Hi all,
Hope u all having a gr8 weekend so am here again to take you for our Rabir world n sorry If am boring anyone
Chap...13
Rachna:Drive slow man,its 24 hours not 24 mins ok
Kabir:already my half n hour is gone in driving itself.Finally we reached it
Rachna:Why you brought me here? Its a dead end
Kabir kept his finger on her mouth and took her to a small road it was full dark and only one person could walk on the road at a time.Rachna got scared in that darkness and held Kabirs arms who walked in front of her.
Kabir:Rachna am with you
Rachna:How long is this passage,its too dark here
Kabir dragged her shoulders and made her stand before her,In that small passage they were facing each other now,They both could not see each but they were sensing the other.
Kabir:Walk along with me
They both walked as they faced each rubbing each others body.Rachna in dark stepped on his foot so many times.They finally reached the other end.
Kabir:Uhh it was so hot inside
Rachna:You idiot, why did you do this
Kabir turned her chin and pointed towards an island in the mids of a lake.
Rachna:Are we going there??She asked in full excitement
Kabir:Ofcourse Mrs.Kabir.Coming?
He asked it by giving his hand.Rachna kept her hand on his.
Rachna:I am thrilled now.
Kabir hired a boat and held his hand for Rachna to step in,Rachna almost fell on him and they both were in each others arms again.Rachna blushed and Kabir let her free now.
Rachna:Excuse me sir?Why there is only a small passage to reach this island.This is not fair
Boatman:Which passage madam.That dead end but the next road is the real entrance for this island
Rachna looked Kabir suspiciously who laughed at her
Kabir:Come on Rachna..It was fun right
Rachna raised his hand on him to punch but Kabir held her hand.She bent over him now when the boat jerked She lost her balance and Kabir got hold of her waist.Rachna got goose bumps.
Kabir left her free and both went back to their original places.
Rachna:Have you been here before
Kabir:Yup once with my colleagues actually its sply for honeymoon couples
Rachna:What but why you bringing me here
Kabir:Wanted to change our last day as our honey moon
He winked at Rachna who was starring at him
Botaman:Actuall madam you too are made for each other
Rachna:Oh did Kabir pay you anything for that
Kabir:You brilliant Rachna
He said and came sat next to her,Rachna moved away from him,But Kabir put his arms around her and pulled her more close
Rachna:Kabir whats this
Kabir:This 24 hours are mine my darling
Rachna:Dont take advantage of it
Kabir:Sir you say I have rights to put my hand on my wife or not
Boatman:Madam he is only your husband,and he behaves decent too I have seen people kissing in boat itself
Kabir murmered " Who said I am decent,I wish I kiss her now"
Rachna:I heard that n dont even think of it.
Boatman:Sir We reached it and when you want to return give me a call
Kabir:Thank you so much sir,Its a good ride
Rachna:Yes thank you.
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Manager:Yes sir, we welcome the new couple.And we assure you for your privacy.
Rachna:We doont need privacy
Kabir:Rachna shhh
Manager:Have a gr8 time
Manager gave them some new dresses and food n left them showing a small tent in the beach.
Rachna:Whats all this? I should have not agreed for that 24 hours time at all
Kabir:You will like this see..First go fresh up yourself
Rachna:You really mad
Kabir:Why starring at me,I wanna change my dress turn that side
Rachna:But how will I change here
Kabir took the bedsheet which laid down and tied along the tent.Rachna silently admired Kabir.
Kabir:Now Ok madam
Rachna:Not bad
Kabir and Rachna were on other side of screen changing dress.Kabir could see the shadow of her clearly but he turned aside not to see.
Rachna:Not seeing na?
Kabir:uhhh you pls dont see me first
Rachna changed her clothes soon and She wore a shirt and a three fourth jean and she came to other side of screen forgetting Kabir was changing his dress.
Rachna:Am sorry,she said and close her eyes
While Kabir adjusting his jean.
Rachna:You changed
Kabir:Yup you can open your eyes
Rachna's opened her eyes inch by inch and looked him from bottom and was relaxed seeing him dressed.But when her eyes reached his top her eyes widened on seeing his bare chest.
Rachna:Wheres your shirt?
Kabir:What silly question is this,come lets go beach
Kabir wore his sun glass in a stylish way and put his arm around Rachna.Rachna cheeks touched his chest first she tried to balance her head not to touching his skin but her cheek were attracted more to him that her cheeks sticked to Kabir's chest.Rachna was admiring his muscles she felt him too hot.
