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Posted: 17 years ago
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^ok...can't wait...at least in this Akanya and the whole gang is there!!!! 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok guys wont make u wait ne longer heres part 1!!

Manya n the other gang were sittin in the cafiteria bored wen aakash came with a glass of water in his hand bumped into Manya
M: andhe dikai nahi de raha ki tum kaha chal rahe ho gende
A: what!
M: haan han behre bhi ho
every1 laughed
M: pata nahi chalta ek ladki ko jaan much ke dhaka den ka
A: xcuse me madade
tum jaanti nahi ke tum kise baat kar rahi ho!
M:kyun tumhe bhi nahi pata
every1 laughed again
A: actualy madamozzel main acp prakash rathod ka beta hoon
M: iska matlab ya nahi ke tum jo chahe vo kar sakte ho
n by the way for ur nice n kind info. main police force ke head anup sharma ki beti hoon
aakashs face flushed in embarresment.

_____________ 20 minutes later in manyas room____________

R: manu tumne to us bhohut bade flirt ka mooh hi bandh kar diya
S: haan yaar ab pata chale gaan us gaainde ko ke tusi kya kamal di cheez hai
K: vese humari dost aur head ki beti humari to kismat chamak gayi

aakash was listening to that convo.

A: haan yaar manya tumne to mera mooh hi bandh kar diya
hai me mar gaya khoobsurat ladki se me kuch bhi tolerate kar sakta hoo

evryone laughed
M: main hoon hi aisi
A: friends
M: soch ti hoon
THE girls: come on itna bi tang mat kar is bechar ko
M: ok fine friends

A: smiled

-----------------next morning swiming pol----------------

manya was swiming as aakash wathed her

A: hai om main mar gaya iski ada pe
OM: kaya kiski ada pe
A: are yaar manya ki lagta hain me use pyar ker ne laga hoon
OM: vaah beta tum to har ladki se pyar karte ho
A: nahi to
O: ji haan
A: no om
OM: yes aakash

wen maya came in between.

M: kya yaar tumhara 3rd year hai collage main aur tum log to 3 standard ke bache ke thara lad rahe ho.

ANO: sorry
M: aakash towel dena
as aksh gave it in his head he said
manya anything for u my love

M: thanx
O: vase holidays ke liya kaha ja rahi ho
M:main apna cottage pe ja rahi hoon vase bhi only for a week
A: tumhara cottage hain kaha
M: mera cottage delhi mein hain duh
A: i think i kno that i want to kno where in delhi
M: (adress is made up) 24 raynjo road cottage no. 34
A: wow thats great mere cottage bhi vaha hi hai cottage no. 40
M: well thats great why dont we all go t may cottage for the holidays itll be graet fun
ANO: sure y not

------------------lunch cafiteria------------------------

MnAnO: suno guys hum sab holidays ke liya mere aur akash ke cottage pe rahe ge! fun na
Gang: sure fun
M: ladki mere cottage mein aur ladke aakash ke hum dono ke cottage sirf 6 cottages door hai

gang cheers

in the car manya sarts the game fo antakshari

M:ye pyar ka mausam aya hai sang preet ka sawan laya hain

n a huge disater happens the car runs out of fuel!! 😲



PRTECAP PART 2

aakash n maya are both walking toghetr wen manya slips n aakash cathes her wirh there eyes interlocking for 10 secs.

will this friendship turn into luv? will it turn into anger read part 2, 2 find out

sorry for spelling mistakes😊

luv
jinil 😉

Edited by jinil - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
It was awesome...can't wait for more!!! 😃 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plzz contuine part2 and many more plzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😭ok guys thanx for the comments heres part 2

IOM: kya yaar aakash it na bada duffer hai tu fuel kyun nahi checfk kia
A: tujhe itni fikar hai to tune kyun nahi kia
M: uuf kya yaar jab dekho tab ladte hi hote ho
R: ab kya kare
A: scine mujhe aur manya ko pata hai cottage kaha hai hum dono ja kar fuel le ate hai
M: teek hai

---------------outside 50 minutes later-----------------

manya was walkin wen her foot sliped in the pourin rain
as aakash cauth her they had an eylok for 10 sec,
M: thax
A: its ok any time!

as ak said that he thaugt i love u manya me tumhare liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon

he saw that manyas heel was brken so he lifted her up
as manya kept staring at him wen aakash spot a gas station

A: wo dekho gas station
M: wow chalo
aksh put manya down n keft for the gas
wen he came outside he saw that manya wasnt there

A: MANYA!!

akash searched evry where for manya

wen he suddenly found her hidin behind the tree.

M: tum dar gaye aakash

A: n.. na..nahi to

M: tum aiae hukla kyun rahe ho

A: main kaha hakla raha hoon

M:tum hakla rahe the

A: nahi to

M: dekho na ab hum bhi jagadte rahe

A: acha teek hai chalo ab hume vapis jana hai

Manya had bought new slippers from the connvinent store

ON the way back the 'bijli" went out so they coudnt c anythin

M: aakash muje dar lag raha he

A: wat tume andhere se dar lagta hai

M: ha aakash aur tum uus store se flashlight lao ge

A: teek hai teekhai jata hoon

Wen aakash came out he saw that manya was lying down on the flor with blood pourin out from her hand.

PRECAP:

aakash was runnin with manya to the hospital wen a guy came wit a knife in his hand!!!😲

Edited by jinil - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awww....soooo romantic..at least I can still dream about Akanya 😍 and btw it was really really good can't wait for part 3!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
that was good but y so short lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwthat wa so sweet i loved it i can't wt part 3 and 4 and 5 and 6 and more on so plz post sooooooooonn i am waiting impaiantly
😆 😆 😆 u r a awsome rite 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
Itz sooo cute part! I loved it! Please continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
Jinil Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz put more prts of pyar ka mausam and the ending i did not expect it anyway plzzzz put more prts it is awsome

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