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Posted: 16 years ago
#81

Sanjuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Oh My Goshhhhhhhhhh just readur scenee

Sanju i swear i want tos ee Ragini werin kh western in the seriall...ur storyy was too good..Aur Ranvri better make ragini wear western dresses in thier second honeymooonn😳😳😳Hailahh i loed itttttt
Wowwwwwwwwwwwww Wowwwwwwwwww WOWWWWWWWWWWWWW...maien imagne keliya Ragvir koo hahah...RS ko yeh scene bhejan hogaa haha
aur woh puraana waal scene woh bhi edit kiya hai kya tumne??
But this one was too good i njoyd it alotttttttttttttttt
👏
Dinaaaaaaaaa:- Oh Myyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy India jaake yeh scen RS ko dedooo..i was blushingggggggg while reading this one o goshhhhhhhhhh
Beautifullllllllll ending was superbbbbbbbbbbbb,,,,lovely storyy dearrrrrrrrrrrrrrr..i njoyed it alott
i need everyoones attention
What i m thinking ..i better share with u all
See We definelty want atleast one scene frm here Jo Ranvir Ragini pe bidaai mein aaye
right?
So wht if hum sub yahaan pe apney imaginations ke scenes add kereinn..i want all of u to participate..Dhara,Jia,Jeenu Premaa eveonee
and jisko jo scene pasand aaraha hai woh us scene ko Like kerdeyy..i mean click teh liek button...in teh end kuch time baad jab bohat saare scenes yahan post hojaayenge..we will countt subse zaada likes kiske hainn
Then i can add tht scene bilkul start pe.Uske Baad we can ask teh mos to make it stickkyy for sumtimee
In a way maybee Hamaari requestt Creatives tak pohanch jaaayee..and maybeeeeeeeeeeee woh ekk popular scenee written by any of uss..WOh Humein Ranvir/Ragini pe dikhjaaay😳😳😳
What say??
i need all ur opinions
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: SanihaKaKinshuk

Sanjuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Oh My Goshhhhhhhhhh just readur scenee

Sanju i swear i want tos ee Ragini werin kh western in the seriall...ur storyy was too good..Aur Ranvri better make ragini wear western dresses in thier second honeymooonn😳😳😳Hailahh i loed itttttt
Wowwwwwwwwwwwww Wowwwwwwwwww WOWWWWWWWWWWWWW...maien imagne keliya Ragvir koo hahah...RS ko yeh scene bhejan hogaa haha
aur woh puraana waal scene woh bhi edit kiya hai kya tumne??
But this one was too good i njoyd it alotttttttttttttttt
👏
What i m thinking ..i better share with u all
See We definelty want atleast one scene frm here Jo Ranvir Ragini pe bidaai mein aaye
right?
So wht if hum sub yahaan pe apney imaginations ke scenes add kereinn..i want all of u to participate..Dhara,Jia,Jeenu Premaa eveonee
and jisko jo scene pasand aaraha hai woh us scene ko Like kerdeyy..i mean click teh liek button...in teh end kuch time baad jab bohat saare scenes yahan post hojaayenge..we will countt subse zaada likes kiske hainn
Then i can add tht scene bilkul start pe.Uske Baad we can ask teh mos to make it stickkyy for sumtimee
In a way maybee Hamaari requestt Creatives tak pohanch jaaayee..and maybeeeeeeeeeeee woh ekk popular scenee written by any of uss..WOh Humein Ranvir/Ragini pe dikhjaaay😳😳😳
What say??
i need all ur opinions

hehehe thank u sanu!
yaar i'd love to see a scene like this too...it's appropriate for RS show, and m sure ranvir and ragiwon't midndoing a scene like this def....!
i'd love to see this scene happen in the show yaar!!!!
nahin i didn't..i thought to leave ti like that only, just added a line or to and dats it!!!
well sanu that idea isn't bad...we could do that...aur wot bout we post the link of this in RS blog and request them to read that particular scene and ask them if they can show that particular scene!
buh I like that idea, it'll be good if they can use a scene like that!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83
OMG dina................................
wot a scene yaar!
would love to see a scene like that yaar!!!
bautiful...i can imagine it all!!!
haila....RS aisa kuch scene zaroor dikhana please!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84

okay guys i have written 2 scene now.....

