unnati72003 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 16 years ago
#1
Guys this is my first time writting any update.....so plz bare with me....and plz ignore my mistakes....plz.....
*********************************************************************************************************************
The episode starts with Malti and Vineet in their room'.and Malti is angry and she shuts the closet door hard by seeing this Vineet asks

Vineet: whose anger are you taking out on this poor closet'??

Malti: That's Avni's'.

Vineet: Really'.But why..??

Malti: Why Avni had to come here and show off'.U know she asked water from and also tea and some snacks'..she just didn't came here to made me look down'..i don't why she came here'.

Vineet: Aree'Malti'.why you keep thinking about all this'

Malti: I know this Avni very well'..she was being nice in front of Ragini'.but I know she is full of venom'.but I also taught her a nice lesson'.i fought a lot with her'..she donesn't know that I m Ragini's bhabi first'..i don't lie'but what I m for Ragini'.she can't be that'..

Vineet: Haan'.i know that very well'..now leave all this'.and forget it''

Malti: Aree'.i know she will do the same at the picnic'I don't lie'she dosen't know she is taking panga with Malti'..i m not goona leave her'..and why are you standing here and laughing at me'..am I tell you a joke or something''

Vineet: Aree'.we have to go tomorrow morning'

Malti: Aree'.than go to sleep'..Good Night'.

Vineet: Ok ok'.i m going'..and finish the left fight in ur dreams'..Good Night!!

Then Vineet leaves'..Malti talks to herself'.

Malti: U ruined my whole day'U Avni''I m not gonna leave U'..

Now the scene shifts to Ranvir in his'.Talking with Ragini on Phone'.

Ranvir: Acchaa'Madam Ragini'if u are telling me'than I m hanging up the phone'.we will finish our talk tomorrow'..OK Bye'.(smiles)

On the other hand Alekh enters Ranvir's room'..

Alekh: Ranvir'.Ranvir'.Now friend's mood is fine na'..

Ranvir: Haan'.Brother'her mood is fine now'.and First Class also'.

Alekh: Really'..Good Good'..Very Good'..

And in joy is goes and jump in the Bed'

Alekh: Now Ur Friend is Happy and My friend is also Happy''Now everything is good'.now we all will have fun on Picnic'.

Ranvir also goes and stand with Alekh on the bed'..

Ranvir: Haan Brother'we will have lot of fun'.Hip Hip'.

Alekh: What do I have to say'.

Ranvir: Hoory'.

Alekh: Hoory''

And Ranvir hugs Alekh with Joy'..

************************************************************************

Now the next Morning''

Vineet is talking to some guy'

Vineet: Everything was fixed in 1500 rupees'u keep this 500 rupees'..we will give you 1000 rupess when we return''we will be back in a min.

Than Vineet goes into the house'.in the hall'.

Vineet: Bauji'.the car man is here'.

Alok Nath: oohhh'.Ok'Vinu beta'.call everyone'.and check it out where is ur Naniji'..and u have fixed everthing with the car man naa''

Vineet: Haan Bauji'.everthing is done'.

Then Vinu calls everyone'..

Vineet: Ragini'.Maa'..

And then Malti comes with some stuff in her hand'.and says

Malti: Chalo'..

Alok Nath: Bahu'.what is all this'.??

Malti: Bauji'I have take Stove and Oil and stuff'.i thougt as we have hired this big car'.i will take all this stuff'.we will make food there'.and eat there only'..(she is too Funny'.)

Vineet: (puts his hand on his hand'.) Aree'what kind of mind do u have''u will always think worng'.

Alok Nath just laughs'..

Malti: Arrree'.i have thought right only''

Vineet: what's so right'..now come on lets goo''

Then Ragini come this some stuff in her hand'.

Alok Nath: U know Ragini Ur brother have hired a big car'..now we all will go with pride in that car'..

Ragini give a huge smile to Vineet'.

Alok Nath: UR Happy Na'.??

Ragini nods with a smile'..

Alok Nath: Keep smiling like'.and in all the games u win'.of life'..and where is ur Maa'.and Nani ma'..

Ragini: Naniji is just half way'.and Maa is coming''.

Then Kaushliya comes'..and Nani also comes with a bag in her hand'..

Nani: Sorry'.i just got into this morning stuff'.and that's why I got late''

Kaushi: Maa'.why are u taking this wool and stuff'..

Nani: Aree'.there is sweater for Ragini'.i will keening there for her'.

Everone just laughs there'..

