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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: lisasandra

Wow Smitha ,nice yaar .I am not good writter at all .So hey guys star to write somethings regarding Anmol- Ragini.


Hmm ,I realy want Anmol will get sick now then we will see ragini's worry towards anmol .And Anmol will request ragini sit beside him and she will feel shy but she do whatever anmol wants and they both will talk and talk and then ..😉Next step you guys think 😳only.




wow i would love to see this.One of my fav novel has this theme lol and guess what,the heroine was married,lost her husband,husband's cousin had been in love with her for years and u get the drift lol.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: ~*simran*~

I suck at writing, but I'm a total romantic ji lol. Well for now, I would like them to be alone in the house-the normal romantic situation lol.

Everyone can go at mamaji's and Ragni can stay back to wait for Anmol. However, monsoon times and it rains heavily, so everyone stuck at their respective places (with Anmol making it home to Ragni lol). Electricity outage and all. Haye, mere saath ho jaye yeh lol



Baarish mein,no electricity,lightning and thunder and of course Rags in Anmol's arms lol.Love it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i want a hugggggggggggggggggggggggggg looooooooool i am no writer ladies but i will sure try...my hand too thanks for sweet Post Maine abhi dekhi ...👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sami, u r not good?!I know for sure ur stories would be romantic lol.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow thats an interesting thread

Well I had made one shots maybe I can put it here
its not the romantic one but Anmol's advances send a chill in Ragini's spine

I am just CCP here
I will come up with romantic ones a little later 😉

This one has Vasu also here😆


This is a situation where Gunni needs permission for the dance competition.

Gunni is very tensed and she wonders how she can talk to vasu after all that happened last time around and Anmol cachu was given soo much of bhashan by Vasu..
She is worried and she is walking down the corridor of RH..
Gunni talks to herself " Chachu mujhey himmat do na taki mai badi maa say baat karo!!"

From behind someone taps her she looks back and Anmol is standing in his jogger dress and says "Hi darling kya tum muhey yaad kar rahi thi!!" he smiles after saying those sweet words..

Gunni says "Chachu kya Badi ma maney gi??"

Anmol smiles again and says" Ha Gunni tum baat karo aur mai yahi pay hoon tumharay liye!!"

Vasu walks in with Ragini who are talking about some new furniture for Tammana and Kushi's room..

Vasu seems happy Gunni looks at her and says to herself " Badi ma tho kush dikrahi hai Mai ab hi jakaar baat karthi hoon.."

Gunni clears her throat and go to Vasu she is a little hesitant looks at Anmol who tells her to be bold and not afraid.. Gunni smiles back and then looks at Vasu and says " Good Morning Badi ma!"

Vasu smiles back and says " Good morning Gunni!! Aaj hum bahut kush hai Ragini nay Tammana aur Kushi key room kay liye bahut accha furniture select kiya hai aur unkay room mai aab bahut change dikhay ga!!"

Gunni smiles seeing Vasu happy she says" O great Badi ma I am also happy for them..and continues" Badi maa kya Mai aap say kuch pooch sakthi hoon?" Vasu still happy says " Poocho Gunni jo chiye poocho !!"


Gunni is thrilled and she says " Badi ma Kya aapki permission mileygi muhey national level; pay dance compition kay liye selection mila hai !!"


Vasu's faces changes from happy to a little annoyed since Gunni is not studying and interested in dance and she has high expectations for her..
Gunni makes a really sorry face and asks Vasu " Please badi ma!!"

Annoyed Vasu syas" kissnay tumhey yeah saab poochnay kay liye beja ??" She looks around and sees Anmol who is listening to all this conversation sitting and reading the newspaper.

Anmol puts the newspaper down hearing Vasu's tone and goes up to the trio and sides gunni says" Gunni bahut samajhdaar hai Aap ussay baccahy ki tarah treat maat kijiya!!"
Ragini is about to say somthing Vasu raises her hand to stop everyone from speaking

Vasu starts " teek hai lekin Yeah akhri baar mai permission de rahi hoon aur who bhi meri marzi say naki iss insaan kay kehnay par " looking at Anmol..she continues " Lekin tumhey dance kaun sikhayega aur humay haarnay ki aadat nahi hai tho I want you to stand first !!

Suddenly Vasu's phone rings " Hello Yes Mr. Bansal Ha hum abhi Aa Rahey Hai " She starts leaving and Gunni runs to her and says " Thanks Badi ma!!" Vasu smiles back and says " Meri Bacchi but I want you to stand first!!" she kisses her forehead and leaves..