Kabir offered her juice and they both walked towards beach.There were more couples more intimate.But Rachna seeing the beach ran to water
Kabir:What am I going to do with this kid ?
Rachna:Kabir come na
Kabir too followed him to the beach,there were many girls who were looking at Kabir.And they were giving sexy poses in front of him Kabir avoided them and walked to beach.Rachna pulled him to water and spilled water on him.
Kabir:Rachna No, enuf
But she didnt stop she continued to spill water on him and Kabir to avoid her carried her on his arms.Rachna was laughing like anything and her legs were attracting Kabir and she was shaking her legs up and down while laughing. Kabir didn notice Rachna had filled water in her mouthRachna spilled water on his face from her mouth now.and laughed again.Kabir shouted Rachna and dropped her down and ran from the beach before she get up.Rachna woke up from beach and chased him on sand.
When Rachna was chasing Kabir bumped in to another girl and she was behaving closer to him.Rachna was shocked seeing it.Kabir tried to avoid that x girl but she was more on him and went to kiss him.Rachna pushed her aside and drgged Kabir's arm more close to her.
Rachna:Are these girls? cant they see you are not single here
Kabir:But Rachna I am still single na
Rachna:What?
Kabir:Yes from tomo I will be single only
Rachna:Sorry I didnt know you liked that girl..Can I go and ask her sorry
She said and walked with anger towards that girl and Kabir blocked her path and laughed at her
"Why you laughing now" Shouted Rachna
You mad,I love you and love only you He said it kneeling before her stretching his hand.
Rachna bent over him and gave him a small slap and ran back to beach but Kabir held her leg and Rachna tried to release her leg but he got hold of her upper leg and pushed her down.Rachna was trying to balance and Kabir kicked on her leg and she fell on sand now.All her dresses were full of beach sand now
Kabir stood up and laughed heavily pointing at her.Rachna tired to wake up and fell again on sand for which he laughed more irritated Rachna walked towards the tent angrilly.
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Kabir came back to tent with lunch.Rachna was so hungry but since she was angry she said no for food.
Kabir:Its sooo nice Rachna.Dont miss it
He ate chocolates mouthfull which was tempting her.Kabir ate all the lunch without leaving anything for Rachna.Rachna came on sat on his chairshand.
Rachna:Dont you feel guilty you idiot,am starving here
Kabir:I asked you to eat na
Rachna:Getlost
Kabir smiled and gave her new box of chocolate cakes and fed her a piece of it.Rachna hugged him in excitement.There was chocolates under his lips le she broke the hug while she broke the hug she noticed it and kept his tongue tip to taste the chocolate.Kabir was surprised seeing Rachna do this He saw her with a big question mark.
Rachna:I love chocolates
Kabir:Your lips is full of chocolates too
Rachna:Dont take advantage Mr
Kabir:Oh is it,then you first stop touchimg me always
Rachna smiled and brought her lips more closer
Kabir:Mrs Kabir you are making me crazy now,Dont start it then I will do you something
Rachna:You really dare to do me anything come then
Kabir:Dont think I wont
Rachna:Let me see that too
Kabir held her waist and pulled her close to him and Rachna was only giggling now.His lips opened and locked her lips in it.He He found her lips tasted more than chocolates and Rachna too was responding for his kiss now.Kabir didnt stop it he went wild on her he pushed her to the tent end where they hit by a stick and they both stopped there moving but not kissing.
Manager:Oh sorry,Excuse me
Both Kabir and Rachna felt too awkward now and both cant face him
Manager:Sir am sorry, Hmm we have arranged programmmes for couples if you are free you can join
He said and laughed at both.
Rachna:All bcoz of you cant you behave decent
Kabir:So you still gonna act like you dont love me
Rachna:Only 8hours left man
Kabir:You are really too much
Rachna's thoughts " Only after this 24 hours I will accept my love wanna know what n ll you will do for me"
Kabir's thoughts " Pls god this 8 hours should not end change her somehow,I cant live without her"
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Music was set and all the couples were dancing.It was fully decorated with lights
Manager:We welcome you all ,We gonna conduct a small dance game here and the best dancing pair will have the surprise gift.Everyone clapped and joined the dance club.
Rachna:Dance in this dress see how dirt am
Kabir:Even I feel the same
Rachna:You should have bought me dresses
Kabir:Its was unplanned am sorry,I dont wanna waste my time
Rachna:Buying dress for me is waste of time for you..You
Rachna raised her hand and Kabir laughed and dragged her hand to the dancing floor.They both danced so comfortable and they were too fast and their lifts was so hot,When they ended they got the highest score and Rachna got excited and kissed him on his cheek
Kabir:Dont take advantage
Rachna:I will only you should not
She said it all smiling and moved towards the stage Kabir scolded her badly and he too moved to the stage.They were given the prize which was a special room in that whole resort to spend a night for the couple.