Nani: Damadji'.i have seen that Rajvans Family has already left''

Alok Nath: Ok'..now we also have to leave'..

And everyone leaves''

Then just outside'..Ragini's phone rings'..and kaushi is also there'.

Ragini picks the phone'.

Ragini: Hello'..

Ranvir: Aree'where are u all'..??

Ragini: we r just leaving'.

Malti and naniji just smile on this'..

Malti: Ragini'.tell Ranvirji that the happiness in his voice is coming outside also'.and we all can hear it''.

Nanji, Kaushi and Ragini laughs and giggles'.

Then she hangs up the phone'..and everyone leaves'.

Then scene shifts to the farm house'..where the doors open and Rajvans Family enters'.everyone comes out of the car'..and all of them are happy'..Ranvir is capturing all this in his camera''

Satyanji: Ambikaji'..we have here'..after a long time'.we have lots of memory attached by this place''right'.??

Ambikaji'.just nods with a smile'..and they both leaves'.

Everyone goes and sitting on the chairs'.in garden'..

Than Indrejit tells Vasu that he will just go and check if all the arrangements are done''

Indrejit: Aree'Satyan'.lets go and talk to the catering'.if everything is done'.

Sadhan turns around to see if Ragini and everyone has arrived'.or not'.??

Ranvir is recording everything in his camcorder'..and Alekh is giving out the caps to everyone'..and Sadhna is waiting for Mamaji and Mamiji''

Alekh gives cap to everyone except Navin and Avni''Alekh gives cap to Sadhna''

Then gives a white cap to Ranvir'..

Ranvir: Thank You Bhayia''

Then Alekg goes to Badi maa'..

Alekh: Badi Maa this place is very nice'.

Vasu: I m very happy that u liked this place'..Alekh'

Alekh: We will have fun here'..

Vasu: Ofcourse'..and the she goes into the caps in Alkeh hand and choose one cap for him and makes him wear that''

Vasu: Alekh looks very nice'..

Alekh Thank you'.thank you''

Sadhna is worried''

Ranvir: Bhabi'Ragini is very understabel and she will take care of herself'.

Sadhna: gives a small smile'.

Ranvir: I promise I will take care of Ragini'..

Sadhna: Thanks'.

Ranvir: By the way'..why are they still not here''??

Just then their car enters'..

Ambikaji: Vasu Sharma Family is here''

Everyone comes out of the car'..and Ragini shily looks at Ranvir'..then they all goes in and'..and greet each other'..then Ranvir goes and takes Mamaji, Mamiji's and Naniji's blessings''and hugs Vineet'.than Ragini does the same with Vasu, Ambika, Avni'..and then everyone goes inside'..and Ranvir is capturing all this in his camera'..

Than Alekh show is Harmonica to Mamaji''everyone is happy'..

Than Ragini gives choclate to Guni'..and ranvir is recording that'..as soon as guni leaves'..Ravir stops Ragini'.

Ranvir: Choclate for Guni'.and for me'..(just than he has a sneeze'.)

Ragini: For U'.just a min'.and she comes back with a Shawl'.this is for u'..

Ranvir: Thank You'.

And Ranvir by taking the Shawl'.he tries to touch Ragini's hand'but Ragini just puts the shawl in his hand'..and goes to Sadhna'.

Than Alokji asks about Indrejit and satyanji''

Ambikaji: they are inside'come let's go I will you the farm house'.

Evryone goes inside''and Ranvir is recoding Ragini and Sadhna'.just than sadhna hits him on his hand and he just turns around'.

Then Sadhna also leaves with everyone and Ranvir and Ragini follow them in last'..

Ranvir holds Ragini's hand'.and they both give each other a cute smile'.

Inside'.Ambikaji welcomes them'.

Alekh: Mamji say na that the house is very nice'..

Alok Nath: Aree'.Alekhji'.it's very nice'very nice'.

Indrejit and Satyan hugs Alokji'.and they say let me show u our house'..and Ranvir is still with his camera'.and than Alekh say he wanna show something to Alokji'..but he say I will show him out side'..Ranvir is capturing everyone'..and in the end when Ragini comes'he gets lost in her and he almost fell down'..then everyone are outside'.and Indrejit shows everything to Sharmaji'.

Then as everyone sits down'..Alekh clears his throat and says'I wanna say something very important'..that we all will play cricket''bat ball walla'.and no one will say no'..everyone will play'..

Everyone get's ready'.but just than Choti maa says Alekh I don't know how to play this game'.

Mamiji: Haan beta'.i also can't play'..