Gunni thrilled and she runs and hugs Anmol and says " Chachu I love you and gives him a peck on the cheek!!" Anmol a little uncomfortable since Ragini is looking at all this and she is happy for gunni and gives a short smile ..

Anmol says " Arrey Gunni yeah saab tumhari Mehnat hai aur Mrs. Rajvansh tumhari Badi Ma nay tumhey permission dedi !!!"

Then Gunni says " Lekin chachu Aab Ek aur problem hai Aab muhey dance Kaun sikhayega !!"

Anmol puts his hand on her shoulder and then looks at Ragini with a positive look and says "Gunni tumhari chachi jo hai na bahut accha dance karlethi hai !!"

Ragini is not very happy and her expressions are turning from being happy for Gunni a minute ago to getting unhaoppy thinking abt old times and the Taj Utsav and Ranveer who helped her get over her depression and start her classes..Her eyes are filled with tears but she holds them back since she decided to never get back to dancing which she truly loved and she has buried it for teh past 7 years since she wanted able to hold her life in control; so her passion for dance was lost somewhere..

Anmol sees Ragini's change in expression and is a little worried thinking " Did I bring out some old wounded thoughts??"..

Anmol quickly looks at Gunni and says" Gunni muj par chod do Mai tumhari chachi ko tumhay sikhany ko samjahooga .. Jaao tumhey college kay liye deer Ho jayegi driver tumhey chod dega" and he winks at her with his trademark smile and asks her to go !!!

Gunni leaves..Ragini still trying to compose herself is leaving when Anmol grabs her hand and she stops..

Nobody has held her hand with soo much control since soo many years .. The grab was soo strong and she was trying to let go of herself..

Anmol with his soft voice says" Ruko Ragini !! Kya Kar Rahi hai Aap, Kyu Apnay Aap ko itna baand kai rahi hai .. !!" "Ranveer nay bata ya tha Aap bahut achha classical dance karthi hai aur yeah Ek kala hai jo ensaan ko ek pehchaan deti hai !!" Aap Iss Pechaan say door kyun Jaa Rahi hai !!"

Ragini trying to release herself " Chodiya Anmol ji (she still uses the ji word) Muhey kuch nahi karna Koi bhi ehsaas Nahi hai .. Insaalon mai mainay baas Apnay aap ko kho diya hai is parivaar ki kushi mai !!"

Anmol slowly leaving her hand goes a little closer to her.. Ragini steps a little back since she feel some discomfort being at a little closeness also to Anmol, maybe she doesn't want to be drawn towards anyone after what she lost in her life, but this man has always been a moral support for her for the past 7 years, But now his closeness makes me react a little differently why is this happening..she thinks

Ragini tells "Anmol ji aap muhey iss duvidaa mai mat daliyee Muhey meray haal pal chod ji jiya mai Kush hoon!!"

Anmol looks into Ragini's eyes who sees an unusal spark in them and he tells her " Nahi ragini Tumhey Apney kwaish aur apnay ehsaas ko bhara lana hoga .. Dance tumhari rooh mai hai aur tumhey apnay aap say pyaar karna ho ga !!!"

Ragini is unable to look into those sprkling eyes of Anmol who also has a beautiful smile which now a days makes her smile and she walks aways from him and runs towards the room...

Anmol stand right there where she left him and his hands on his waist and says to himself " Haaaaa... Ragini kyun Aap essay Kyun kar rahi hai !!"" Mai bhi ziddi hoon aap ko pata hai aur aap ko manakey rahoonga !!!"

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: SPN_JD_Addicted

Sami, u r not good?!I know for sure ur stories would be romantic lol.

😆😉 u know me well ofcourse lol...mostly i try to steal few good lines....but will try a cute but intense
scene too
and shanti very nice one, i saw this in other thread too and i can imagine the whole scene very well😳👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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One scene I would like to see is Anmol tying Ragini's blouse ki doori

I can imagine a scene where Tammy comes running to Ragini and says " Mamma meri dress ka zip lag nahi raha hai aur guddi pata nahi kaha chaligayee "
Ragini who is also dressing up to go out is just finished wearing her saree , but forgot to put the dori of her blouse since Tammy just came at that time to get the zip of her dress put.
Tammy gets it put and she gives a kiss to Ragini on the cheek and says " Thanks mama " and hurries off..

Anmol walks in as Tammy leaves and she says " papa Mai apnay friend Ria kay ghar Guddi did kay saat aur Kushi kat saat ja rahi hoon.. Meri dress kaisi hai !!"
Anmol who bends down and smiles at Tammy says " Wow my princess is looking beautiful have fun baby " and he kisses her forehead and she goes off..

