Rabir ff-'Why Us'[Last chap-PG 48] - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Kabir:WOW Rachna you woke up before me today
Rachna:Yes I thought of preparing you breakfast
Kabir:Sometimes You behave like a wife too
Rachna:I did breakfast bcos I am sick of your sandwiches so thought of doing myself
Kabir:You want me to laugh for that
Rachna:Who cares..Take your coffee
Kabir:Thanks madam..
Rachna:Kabir can you take me out today
Kabir:So this is the real reason for your coffee
Rachna:Pls Kabir I want to do shopping,
Kabir:Ok get ready we will go
Rachna raised her hand to share a hifive with Kabir but Kabir was not interested
Rachna:You are so irritating
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Rachna got ready in blue salwar.Kabir was in casuals..
Kabir:Rachna its too late coming or not
Rachna:Ya I came, What Is this Kabir where is car
Kabir was sitting in bike n giving a stylish pose , Rachna was shocked,She gave weird looks on Kabir
Kabir:Rachna we need to roam more,We cant use taxi na..This is my friends bike actually dont worry I will get a car soon
Rachna:This is not fair,I dont like to go in bike with you..See how small space is..How can I sit here
Kabir moved a bit forward and showed her space
Kabir:Pls madam,Its getting late
Rachna:Ok but promise me you should not touch me
Kabir:Deal,I wont ok..First sit pls
Rachna was about to side when Kabir hit his head with his hand
Kabir:Rachna pls sit double side,I will drive fast Rachna murmered something at sat doubleside.Kabir drove too fast that Rachna needded something to hold,She finally held Kabir's shoulder.Kabir checked Rachna from his mirror remembring what Rachna said
"but promise me you should not touch me" He drove too fast and applied sudden brake Her body jumped n hit on his back .Rachna was forced to hug him now.In fear she closed her eyes and hugged his back tightly.Kabir was all laughing Rachna didnt open her eyes nor broke the hug till they reached.
Rachna:Cant you drive slow,You killed me
Rachna throwed killing looks on Kabir
KAbir:I should be angry on you..You put on your whole weight on my back n its paining now
Rachna:too funny..come lets go
They entered the mall.Rachna had a big list for shopping.
Rachna:Kabir ji,I need to get new dresses first
Kabir:Ok but I will select,I dont think your taste is good.
Rachna:Whatever you say Kabir ji
Kabir:Whenerver you need anything from me..You giving too much respect..You really dangerous
Rachna gave a childish smile and Kabir admired her.
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Kabir:Rachna how is this one
Rachna scanned the dress from top to bottom,It was a sleeveless top a transcy one too
Rachna in her mind "Whats wrong with Kabir,How can I wear this,He wants me to see in this..Oh no"
Rachna:I dont like it,Kabir ji can I take this one
Kabir:Am buying for you,Its my choice today..You pls shut up
Kabir chose more dresses for her. It was all short short ones and Rachna was getting more tensed
Kabir:Go try these all and see,Go n come soon
Rachna:Kabir ji,Pls I feel shy..I will try in home
Kabir:Rachna,Only I am here na then whats your problem
Rachna raised her eyebrows and Kabir put his head down for the comment he made

..Without saying anything Rachna took all dresses from him and went to trial room..Kabir waited for her with so much excitement.
In trial room,Rachna was confused with the dresses.She didint feel anything is comfortable she finally tried a yellow top and a blue skirt,It was only till her knees.With so much hesitation she managed to come out with that
Kabir first thought its some other girl so just avoided her
Rachna:Kabir
Kabir:Rachna you
Kabir's mouth opened on seeing her,Her bare hands Her sexy legs Her small belly which she was struggling to hide He kept scanning her. untill He noticed her discomfort.
Rachna:Kabir can I change
Kabir put his arm around her.Rachna felt goosebumps when his arms touched her bare hands.She jerked and Kabir took it back
Kabir:You are so beautiful today..I really mean it
Rachna:You dont like me in salwars
Kabir:I like that too but India dress style, idont prefer much
Rachna thought to herself "Tonight I will show you the power of real indian dress style" She said it with a wicked smile
Rachna brought all the dresses which Kabir selected.And the finally came out for lunch
Rachna:Am too tired..need a heavy lunch
Kabir:You eat sea food
Rachna:Kabir am vegetarian.dont you know that
Kabir:Ok Ok dont start..I will order vegetarian
Rachna:Thanks
It was self service in that hotel and Kabir made Rachna sit on a table and Kabir went to order,It was a long queue Rachna got bored of waiting and went to roam
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Kabir came back after twent mins and was shocked seeing Rachna missing from table
Kabir asked everyone around and he searched for her everywhere.Kabir run on the roads he could not see her.
Kabir to himself "Pls God get her back to me"
He finally found Rachna runnig and she was attempting to cross a road

