SanDhir TS-I Love You And That's All I Really Know-(Last Part Updated) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
hey awesome start dear.

rd loves sanyu to d core but dnt admit it.

parth knows him very well. he knows rd loves sanyu madly.

rd is going to purpose sanyu.

do update soon.

pm me whenever u update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Hey dear its awsum os 😊
must say nice try
but it ws chhotu sa update
next time write long one
keep writin 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Sagl

AmaZing one shreya ^_^

Commendable :D
Lets see how he proposes her ;)
Update soon
Thnx for the pm <3


Thanks a lot:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Hello Everyone!
Thank you so much guys for all the lovely comments.

Here is the second part of my TS:

-I love you and that's all I really know-

*Mechanical Lab*

Sanyukta was working on a machine when Randhir entered the lab.
He came towards her taking small steps.Randhir was facing Sanyukta's back.

"Machine par work kar rahi thi?",Randhir said,softly.

"hmm...bas thodi der me ho jaega",Sanyukta replied to him.

"Kuch kaam tha kya?",Sanyukta asked.

"Haa...nahi...vo...me...",Randhir was trying to say something.

"Kya?",Sanyukta said,chuckling.

*Offo! Kaise kahu?
Arre Randhir,Kya kar raha hai! Seedhe seedhe koi bhi bahana bana de na!* Randhir talked to himself.

"Sanyukta...vo..me...haa! me ye keh raha tha ke me itne time se canteen ka khana kha-kha ke bore hogaya hu..
toh me soch raha tha ke hum tumhare favorite restaurant chalein?? Thoda change ho jaega...",Randhir said.

"Umm...theek hai...mujhe koi problem nahi hai...vaise hum jaa kab rahe hain...date pe??",said Sanyukta.

"DATE??????? I mean...jaisa tum theek samjho",he said trying to sound normal.

"Tonight at 8",Randhir said.

"Okay",Sanyukya replied.

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*Outside Sanyukta's Favorite Restaurant*

Randhir was pacing back and forth waiting impatiently for Sanyukta.
He was looking super handsome in his black shirt & blue denims.

Sanyukta arrived there looking absolutely gorgeous in the blue knee length dress she was wearing.
Blue was Randhir's favorite colour that's why she wore it.

Randhir's jaw dropped open as soon as he saw her.
"Beautiful" was the word that escaped his mouth.

"Aaj time par kaise aa gayi?",Randhir said trying to tease her.

"Haww :o ...me hamesha time par hi aati hu Mr.!",Sanyukta shot back.

"Haa...Dikh raha hai",Randhir replied.

"Ab andar chale?",Sanyukta asked holding Randhir's hand.

"hmm...",Randhir replied.

*Inside The Restaurant*

The restaurant was looking exquisite with a beautifully decorated table at the centre.
It was lit up with candles & a sweet smell was lingering all over the place.

Sanyukta said "Wow Randhir! Everything is so..."

But before she could say anything more,
Randhir knelt to the ground & pulled out a beautiful ring from his pocket & said,

"I love you & that's all I really know.
I don't care about anyone.
I don't care about the world.
I just want to spend my whole life with you.
Will you be mine forever?"

Randhir waited for her answer.

"Yes", Sanyukta said,happily.

He was happy.She was happy.

Sanyukta made him stand up & hugged him tightly.

"I love you too Randhir",she said.

They had their Dinner while talking & giggling.
They both were so happy that they were finally together.

After the dinner they were going back to the college when Sanyukta suddenly hugged Randhir.
He also hugged her back.

"I love you Randhir.Thank you so much for everything you did.",she said.

"I love you more",he replied.



That night, these two souls promised each other that they'll be together till eternity and beyond.



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I think it was long enough but it was really boring & I'm sorry for that.

Please Comment :)

Love,
Shreya.
Edited by ShreyaLuvsParam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Awwieee shooo cuteee <3
Short n sweet :*
U should write more
U r a wonderful writer ^_^
Thnx for the pm <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vidhichaudhury

Awesome update.
Pls update soon


thanks...this was the last part!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Sagl

Awwieee shooo cuteee <3

Short n sweet :*
U should write more
U r a wonderful writer ^_^
Thnx for the pm <3


Thanks Sanya :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Awsme update

Awww rd trying to ask her out

Finally mission accomplished

Rd lost in her


Sandhir confessed
Finally together

Perfect ending


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update dear. it was d perfect love story. its been beautifully penned down by you. keep writing dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
I'm extremely sorry Shreya for not reading the TS and reviewing it earlier... I was too caught up with studies.

It's your first attempt, you say? Well, you've surely gotta be kidding me cause you sounded like a professional writer.
Both the parts are beautifully penned down with sheer radiance.
The entire piece is flawless with each part defining magnificence.
I love how you've portrayed Randhir and Parth's friendship so enthrallingly. Them sharing a mutual bond where precise words are not required, only gestures can say so much is just splendid.
Ah! Sanyukta and Randhir's date was so lovely and specially the proposal had my heart-thumping with excitement.
The TS is marvelous, to say the least.
Keep penning down more of your fantastic works.
You indeed are a gem of a writer.

Regards
Keya

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