and i have 2 more lol...😆
okay here's my 1st scene 😊
Aalekh is sitting in his roomand is getting really bored, and asks saadhna to go somehwere, and saadhna says okay lets go to the park, and aalekh says no he wants to go outside delhi.
and saadhna thinks for a while and tells him that she has a idea, and tells the idea to aalekh and asks everyone to gather in the hall.
Everyone is in the hall, iderjit asks saadhna what is it, why are they al gethered here?
saadhna tells that that aalekh and i were thinking of going ot our farmhouse for a few days, as we all haven't been able to stay together for the past few weeks, and says we all need to spend some family time together. Everyone is happy and inderjit says it's a very goodidea, and says that we should all leave early tomorrow morning and asks everyone to go and pack, as they will be leavingearly in the morning.
Ranvir is excited and looks at ragi and ragi notices and looks at ranvir and ranvir winks at her ad ragini smiles shyly and looks at saadhna.
everyone leave t pack and ranvir says to ragi that they should go and pack aswell..
Saadhna: anvir ji aap jaake pack kyun nahin karte? mujhe jiji se kuch baat karni hai.
Ranvir looks at ragi and looks baq @ saadhna and says "bhabi, baatein toh baad mein bhi hoti rahengi....(he looks at ragini) haina ragini?
Ragini: uhhhh....mujhe lagta hai saadhna theek keh rahi hai, aap jaake packing kijiye,main saadhna se baatein karke aati hoon...theek hai?
Ranvir gets angry and leaves. ragini smiles ans looks at saadhna and saadhna says to her that she should go and pack, she was just kidding with ranvir.
Ragini leaves and sees ranvir sitting on the bed in anger with a cushion ( in a cute way)
Ragini grabs a suitcase and says " packing karni hai packing karni hai, ab dekho kaise baithe hai, chaliye uthiye packing kare mein meri help kijiye."
Ranvir: mujhe kahin nahin jaana, nahin packing karni mujhe, tum ao aur hitler i mean apni pyaari jiji se baatein karo. kebab mein haddi...
Ragini smiles ans says, " theek hai toh apni packing kar leti hoon, aur saadhna se keh deti hoon ki aap kahin nahin jaa rahe theek hai?"
Ranvir is shocked and looks at ragini and says "What? Ragini main nahi jaa raha, usse tumhe koi farq ahin padta kya?"
Ragini: nahin, kyun padna chahiye kya? arrey sab wahaan honge, hum sab khoob enjoy karenge, toh farq kyun padega?
Ranvir: nahin nahin, tumhe kyun farq padne laga, main hoon hi koun, tumjao jaake enjoy karo, mere hone na hone se kisiko farq nahn padta, toh tumhe kaha....(rahini puts her hand on ran's mouth )'
Ragini: mujhe farq padta hai ranvir, aapko lagta hai ki main aapse door rehkar enjoy kar sakti hoon? bas itna hi jante hai aap apni ragi ko? I love you ranvir.
Ranvir kisses her hand and says I love youto ragini.
Ragini smiles shyly and looks down.
Ranvir: chalo packing karte hain,
Ragini: ranvir..packing ho chuki hai.
Ranvir: kya? itni jaldi?
Ragini: ji, ho chuki hai....
Ranvir: arrey wah, iskamatlab humare paas ab waqt hi waqt hai...(he puts hisarms around ragi) romance ke liye....
Ragini: ranvir,haath hataaiye,mujhe saadhna se kuch kaam hai...(she leaves)
ranvir tries to grab her buh she is too fast for him😆
Ranvir sighs:saadhna bhabi...nahin kebab mein haddi hai woh, aisi haddi jo har jagah hoti hai. Ranvir beta tera kuch nahin ho sakta...(he falls on his bed and puts the cushion on his face)....
Everyone has reached the farm house - it's night time and everyone is sitting on the floor in the lounge room,ranvir brings a cushion and tells them they al will play a game "pass the cushion" he explains everyone the game...one by one everyone is out and in the end it's ragini and ranvir that are left, ragini felt that she will lose so she quickly throws the cushion @ ranvir and winks and blows a kiss to him,ranvir is surprised and the music stop and he looses...
everyone cheers for ragini, and ranvir said that ragini cheated.ragini says kya? maine aur cheating....woh kaise?
Ranvir is unable to tell and he gives in,ragini asks him to sing a for her, that's his punishment.
