyes..Just thought of bringing it out...)

both eyes are filled with tears rolling down...😭...

Naina wipes her tears; daksh..pls mujhe akela chod dho aur gar ek pal ke kiye bhi tumne mujhse sacha pyar kiya tho mujhse se kuch bhi mat poocho, lekin hum ek nahi hosakte..saying this she turns her back to daksh..Slowly the song is played in back ground

Tadap tadap ke iss dil se aah nikalthi rahi..mujhko saja di pyar ki,aisa kya guna kiya..tho looth gaye hum teri mohobaat mein😭

Daksh looks at her for some time with pain and starts going from there, slowly peeche mud ke dekhta hain naina ko.and when he turns, naina looks at him...Daksh leaves from there closing office doors.. with heavy hr8 walking like lost, goes into his room closes the door

( jism mujhe deke mitti ka seeshe sa dil kyu banaya)..song

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Naina bhi asu baha rahi hein, suddenly door opens she turns back and gets shocked...

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gr8 dialogues from daksh and agree with u that his love is more expressed from hi eyes than his words

Edited by storytellerSSBN - 13 years ago

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DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Lucky yaar kya title diya hai "Dakshu on Mission - meri jaan Naina" loved it 👏

Dakshu dear to bahut hi chalak hai 😉 I always wanted him to be like this 😍

Now I am more curious to know the next step of Dakshu...😍

Jaldi jaldi expose kar do Sohini ko aur ha 4 - 5 tappad to banta hai dear...😆

Edited by DakshnaFan - 13 years ago

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan
Lucky yaar kya title diya hai "Dakshu on Mission - meri jaan Naina" loved it 👏
Dakshu dear to bahut hi chalak hai 😉 I always wanted him to be like this 😍

Now I am more curious to know the next step of Dakshu...😍

Jaldi jaldi expose kar do Sohini ko aur ha 4 - 5 tappad to banta hai dear...😆

😊sahi kaha yar...ditto 4 al wat u said...

lucky awsum he as usual...luvd t. kash dakshu ssbn me bhi aisa hota. khair chodo. FF me to hai apna smart cute lawyr😊😊...nd ha, do thappad meri taraf se bhi lagva do pls😆😆...

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lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

@dakshna fan and sweetaish

Dnt wry yaar...tappad tho lagenge sohini ki chehre par.. 4 OR 5 tho for sure...aise dhulayi karega dakshu dono ka...kE p-ZOO ke saare members dekhtehi rehjayaenge..😆. aur tum sab logo ka bhadaas nikal jayega...aur mera bhi😉

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: lucky.m
@dakshna fan and sweetaish

Dnt wry yaar...tappad tho lagenge sohini ki chehre par.. 4 OR 5 tho for sure...aise dhulayi karega dakshu dono ka...kE p-ZOO ke saare members dekhtehi rehjayaenge..😆. aur tum sab logo ka bhadaas nikal jayega...aur mera bhi😉

thnku darlin🤗...nd btw, mene dono luv-birds ko terrac se neeche utaar diya hai😆😆😆...

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Neethu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Yaar neetu..Inta formal comment.😕.I am lucky dear.😉.ek pal mein paraya kar diya😭..just kidding and pls..itna formal mat ho javo..💔 Ajeeb feel kar rahi hoo

oh.. i was not being formal yaar... i came to the forum just to read the FFs. I was hurry in reading things in less time. but reading ur FF i couldn't leave without commenting. thats y such a short comment.. sorry if u hurt...

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

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Part -9

Next day morning--------------P-Zoo

Naina's room

Naina is taking her clothes from cupboard and finds that sonakshi had forgetten her shaadi ki jhoda.She takes it and and is going into ayi's room to give it to her.Accidently woh daksh se takra jaati hain ❤️ aur saree falls down

Both look into each others eyes,and both bend together to pick the saree( remember scene where they put hands on phone)...naina tere tere song.lost in each other.Ayi is just passing from there and notices this.

Ayi; naina

Both come into this world .Naina handovers shaadi ka jhoda to ayi saying psycho bhulgayi and starts leaving from there.

Ayi; kaise ladki hain ye sona...sabse important cheez bhool gayi

Daksh; ayi..tu chinta kyu kar rahi hein..main kaam se bahar jaa raha hoon, jaakar deke avungana..wiase bhi sonakshi ke ghar se jaane ke baad ek baar bhi usse baat nahi hua(jhoot)..bhura laga hoga...haina😆

Ayi is extremely happy😃 and naina is sad😕 listening this..but dakshu is happy 😊...u will know y😉

Daksh is about to leave, just then sanket comes and asks daksh if he is going out and is free can he collect rohini's reports from hospital.Daksh says..he will do it, sanket reminds him its not the same hospital, this time they went to some other hospital on rohini's insistence and gives him the address and details

Daksh leaves on his mission .👍🏼.

J-ZOO(JOSHI Zoo)

Daksh enters the ZOO.Supriya is in hall.Seeing daksh she feels happy and invites him.After formal greetings, daksh asks where sonakshi and mr joshi are?.Supriya says sonakshi went out with her friends and joshi is in office

.Daksh says sonakshi forgot her shaadi ka jhoda and gives it to supriya , supriya asks him to wait till sonakshi comes and he can give it to her. Daksh willingly agrees and picks up a conversation

Daksh; Aunty.Ab sonakashi ki haath kaise hai?