Naniji: i also can't play'..as my age'

Alekh: No No No'..no excuses'everyone has to play'..

Indrejit: even if u all don't know how to play'.then just enjoy learning the game'..

Just then Ranvir goes by Ragini's side'..and was about to open up a ice water bucket'..but Ragini hold his hand to stop him'.. and he get's surprised'..

Ragini: Drink regular water'.as u have cold naa'..so ice water will not be good for u'..

And Ranvir just nods''

All the guys are tirying to convince the girls to play cricket'..everyone says that this is a boys game'.plz don't include girls in it''

Satyan: I think Vineet this women's don't have guts to play with us'

Ambikaji: Just a min''are u challenging us''?

Satyan & Vineet: yes'..yaa'.we are'.so'.

Ambikaji: than fine'.let do it'..

Malti: Aree'.wow Ambikaji'.let go'..

Nanji: I can't run'..

Ranvir: Don't worry Nani'.we will make u empir'..(judge)

Guni goes to Ranvir'..

Guni: Chachu'.what will I do'..??

Ranvir: U will write the scores'.and will see that no one can cheat'..and he gives her kiss'..

Then Ragini takes guni towards her'..and she also gives her a kiss'.and smiles at Ranvir'..

Ranvir: What say Mom'.?? Chachu and Dad are challenging the strength of women''

Everyone gets ready'.and Alekh make mamji, vineet and naniji'.also wear a cap'.and gives cap to Malti and Mamiji too'.and in last he goes to Ragini'.and gives her a cap'

The Ranvir say let do a toss'.and see who will bat'..and ask the ladies team who is their captain'..and sadhna comes in front''

Alekh: Aree'Ranvir captain will ofcourse be my friend'..and why do we need to do the toss'.ladies are always first'..

Then Sadhna tell that from our team Choti Maa will bat first'..

Ranvir: Madam'this is not Talvar'.this is a bat'..but don't worry I will teach u'..

Alekh: Stop Ranvir'..why r u gonna teach'.this is a ladies team'..

Sadhna: Alekhji''

Than Indrejit goes and tells Alkeh'..

Indrejit: just how Ragini is going to be our Bahu'..just like that Ranvir is also going to be their Son'..so we will have to help them'..ok

Alekh: Ok'.Choti Ma'mamiji'.badi maa'if u need any help do let me know'..

Then they all start the game'..and Ambikaji get knock out on the second ball'..and then Alekh goes to do the bowling'..and Malti is on the batting side'..

Alekh is just about to throw the ball'..but then Malti say just a min'..she has a black glasses on'..so she say I can't see the ball'..and she take them off'..

Then she plays the ball'..and Vineet is just about to clean bold her'..but she stands there with a bat''and everyone says this is cheating''

Sadhna starts to fight with Alekh that this is not cheating and Ragini with Ranvir'..and Mamaji is seeing all this'..and goes in between and stops them'..and they resume the game'.and Malti and Avni are running for the runs'..and boys team tries to knock them out'.but they fails'.

Then Mamaji tell Alekh to to the bowling nicely'..and then Alekh starts running and he keep running and goes close to Malti'.and just throws the ball right into the three sticks''.(this one was too funny'..) and then Ranvir just tries trick Nani'..and made her rise her hand'..and declare that Malti is out''then Vineet does the balling and Avni is batting''

And on the first Ball only Vineet say Out'..and Malti also sreams that she is out'.out'.but sadhna made her sit down'.and Satyanji say'..our hero Ranvir ready to throw the ball for his heroin Ragini'.and Ragini hits the first ball'..and jumps in joy''and Ranvir smiles at her'and satyanji say'..is there love mixed in this fight''is this match fixed'..and Ranvir again throws the ball'.and she hits again'.and Alekh goes to him and says this is cheating''

Ranvir: Aree'.no no'I m not cheating'..u can ask the empire'..

Nani: No Alekhji'.Ranvirji is right'..

Now sadhna come for the batting'..with Vasu'.and Alokji throws the ball'..and Vasu hits the ball'..and she and sadhna starts taking the runs'.

And Then Alok tells Alekh that ur mom runs very fast'..and then Alekh say'.now it's now turn to throw the ball'..but Alokji say'.the over is bot finish yet'..

Alekh: Mamaji'.plz give me the ball'.as my friend is batting'.plz'.

Than he gives the balll to him'..and Alekh throws the ball'.and Alekh throws the ball very slowly'..and sadhna hits the ball''and than Ranvir goes to Alekh'.