ranvir says no will not sing a song, u cheated, ragini makes a cute angry face.
everyone insists that he sings...
Ranvir looks @ ragi and gets up and puts his hand forward and ragini looks at him and she hold his hand and ranvir pulls her towards him, and everyone cheers for ranvir. ragini feels shy here,and ranvir starts to sing the song tune zindagi mein aake, sindagi badal di.
everyone claps...
the game ends everyone has dinner and it is now sleeping time.
inderjit asks all the ladies to sleep in the room and the guys shall sleepin the lounge room, ranvir isn't too happy with that decision.
Saadhna notices that rnavir isn't happy and tells inderit " papa lagta hai ki ranvir ji ko aapka idea pasand nahin aaya, kyun rnavir ji?"
Ranvir: nahin bhabi....aisi koi baat nahin hai.
Saadhna: toh theek hai, jiji chalein,
Ragini: haan chalo..
Ragini is about to get up buh ranvir grabs her hand and doesn't let go,
Sadhna: jiji...chaliye uthiye (she notices that ranvir is holding ragi's hand) ranvir ji, jiji ka haath chodiye
Ranvir lets it go quickly and ragini leaves she turnsaroundand smiles @ ranvir.
Ranvir has an adorable face rite there..
Aalekh: ranvir aajao, tum na..merepaas sona theek hai? aajao..
Ranvir: ji bhaiya, { and he luks @ ragini close the door while looking @ him)
everyone is asleep,ranvir gets up quietly and notices that everone is fast asleep, he quickly get out of his bed and goes to ragini's room, he tries to wake her up by making sounds, buh she doesn't notice, ranvir gets a paper ball and throws it on ragini, ragini gets up..and notices ranvir,she asks him to leave buh ranvir asks her to come out, ragini slowly gets out of bed and runs to ranvir, ranvir takes her to the ktchen and aalekh notices ranvir close the kitchen door, ragini turns the lights on buh ranvir turns it off again.
Ranvir: lgihts off rehne do, agar kissine dekh liya toh prob ho jaayegi.
Ragini: lekin 2 baje aap mujhe ktichen mein kyun laaye? bhook lagi hai?
Ranvir: nahin, tum aao,
ranvir sits on the bench tp and has his arms around ragini,
Ranvir: dekho kaise din aagaye humare ragini, shaadi shuda hote bhi humein yahaan chup chup kar kitchen mein romance pad raha hai..
Ragini: ranvir, raat ke 2 baj rahe hai,aur aapko romance ki sujh rahi hai...haath haatiye (she tries to puch ranvir's hand away and shemanaes to get away from his grip, but ranvir accidently hits his hand on the cupboard and aate ka daba acidently falls and all the flour fallson ranvir and ragini, and the tin falls on the floor.
Aalekh locks the door form the outside and runs to saadhna and tells herreverything bout ragvir, saadhna follows aalekh.
meanwhile inside the kitchen Ragini says to ranvir: lo karlo aur romance ktichen mein, ab jab subah aate ka daba khaali milega hum sab se kya kahenge? aur upar se 2 baje nahaana padega woh alag!
Ranvir: ragini...subah hote hi main aur aata le aaunga...khush..?
saadhna starts to screamchor chor chor.
Ragvir are shocked!
everyone get up quickly and ask saadhna where is the chor,
saadhna says in the kitchen. she wispers ranvir aur ragini andar hai..
inderjit: kya? tumne dekha hai?
Saadhna: nahin papa maine aawaz suni aur yahaan bhaagi chali aayi, aur maine door bhi lock karidya hai taaki woh bhaag na sakein.
everyone giggles...
Inderjit: beta naveen, jao tum police ko fone karo.
Ragvir are shocked!!!
ranvir: nahin papa aappolice ko fone mat kijiyega, main aur ragini hai yahaan...
Saadhna opens the door and says baahar aaiye.
They slowly come out of the darkness and everyone notices ragvir covered in flour, and ranvir sneezes.
They al laugh at them btoh.
ragvir look embarassingly at each other.
Satyen: yeh kya rnavir tum dono aate ki holi khel rahe the kya?
Ranvir si embarassed...
they slowly come out of the ktichen and they look @ each toher and run!
while all others are laughing @ them!
If you like the scene do hit the 'Like' button 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
i'll post my next scene soon 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
Saniha thanks for opening this topic. arey yaar what an idea madam ji.