Supriya; ab teek hogaya hain aur kal sona ka bandge bhi nikalgaya

Daksh; achi baat hain...Sonakshi ka bandage dekh kar muje laga ki aur bhi waqt lagega teek ho mein(oh really)😆..lekin kaafi jaldi teek hogaya 😲,...lagta hein sonakshi ka treatment karne wala doctor acha hain

Supriya; haan , beta acha hua ki shaadi se pehle teek hogaya..aur rahi baat doctor ki tho MR.dayal kapoor( some random name)..hamare family doctor hein

Daksh; Mr.dayal kapoor...hmmm,kaafi suna hain, aunty mujhe lagta hain aapko mujhe uss doctor ki details deni chahiye..kyunki kal shaadi ke baad aap ki beti phir se kuch fracture karlegi..mein mr. kapoor ko bhula lunga and takes out his phone( my smart hero )

supriya u know how she is simple and innocent aur woh number de deti hain

Supriya. laughs ; kyu nahi?.number lo and she gives him number and his visting card

Daksh; waise aunty..aap pls sonakshi ko mat batana ki hamare beech baatein hue..ye hamara raaz hain( precautionary measures)

Supriya;; haan haan..raaz raaz hi rahegi...😛(good for dakshna)

Daksh; waise ayi bahut ghabaragayi, jab sonakshi ne phone kiya tho

Supriya; nahi nahi sonakshi nahi..hamare maid ne phone kiya..tab hum bahar gaye the

Daksh looks around and finds maid working in hall.He asks supriya for water

Supriya; bato bato mein tho bhool gayi,chai piyoge beta and daksh agrees and says aap ki haathon ka😉..supriya gives a smile and leaves to kitchen

Daksh calls the maid and have a small conversation with her.He hears the car sound aur alert hojaata hein.Psycho enters aur daksh ko dekh kar khusi se paagal ho jaati hain..comes and hugs him😕..Daksh also puts a hand around her( part of drama..dnt wry) and reminds sonakshi that they are in her house.Sonakshi leaves him and daksh gives her shaadi ka jhoda and says he agreed to marry her but he needs time to accept her(oh really).😆.Bechari psycho she believes all this and happily agrees and asks about naina. daksh says he doesn't want to speak about her and naina is a closed chapter in his life( itne saare jhoot dakshu..very bad)😆

Just then supriya comes with tea, sonakshi goor kar dekhrahi hain ki uski ekaanth bangh ho gaya..After chai paani daksh leaves, sonakshi tries to stop him but daksh says he have lot of things to done before marraige so he needs to leave

Dakshu goes and sits in his car, takes out visting card and gives a smile.and says MR.Dayal...hmmm😉

Daksh; chalo ek kaam tho poora hogays ab doosra... and he starts the car and is baout to leave he notices sonakhsi's car( white ).and remembers the scene where a similar car tried to hit naina...He thinks of something goes to the hospital , takes the report and is about to go back,uski nazar.padati hein hospital ki lab par " sarvodaya labratories"

Daksh remembers sankets words about rohini's insistance and he finds all the pieces of puzzle falling into places...(smartie)

Days are passing by ,everybody is busy in arrangements and naina with hvy hr8🥺 is involved in wedding preperations and daksh is busy with his own arrangements with aku, ...In between daksh and naina dnt have any specific moments other than aankhon ki gustakiyaan❤️.daksh ki pyar bhari aur naina ki dard😭 bahri aankhone ke beech...

Wedding day arrives...😕...

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Edited by lucky.m - 13 years ago

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LadyMystique

@LadyMystique

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Dont cut it into so many parts!😔 just go on writing will u? u know i cant wait with patience😳

Btw...nice story...nice to see daksh acting smart!😛

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: LadyMystique
Dont cut it into so many parts!😔 just go on writing will u? u know i cant wait with patience😳

Btw...nice story...nice to see daksh acting smart!😛

Dnt wry. dear.just 3 to 4 more parts...and a happy ending..Soon😉

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

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PART 10

Shaadi ka din...

Muhurat; evening 4.00PM( daksh ki), 3.45 pm(aku ki shaadi ka muhurat)

Naina's darjeeling train; 6.30 pm

(2.00pm P-ZOO)

All arrangements are done...sab log mandap ke liye nikhal rahe he,Aku comes and asks naina when is she coming..naina says she will be there in 1 or 2 hrs as she just completed arrangements and will take time to get ready...

..Every body leave except naina.Sablog gaadi mein beth rahe hain..aur naina apne room ki kidki se dekh rahi hain.

Suddenly daksh ki nazar upar jaata hein, both share a eye lock.😳.tears spill out of naina's eyes😭 and she goes away from window

Daksh within himself; bas aaj shyam tak ki baat hain naina..I promise uske baad tumhare annkhone mein asu kabhi nahi aane doonga..kabhi bhi nahi aur humare zinadagi sirf khusiyan hongi

Naina's room

Naina apna luggage pack kar liya and she takes one last round of her Patwardan house( Didnt refer as P-zoo as its from naina's point of view) remembering all her moments with ayi , baba and all members and the day she entered PH and her fights with daksh and later their pyar❤️.. judai and crys out😕.😭cursing her fate..

After sometime naina comes back to thoda normal stage..looks at watch..3.30pm..

Naina; bas adha ghantha aur..shaadi ho jayegi( with pain)

,she takes her luggage, writes a letter( U can imagine the contents..Some urgent work came out in darjeeling and she needs to leave)..She knows ayi will cover up later part...She leaves to railway station..as she dnt want to get hurt more, by memories..

Naina travel plan' first to kolkata in train..then to new jalpaiguri and next darjeeling

5.00 pm..

Mumbai railway station

Naina takes her ticket goes and sits in her seat..lost in thoughts..Just then..somebody comes and says

Excuse me; ye mera seat hai..

Naina lifts her head and gets shocked😲..lol..its dakshu😆

PS;; More parts coming up shortly,

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