Kabir:No use of this gift na Rachna,It would be good if someone would have won it
Rachna:Why cant we use it usefully
Kabir
She said and ran from the place,Surprised Kabir followed her.
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Rachna:This room is really good.She said and ran to the fridge which was filled with food
Kabir:This is what you meant using it usefully.Your tummy gonna burst one day
Kabir went to change his dress and he came back wearing only a towel untill then Rachna was eating.
Rachna:Are you trying to seduce me,Why this towel now
Kabir:Madam go and change your dress.your shirt is full of sand
Rachna:I dont want to change now,You sleep first later I will
Kabir moved to the bed and pretended to sleep.Rachna confirming he slept she went to change her cloth.She could not find anything but Kabir's shirt and she wore that and came back to bed and was shocked seeing Kabir starring at her.
Rachna:You didnt sleep yet
Kabir:Why should I n he checked Rachna's leg which she was trying to hide by stretching his shirt and Kabir laughed at her
Kabir:My shirt looks more good on you
Rachna:Stop starring at me and sleep pls
Kabir went to bed again and Rachna too came to bed.she kept more pillows between them.
Kabir:Actually its for my safety not for yours
Rachna: Sorry I will laugh for that in morning am going to sleep now.
Kabir:Rachna these 4 hours are our last moments n u going to sleep
Rachna:What you want to do then
Kabir crossed the pillows n went closer to her.
Rachna:Stop there and talk
Kabir:You know what Rachna,In my shirt second button is torn
Rachna looked down at her and checked if anything could be seen.And Kabir was laughing
Rachna:Nothing can be seen,don't lie
Kabir:Oh is it hmm let me tell colour of your
Before he could tell she jumped on him and shut his mouth.Her towel got loose now.She covered her with bedsheet immediately.
Kabir:I just kidded,nothing is seen
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Kabir:Rachna only two hours left pls accept you love me
Rachna:I dont love you..
Kabir:Will you really leave me after this two hours.
Rachna:Yup am sorry
Kabir angrilly turned his back to her
Rachna:Our last moments you want to end with a fight
Rachna said it placing her head on his arm.Kabir now turned to her.Rachna saw Kabir was controlling his tears.Rachna cant see it n kissed his eyes.
Kabir:Plz I need you Rachna
Rachna:Wait for two more hours Kabir
Kabir:For what to see you with Rajiv,I really cant imagine you wth anyone.you are my wife
Rachna's thought:If I accept it now,I will loose in bet,sorry Kabir pls wait 2 more hours
Kabir:Say Rachna,say you love me
Rachna remained silent.Kabir grew more angry and both got their dress changed and left the place
They again came to boat but remained silent all the way.
This time Kabir didnt take that short path which hurted both.Kabir driver the car fast
Rachna:Still only one hour there and where we going now
Kabir:I will drop you safe dont worry
Rachna was all planning how to propose him she was counting the seconds.Kabir was driving too fast in anger.
Only ten mins left shouted Rachna in excitement
Kabir stopped the car and looked at her.He took her hand and put his ring to her.
Kabir:I thought of giving the ring when you accept my love but Its ok..hmm be safe pls take care
Any problem try to contact me pls.I will be always der fr u.He gave her a blank cheque.These days were really the best days in my life.Will never forget each n every second I had it with you,I was too much over confident that you love me but Yes I lost my bet no my life.But Rachna atleast one second in this 24 hours you didnt think You love me
Rachna was controlling her tears and excitement and counting her seconds.
Kabir:Its ok..Happy married life atleast dont trouble Rajiv,Wish I was him,He said it kissing her on her forehead
Rachna could not act anymore she opened the car door and ran out This time Kabir didnt follow her instead he took the car and left.
Rachna was shocked seeing where she is.Its the hospital where Rajiv is admitted.
Rachna turned to check for Kabir but he was gone.Their 24 hours ended n Rachna shouted
"I love you Kabir"but he was not there to here.She stood there crying and Rajiv touched her from behind she thought its Kabir but her smile faded when she knew it was Rajiv
Rajiv:Where did you go?I was searching you everywhere n see am walking
Rachna gave him a fake smile
Rajiv:Wheres Kabir?
He is gone shouted Rachna crying heavily which made Rajiv more confused.
There Kabir stood in airport thinking about Rachna
Edited by saravathi - 11 years ago