I think RS shoul change his creative writer. It is better he puts Dina and Sanju in their places. Plzzzzzzz Rajan ji take notice of our pleas and put sanju and dina as your story writers.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thanxxxxxxx al0tttttttttt zee diiii
sanihaaaaa n sanj n kamuralee yaa 0f IFFU il cal u preet:):)
thanxx guyss thanxx al0ttt...
ummm zee di mai tu s0ch rae h00n yeh link iss saarey t0pic ki link hee p0stt ker daite hain RS BL0G maiii wat say sanihaa??
0hkk saniaaa lyk walaaa achaaa haiii maine sanj ki like ker dii:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#88
Sanju i will read ur scenes after my breakfast hahah
Haan ab se jisko jo scene pasand aaye just click likeee
sending teh link to RS do u think he willopen it >??
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89
Ranvir Wants T0 Take Ragini In There R00m In His Armss:P:P
Ranvir is in 0ffice missing Ragini al0ttt...
Ragini at h0mee is making her bed n resetting her dressingtable n
saath saath shes thnking ranvir 0fffice mai kia ker rae h0ngee..
den she slaps halka sa 0n her f0rehead n says t0 herself ragini tu
bhe pagal hai 0ffice mai k0i kia kerta hai n she brings her t0nge 0ut
n sayss uffh00 mai bhee naa..
itney mai ranvir ka ph0ne ajataa hai..
she pickss it upp n ranvir na hii na hel0 kehta hai he saysss
0hhh ragini merii raginiii muwahh muwahh muwahhh mai tumhain buhat
miss ker rahaa h00nn..ragini is smiling n sayss aap pagal tu nahee
h0gayee..he sayss han haan tumharee pyar mai tumharee ankh0 k kajal
ne mujhe pagal banaa daalaa hai..tumhare smile nee..tumhare lambey
bal0 nee..tumharee tumharee...ragini sayss arey bas bas...
den she sayss waisee miss tu mai bhe apk00 buhatttttt ker rahe h00n
he sayss tu mai aja0n kiaaa;)she sayss arey nahee nahee shaam mai ana
abhee nahee..aap 0ffice ka kaam sambhal0 mai ab ph0ne rekhti h00n
mummyG calling mee..
he sayss ruk00 ruk00..raginiiiii ajjjjjjjj maiiiiiiiii jabbbbbbb
gharrr a00n ragini sayss aage bhe b0liyee jaldee..
he saysss again aj jab mai gahr a0n mai tumhain apni bah00n mai uthaa
ker r00m mai le janaa chahta h00nn..
she saysss watttttttttttt..cheek ker!
ch0tima cums in kia hua betaa ragini...
she sayss kuchh nahee ch0timaa..she smiles n leaves...
ragini sayss ranvir aap bilkul paagal h0gayee hainn..
yeh nahee h0saktaaaaaa..
neechey l0unge se upper r00m tak apkii bah0n maii..
ghar waale kia s0cheingee..
nahee nahee bilkul naheee..
ranvir sayss mai kuch nahee jaanta agarr tum meri bah0n mai upper
r00m mai naa aaye tu mai tu maiii tu maiiii...
ragini sayss aap kiaa..tu mai kal se 0ffice hee nahee ja0ngaa..
ek tu tumse saaraa din durrr rah00 shaam mai tum meri itnii se baat na
mann00 tu 0ffice jaaney ka kia faidaaaa..HUH he makes cute facee..
musicc bajraa haiii nissaa nisaa paamaa pasaaa...
ragini sayss 0kkk ranvir i will try...
ranvir sayss try nahee u ave t0..
werna yaad rakhna sweetheart mai kal 0ffice nahee ja0ngaaa..
she saysss ranvir aap mujhe buhat tang kertey hainn..
he sayss gahr aaneyy d0 tu tang kerun gaa naa abhee tu shurwaat hai
sweethearttt my raginiiiiiiii..
he sayss dad agaye ab il hand upp..c u at nytee janemaan n laughs:P
ragini has made a tensed face..itney mai sadhna cumss in..
she sayss jiji kiaa huaa kin khayal0n mai kh0yee h00..
