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Posted: 13 years ago
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Tujhsa na Dekha koi!!

Rishi and Aaliya are childhood best friends. They have stood by each other in every phase of their life. Rishi falls in love with Aaliya but there is a secret to their relationship which will actually blow off every one's imaginations'

Aaliya is a chirpy, bubbly girl who believes in living life as it comes and enjoying every second of her life. Her Dad left her at a tender age of 3 and her mother died of cancer when she was 7. Raised by a Muslim family, Aaliya has many layers in her personality. She loves every one around her and blindly trusts on them'

Ranveer is a senior army officer who loves his country more than himself. He has no time for his family or himself, all he knows is :- He is the SON of India and will do anything to protect it' Right now he is in Canada for a mission.

PROLOGUE

Mr Sharma, father of Rishi has organised a small party to celebrate the selection of Aaliya to study in one of the top universities of Canada. Rishi confesses his feelings to Mr Sharma but he is astonished at the cold behavior and weird expressions. He drinks at the party and conveys a message to Aaliya that he is in love with her, but Mr Sharma strongly dissaproves of it and humiliates Aaliya.. Shattered by all this, Aaliya runs away from the party and breaks all the relations with Rishi and diverts her mind towards preparations of her flight which was a week later'

Rishi' tere pas abhi bhi 7 din hain' ja jakr Aaliya se shadi kr le' or khushi khushi use london bhej' voiced the inner voice of Rishi

7 din' 7 din' Mr Rishi Sharma, agar yeh 7 din maine 7 janam na bna diye tumhare liye to mera nam bhi Aaliya hassan nhi hai'

Aah, so please tell me how is the prologue'? What do you think'? Will Rishi confess his love and stop Aaliya from going or will Aaliya leave behind a deep friendship for a better career and many more memories'??

And peeps, Please like this Facebook Page to get all the updates regarding whatever I write, and you are free to bug me for an update and can also suggest me a few scenes which you want to read in the FF'

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yayyy!! Me first!!!😆

I simply love ur charactersketch, esp Aaliyas part which is quite different from the actual story and I luv it!!!! And Ranveer's description...*I've started to imagine him in Army uniform...hayeee😍*
Great prologue gal...Cant wait for Ranveer's entry or part!!!!
Write it soon hun!!!
P.S. I dun have a FB acc so plz PM me the links Jas!!!😊
Edited by sehar mehrotra - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome. Do keep PMing me when you update.

Edited by khota_sikka_sri - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awsum... Do Keep Writing...
Very Intresting...And Update Soon..
U Wrote It Nicely...
Can U Pm Me If Possible...
Thnx...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Looking forward to reading the first part.
Hope you update soon :)

- Liza
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
Amazing! Loved the prologue. But Please make it longer. ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Har jagah itna lamba prologue likh deti hai! 🤔
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Prologue is interesting.
I hope you continue the story soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Luv the prologue👏
Can u pm me when u update
Can't wait for your next update😆

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