Ranvir: Ur cheating brother''

Alekh: Plz'.plz it's my friend naa'..

Then Naniji'.say '.now this team's time is over'and after a snack break'.another team will play'..

After a break'.boys team starts to play'..Ragini is bowling and Indrejit is batting'..and sadhna knocks him out'..

And then Alekh comes for batting'..and Sadhna throws the ball'.and Alekh hits it'..and the ball was just about to hit Navin'but Vineet catches it'.and saves him''and then Ambikaji thanks Vineet'.and Navin also thanks Vineet'.

Alekh: I didn't did it purposely'. Sorry'..

Navin: No Problem'.

Then Navin batts'.and Ambikji throws the ball'.and he hits the ball'.

now Ranvir is playing and Ragini throws the ball'..and she knocks him clean bold''

than mamaji bats'.and sadhna was running behind the ball and she falls down'.and he face get dirty with mud'.and everyone starts laughing'.

Then Alekh goes and defend Sadhna'.

Alekh: Keep quite all of u'.no one will laugh at my friend'..why r u all laughing'..?? My friend plays the best'.

And then Guni says'.Ladies team has won''

Then Alekh says he his hungry'.and rats in his stomach are playing cricket'.

Then all the ladies are cooking'.then suddenlt sadhna get and idea'..and goes and tell it to chotimaa'..

And she goes and tells to Vasu'..

On the other hand all the guys are just relaxing and having fun'..

And then Satyanji says:

Satyan: aree'bhabi'.r u all just going to talking'..when is the food going to be done'..

Vasu: Now this depends on the man's when the food will be done'..

Indrejit: Hello'.what does that mean'.we didn't get it'??

Vasu: we are not going to make the food'.you all are making'..

Indrejit: We'how can we make the food'.?

Kaushi: Yeh'if we women's can play cricket'.and win it too'.then why can't u make the food'.

Alokji: Kaushilyaji'..

Malti: Bura na mano picnic hai''

Satyan: But we don't know how to make food'..

Ambika: So we also didn't knew how to play cricket'.now this is our challenge'.atleast try'.or else say that u don't have guts''

And everyone gets up and accept the challenge'.

All women's welcome the men's into this kitchen'.

Indrejit: Sharmaji we said that we will make the food'.but we don't anything'..

Alokji: the problem is not that big'.i know little'.and we will do it'.

And they all are deciding what each one of them will do'..

All the men's are triying their best to cook the food'..

Now Ranvir thinks how can they get out of this trouble'and he gets and idea'.and he says I will be back'..

And he goes sees ragini'.and tries to call her'.and guni's ball comes there and he tells'.

Ranvir: Guni'.(he gives her a chit'and says) give this to ur new chachi'.

And she does that'..

And Ragini reads the chit'.and it say How to make Mixed Vegetable ??

And Ragini gets up and goes inside the farm house'..

Ranvir: Aree'.instead of helping me why is she going away from me'.??

And Than Ragini taps him from the back'.

Ragini: I had to hide from them'.so u all plz just cut all the vegetables'and I will be there in a while'.

And while Ragini was leaving Ranvir holds her back and say let say thank u atleast'.but Ragini just runs away'.and it ends on Ranvir's Happy Face.

************************************************************************

Precap: Everyone is playing antaksari'..

Plz guys frogive my mistakes.....thank u so much.....

Enjoy, Take Care

Love
Unnati😳
Edited by unnati72003 - 16 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

16

Views

5.3k

Users

15

Likes

48

Frequent Posters

Gagan-06 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 16 years ago
#2

Thank you Unnati for the wonderful First Update!!!

I am very excited to watch this episode. I can feel the excitement as well...lol
Keep up the good work!!
sweet_shagun thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 16 years ago
#3
Nicely written update (So far) do continue the episode rocked from start to end!!

Luv,

Shagun
zarmeeno thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#4
Unnati, best update keep going. I feel like I'm watching the episode. Thank u so much for this.
djaya thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Fascinator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#5
thx 4 the wonderful update😛
anna44 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#6
Thank you for wonderful update
Malajiji thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#7
Thanks for the update.
You did greaaaaaaaat👏
-phoenix- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#8
wow Unnati...the update was wonderful.....so very detailed....almost like reading the screenplay of the episode.....great work !!!!...do continue......
laddha_chanchal thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#9
Very nice update.
Feel like I'm watching the episode
zarmeeno thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#10
Mistakes. It was the best written update. I have already thanked but wants to thank you once more. really it was the best.

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".