Ragini is at the dressing table putting some eye liner and make up and Anmol walks in looking at his beautiful wife who looks soo divine and stunning in the Burgundy saree and her hair left loose on one side. He is sneaking and looking at her and she has'nt noticed him since she is a little uncomfortable dressing up when he is around but Tammy stopped her and she was finishing up the rest of her make up.

[The song from once upon a time in Mumbai Pee lo is playing in the background]

Anmol clears his throat so that she knows he has come inside and Ragini puts her bindi on and stand up and is a little uneasy since she was looking at herself in the mirror and she spots him looking at her 😊

She looks at him and says " Aap jaldi aagaye !!"
Anmol looks at her and he cannot take his eyes of her beautiful face " Haa haa aaj Mai jaldi aa gaya .. Aap Kahi jaa rahi hai !!"

Ragini looking around for her mobile on the dressing table since she just had it before Tammy distracted her says" Actually meri Ek friend kay yaha Kitty party hai Mainay Bahut mana kiya lekin vo Nahi mani aur mujhey bolaya hai !!"

Anmol sees her not so happy to go tells her" Ragini Appko jana chahiye Aap din bahr Ghar ka kaam karthy thoda anpany liye waqt banana chahiye !!"

Ragini looks at Anmol and smiles" Thanks Anmol Aap nay yeah kaha mujhey achha laga Aap kahatehy ho tho mai zaroor jaoongi !!"

Ragini turns around moving her hair to the side which had fallen back to finally pick her mobile up when Anmol notices something hanging out of her blouse and her bare skin is showing.

He keeps looking at her beauty and is engrossed on the beauty of his wife and suddenly gets back to his senses thinking should he tell her that the dori is not tied but he takes the courage and tells her" Ra ragini Ap aakey blouse ki Dori khuli hai !!"

Ragini turns around shocked and looks at Anmol who a little down as he is still mesmerized by what he saw and ragini turns around and tries to tie her doori by looking in the mirror and reaching the two strings to tie.. She is struggling and Anmol who doesn't want to see what she is trying to do slowly starts moving away .

Ragini is still struggling and Anmol feels I may be doing wrong but since no one is around shall I go and help her or not..

He keeps thinking walking close and never realizes he is inches close to her

Ragini feels his closeness and suddenly stops and she is facing the mirror . Anmol's hands are trembling but he composes himself and feels I am her husband and I am just helping her out and he picks the two strings of the doori and ties the first knot..
Ragini feels the touch of his fingers on her bare chest and she feels the chill down her spine and looks at Anmol thro the mirror. He looks into her eyes as if telling her I hope its OK since no one is around I thought of helping you.

Then he makes bunny ears with the strings again and ties it to the first knot ,

Ragini again looks at him and then turns around and looks into Anmol's eyes who are gazing at her beauty since he has'nt been soo close to her ever before. She can actually feel his warmth close to her when she turned around .

Ragini in a deep soft tone says " Thanks!!"

Anmol smiles and says " Your welcome"

Ragini is feeling a little scared shy since she doesn't want to stay so close to him for long as she seems to be drawing towards him and she starts leaving when Anmol holds her hand and says " Ragini I hope aap ko bura tho nahi laga ki ..."

Ragini stops him and says" Nahi Aap nay kuch galat nahi kiya !! Aapnay meri madad ki Aap ko ha [Q] is stopped by a call from Guddi who calles "Ragini Di di ... !!"

Anmol is happy to hear some words he has been waiting for years but she didn't complete the sentence he says " Ragini aap bahut sunder dikh rahi ho "

Ragini releases her hand and runs to the door with her heart beating fast and walks out in the corridor, with emotions of happiness and worry where she will fall in love with Anmol

Guys I am not soo good but gave my shot !!

Please let me know if you liked it !!


Edited by shanti05 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@shanti di:One scene I would like to see is Anmol tying Ragini's blouse ki doori
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u r good???? u r tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good di...mind boggling
😍😍😍😍😍😍
uff kya scene hoga .....just loved it
but I guess aisa hone main abhi bahut waqt hai
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Posted: 15 years ago
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bechara censorship ka stamp lajayega 😆 otherwise I thought he would caress her neck and give her a kiss on her beautiful neck and put her hair back in place falling on her bare back !!

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Edited by shanti05 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanti05

bechara censorship ka stamp lajayega 😆 otherwise I thought he would caress her nack and give her a kiss on her beautiful neck and put her hair back in place falling on her bare back !!

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we r the head here😛😛😛
so no DAAR of censorship..........aap to jo cahe soach sakti hai,likh sakti hai😛😳😳😳
yhe bhi add kar dijiye...........
cant even imagine aisa kuch dikhayega...😭😭😭😭😆😆

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