Tumhara Anmol -My first ff arranged properly. - Page 24

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Posted: 15 years ago
Sammy...we'll wait for your sequel yaar! But please put it up soon!

Why can't the CTs get over this Sakshi track n move on to developing the Angini track beautifully? There's so much potential that's being wasted!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Does that include my J part? Please say it does!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashrozia

Does that include my J part? Please say it does!!

yes yews magar ladki tumhari pasand ki nahi li😆 u know na i love her more than ragini kya karoon....but will sure have ur part in it😆😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Sam! Are we getting some love from you this weekend? I am going to try and post my FF this weekend too....😊


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Posted: 15 years ago
ok friends so here i am ocntinuation from this FF....
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Posted: 14 years ago
This ff was written long back ,loads of story happned after this one was finished,so i tried to add pictures arrange all posts properly for all of you to enjoy it...
this was my very first attempt at writing something,so it is very close to my heart
for some of my freinds who joined forum later on and wanted to read my previous work...here it is....
friends do read and leave ur comments....and tell me how is it....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Diiiiiiii you are genioussssss. Aap ne ye karke meri muskele assan kardi. abi ek page se doosre page jane ka takleef nahi hogi na. Thank di thank you.🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sammy i have forgottn in one need to refresh my mind
Achha hai lets me start all over again !
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SukuluvsParul

Diiiiiiii you are genioussssss. Aap ne ye karke meri muskele assan kardi. abi ek page se doosre page jane ka takleef nahi hogi na. Thank di thank you.🤗

sure sweetie am glad ke u reading it again i had forgotten,now realized i even wrote balm scene lol but it was anmol applying😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
@sami..thank you so much.😊
now it so easy to read and get the flow of the story ..
of course the pics added is a plus point so as to understand the scene and the emotion...
it was a hit this FF..remember it and now have read all the parts and its a treat..must say you really did a fantastic job..👏
all the emotions well blended.be it for anmol/ragini/anamika. from his past...
the tears.emotional turmoil..the anger.the jealousy..the romance..love..so well described in each scene.
my best moment ..anmol anger in the garden and how he grabbed ragini's hand and directly in his arms....kaash for once we could get such a scene in bidaai..
next the the bedroom scene...ragini all jealous and angry ..their heated discussion and ended by a beautiful pasionate romantic scene..ragini looking ethereal and anmol lost in her beauty ..very intense scene of both...hope in season 2 with a continuation of angini's story we do get such a passionate and intense scene of both..this one is in the past of anmol with anamika's entry...
its so beautiful and so capturing..heart touching as it has all the mixed feelings for each character in this FF...
its a delight reading it once more..
you do write soooo well and knows how to keep the readers interest..thumbs up and applause to you..👍🏼👏👏...
Edited by savee_k - 14 years ago

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