.A car was about to hit when Kabir dragged her hand and too her back to the platform..leaving his hand Rachna tried to run again.Kabir held her hand again and slapped her
Kabir:Whats wrong with you
Rachna breathed heavily and said something
Kabir:What??
Rachna:Rajiv..I saw him here
Kabir left hewr hand and moved back from her in shock.
Rachna:He was there but seeing me he ran away
Kabir:How can he be here??
Rachna: I dunno..But I saw him..I am sure I can always feel his presence

Kabir had no words to answer..He didnt like that pretty much but felt sorry for her
Rachna cried heavily and Kabir hugged her to console her.She too hugged him and cried .
They thought of going back home and came back to bike.This time Kabir drived very slow making her more comfortable.Rachna was completely lost in Rajiv's thoughts.Kabir checked her every second through mirror.They reached home
Rachna:Am sorry Kabir,I spoiled the day
Kabir:I must be sorry for slapping you,I created a scene am really sorry
Rachna:Haan I forgot You slapped me na..How dare you
Kabir:Its too late to realise
Rachna throwed him a flat smile and both left to each others room.Rachna dialed Rajivs mobile again n again n throwed her mobile.Kabir got scared on hearing some sound and knocked Rachna's door
Rachna:What Kabir
Kabir:You fine na
Rachna laughed" You think I will do something..No way..I am not that coward
Kabir:Not so I was bit scared
Rachna:By the way Kabir why you care for me so much..As far I know You hate all girls but you seem ok with me
Kabir:You are my responsibilty now,If anything happens I should be answered thats why
Rachna:Really
Kabir:What else then you think I like you..No Way pls
Rachna: Uh ok Mr now get lost
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
yupeee hip hip hurray i cmmnted even bfr ur pm accudentally wandered into forum to find ur update will read n comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
What an update it was awesome truly 😳A big hug for this dose to us👏Loved rachana bold attitude in wl love to see her like that and yaa kabir is falling for her yippee😃Loved kabir care for rachana ow wow thanks a lot for the update it's lovely 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: mkakkar93

Hmm atleast oishi wish to see Rajeev in a shady character will be fulfilled in ur ff atleast😆



ha yaar . aab saravathi hi meri sahara hai!!

cv's ne to meri dill hi tor dii..😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: AnjaliPunia

yupeee hip hip hurray i cmmnted even bfr ur pm accudentally wandered into forum to find ur update will read n comment



anju where are you these days??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
owww i like this kabir...he is too much😊
ohhh man all was so well, till rajiv

i hope rachna doesnt forget what she said , and shows kabir the power of the indian dress sytle
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
she raised her hand for hifive
but kt isn't interested😆

love the part//

super se uper wala update saravathi

just mindblowingg .

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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Ohh my my what an update 😛
Omg kabir slapped rachna omg 😭
Poor Rachna rajeev ka bhoot abhi tak nahi utra 😡
I hope that she will forget him asap
I hoped that in this ff Rachna is a little bit modern but the way she was blushing and doing I was schocked
But a really nice update
I saw your update before you could pm me
But I don't think that it is a problem hihi
Update soon
I can't wait
I hope that they will fall soon I love but first dosti between them
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: mkakkar93

What an update it was awesome truly 😳A big hug for this dose to us👏Loved rachana bold attitude in wl love to see her like that and yaa kabir is falling for her yippee😃Loved kabir care for rachana ow wow thanks a lot for the update it's lovely 😳

searching words to express my thanks..Thanks a lot for following each line of my ff n every line u comment gives me lot of satisfaction
Edited by saravathi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: hangok

owww i like this kabir...he is too much😊

ohhh man all was so well, till rajiv

i hope rachna doesnt forget what she said , and shows kabir the power of the indian dress sytle

pls don't miss my next chap..u will know it why..n kindly adjust with Rajiv's char

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