Angini- Ek hogaye hum lekin beeti Zindagi nay .pg3

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luv_sakshi

@luv_sakshi

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Awesome Shanti!👏...God! You're scenes were so passionate & intense..😳...made be blush even reading it!😳😉...liked the flow of the Angini love story post KC..😊...the CTs need to devote more time on developing this track before getting the J-factor in..😕...but sadly there's just no time for for anything now...everything's being rushed up with!😭...really waiting to read the next part Shanti..😉...please post it soon! Thank You for this Beautiful thread!😃

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apus fan

@sami01

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

shanti blush blush..dil ki dhadkan bhadne lagi hai......

am speechless......

kya kahoon re....

wil come back in evening to comment detail mein

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poo_s

@poo_s

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

di yeh FF parne k baad bhi "u want me to calm down"

😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

dhuan dhuan ho raha hai sama
kahi toh hain aag lagi
ke ho na ho yeh tera kaam hain
ke shola badan hai tu hi❤️

if ct's copy this scenes also nah! like that SINDOOR scene then I m sure gonna FAINT☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
pls di update the next part soon👏

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krithika

@Wonderfullife

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

wow shanti, beautifully written and i was already imagining them in those scenes while reading, hope the cts come up with these kind of scenes in bidaai.

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notinuse

@notinuse

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

omg i am gasping for air.. i was blushing ☺️so much.wow!!!

it was amazing esp. the SR.it was just perfect.. you had chosen every word so carefully it wasn't to vulgar and it was to bare. you left me begging for more. please continue. by the looks of it i don't think the cv's will show a SR for angini 😭 but i after reading urs i have been blown away how words can be just as meaningful as actions. well done you👏 x alot of work went into that i can tell x 🤗😳

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Shantiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Wow beautifullllllllllllll. Hayeeeeeeeeee kitna romantic tha yaar.😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ I am in the world of angini.I am full to flatttttttttttt. Kash before the girl enters I hope we see such a scene in bidaai.

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x-Jenny-x

@x-Jenny-x

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

😲 mind bowing! x

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Shanti

@shanti05

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Thank You soo much for all your responses!!

I am overwhelmed !!! I just pour down what I felt would make a beautiful portion for Anmol and Ragini space at this moment

I hope the creatives can give us something on these lines as the track seem to be changing by the day.

I am not too creative but did try my level best to keep the readers happy with my little bit of imagination

Will update the part of the Beeti Zindagi in a bit !!

🤗