Campaign for a better Story lline in Bidaai

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Dear IF friends,

I am writing this out of extreme disappointment and shattered hopes by current turn of events in Bidaai. I would like everyone who is unhappy or upset about the way Saalekh SR was bludgeoned by Anand Track (AT) to bring this to CTs and Rajan ji's attention.

There are many many better ways the story could have been shaped for Saalekh and Ragvir as they started their new lives away from their parents.Please stop insulting viewers intelligence and show altoo-faltoo story lines as fillers. We are sophisticated viewers who appreciate and understand good stories and want to see meaningful narratives. Please do not stoop Bidaai down to the level of puerility seen in many other serials on TV. We enjoy Bidaai and we really want to see that Ragvir and Saalekh stories are handled with more maturity, reality and pathos.

Here are a few suggestions to the CTs (if they read this forum, I want them to take it seriously)

1. Please DO NOT make Anand an illegitimate son of any character in the story. It is demeaning and deplorable to each character not to mention a slap on audiences who have loved bidaai for its decency and uprightness.

2. Please give Saalekh some romance and some time to breathe and enjoy each other. We want to see more physical closeness, intimacy and love between them. We need to see them more engaged with each other. Right now, they are shown as two people who shared one intimate night and seemed to have forgotten all about it!!. They are NOT AT ALL behaving like two people who have discovered such love and intimacy for each other . 🤢

3. Please develop Ragvir romance beyond Mills and Boons frivolity. They are a strong couple and they need to explore their utter faith and support of each other.

4. Please focus on Vasu's anguish and her misguided attempts to bring her sons back. She needs to learn a lesson in life. The only way she will do that is by losing her wealth, power and reputation.

5. Please do not let Rajvansh's loose their reputation at Ragini's expense. That poor girl does not deserve any defamation and bad name. She is as clean as crystal and needs to be treated as such.

6. Please show how couples learn to deal with money issues, issues of living together with meager means, how they make small and large sacrifices for each others happiness.

7. Lastly, a word of advice to Anand. His histrionics leaves a lot to be desired and is at times very juvenile. If this character is really supposed to look all innocent, then there are other better ways to do it. Reciting dialogs like poetry looks contrived and put-on. Anand, please be natural in your acting and shed the kindergartner-esque innocence.

Thats it folks. I did not intend to offend anyone. This is intended to be a constructive and positive feedback to the CTs. A genuine request to all members - please reply in a positive and constructive tone as well, I know you will! 😊

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SaniaKaSidShukl thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Coming track full of RagVir...since its been quite a long time there is no proper track on RagVir relationship shown yet..So yeahh i surely want to see Ranvir and Ragini playing major role in upcoming episodes..Umm thats all for me
This Anand track is interesting
Focus on Saalekh incomplete scenes as well
Edited by SanihaKaKinshuk - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I also want to see a good role for Ragini. If with Sadhna;s pregnancy, Ragini;s strength and positivity be dealt and executed properly, I dont mind that.
I am not campaigning for Salekh love moments after suhaag raat, as it is completely ruined and after four episodes, it will just not fall into place. This sort of romance does not go off and on. It;s a matter of continuity. We must accept this and live with it that the sooner the love story started, the faster it ended. I had even written in a post before, when the love was has kicked off in full swing, that probably its going to end soon.

But definitely, I ;ld go for the proper execution of a good story line, where the track is just not a maze of many different stories, running at rocket speed.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Serialjunkie,some very valid points!

I feel the disappointment cos as mentioned the foursome track ended as soon as it started.They rushed SaLekh SR.If they knew it before hand that Angad would be busy with ZND and Sara is going somewhere,then they should have sent them to HM or some other place and could have shown us some scenes when they both were available.More than anything else I wanted to see a morning after.

Was it mentioned anywhere that Ragini would be defamed?I mean an obsessed stalker is ok as long as RagVir tackle it sensibly instead of misunderstandings cropping up!

They are laying everything out in the open for a big hungama and I so hope they don't fall flat on their face.

Amidst all this,I am loving Ragini.She mentioned herself that she is not docile like Sadhana is when Vasu was shouting during last year's holi.So I think she wielding that knife was great.And she might not be strong but the knife in her hand surprised that guy and there were people there already!
Edited by smitha80 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Agree 100% with Serialjunkies views!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ smitha,
Actually, I feel now that let the creatives do their work. Lets see what happens.
The story could have been dealt better if after 1-2 episodes of the SR. Salekh were sent somewhere else, like any near by cities, in the pretext that Alekh got a job and then this transition would have occurred. Then the track would have started with Ragini. The contibuity would have been maintained.

Regarding Ragini getting defamed, these are all our speculations. I feel creatives should sow Ragini's inner strength more, than this type of "Knife incidents". If they had made Ragini stand strong and threatening the guy, that would have made more impact. Afterall, its not the knife, but a personality that matters..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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There are somethings that I would like the see as well.....

1. A nice RagVir track I just loveeeee them..... No misunderstandings
please That really doesn't work.

2. And Shalek as well because they didn't get any proper scenes as well after that night.

3. Pleaseeeeee NOOOO misunderstandings between the 4, Because misunderstandings between any of them, Doesn't work for this serial, It really makes us lose interest.

4. I am NOT liking this Anand track..... He is deff causing trouble for the 2 couples, which I am just hatinggggg

5. ALOTTTT more fun/ romantic moments with the 2 couples!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I just want to see nice storyline on foursome of course other character as well Bidaai is a family show so it should include every1
Edited by KiNnY-pArTnEr - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Agree with serialjunkie........
there are many other ways for showing a nice story line....i m not liking this anand track.....ragini is a good actress, she doesn't need to prove that......ragini can play a vital role for vasu to make her realise her fault because vasu is somehow ok with ragini......and obviously we have the right to see beautiful salekh romance track as we waited eagerly for it more than two years.........why the romance between salekh ignored???
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I dont want to see Salekh romancing always, but at least a continuity of their loving glimpses while their understanding and dutiful nature as a married couple growing, should have been highlighted.


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