she sayss kuch nahe sadhnaa..sadhna says jiji ayein tv dekhtey hainn..
w0h RR k r00m ka TV lagati hai..
ek channel pe..ek her0ine girney ki acting kerti hai s0 dat her
hubby takes her in his arms n r00m tak lejayee..
ragini k0 ideaaaaaa mil jataa haii..she says t0 herself issey kissi
k0 shakk bhe nahe h0gaa n ranvir bhe naraz nahee h0ngee..
raat k 9 baj jaatey hain..Ranvir Alekh indrajit navin all cum frm
0ffice..dey cum t0 dinner tablee..ave dinner ranvir is winking ragini
in between n isharaa kerta hai in my arms remember..she smiles n sayss
yes i knw:P:P
sab khanaa kha ker s0fas pe baithe baatein ker rahee h0tee hainn..
itney mai ragini kitchen se nikalti hai n slip kerke girney ki acting
kertii hai...
ranvir is unaware 0f her plannn n he al0ng wid every1 runss t0wards
ragini..he sayss raginiiiiiiiii..ragini is d0ingg aaaaa 00hhhh
sadhnaaaa ranvirr ahhh mai itney z00r se girrr gayeee
she winkss ranvir s0 hes relieved n0w dat mayb its a natak...
sadhna see's dis..vasuu telss alekh n navin t0 helpp ranvir takee
ragini up t0 her r00mm..sadhna interrupts dat nahee mummyG
ranvirG. lejayeingee jiji k0...
ranvirr is realllyy happyyy...s00 is ragini but dey r n0t sh0wing it
finally ranvir g0es cl0ser t0 ragini t0 pick her in his armss..
nissa nisaaa pamaa paasaa bajraa haiii..n ranvir n ragini r staring
each0daa...vasu sayss areyy ranvirr kiaa huaa jaldee utha0 bhee useyy
he sayss yaa m0m..yaa
ranvir uthaa ker lee jaa rahaa hai ek dum her00 stylee maii
n ragini ka saree ka dupataa neechey nechey lagta araaa haii..w0w
it luks s0 r0manticc..lyk srk n preity n mai yahan h00n yahan aww..
nissa nisaa pamaa paasaaa bajra haii..
ranvir jab stairs per phaunchta hai tu ragini se kehta hai arey wahhh
mujhe tu pataa hee naa tha k meri patniG itneyy ache actress bhe hain..
dey b0th smileee..
r00m mai jaaker..he putss ragini 0n bedd n jaldee se d00r l0ck kerney
aataa haii..itney mai murr ker dekhta hai tu ragini bed per h0tii
hee nahee haiii..
he callss 4 her tu she is standing near da d00rr n l0ck kh0lkee
bhaag jaati hai n sayss app r00m tak lanaa chahte thaee naa s00
le aayee n0w me g0ingg..
he runss a bit n den st0pss saying ragini raginii ruk00 ragini...
ragini g0es near da staits n see's vasu cuming she runss bakk again
t0 her r00m n aker r00m l0ck ker letii hai k vasu k0 shak na h0jayeee
ranvir is standing near da wind0w smiling hmm aakhir wapiss agaye
naaa...she sayss haan w0h mummyG agaye thi baherrr..
ranvir is cuming cl0ser t0 her..
she runss...n dey run in wh0le bedr00mm..0n da bed behind da s0fas..
even in da bathr00mm..finally d0n0 has has ker aur thak ker bed pe
gir jaatey hainnn..
n den ranvirr saysss ragini tumne meree liyee itnaa kuchh kia ajj
luvvv uuu 4 dis per mai tu darrrr he gayaa jab tum girrii..
he pulls her cheeks n sayss i luvv u meri ragini..
den ragini sayss i ave sumthing 4 u..she kisses his cheek n sayss
ranvir app meree liyee meri jaan se bhe ziada keemti haii..
aur bhalla meri jaan mujhse kuch mangee tu mai kaise na detii..
ranvirs eyes r ful 0f luvv 4 her..he hugss her..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
dinu i'll just read ur scene i na while okay!
m sure it'l be great like ur past ones 😳

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