!!~Sarth Two Shot- U are Mine Only ~|| Part 2 Updated

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello Guyzz ...Here is my First writing In SHQ forum. I posted it few dayzz back on Fb and Got good response ..Decided To Post here. Hope U lyk My writing 😊

Part 1 :

Parth and Sanyu Now madly In love with each Other But still hesitating to confess. Parth Still In insecurity of losing Love again and also he still believe If he will love Sanyu then Arpita won't be happy with Him. Now Finally d day Comes

Sanyu : Parth Parth ... where Are you? Aaj Tum Deny nahi kar sakte apni Feelings. Aaj To tumhe bhi confess karna Hoga and main Bhi karoongi. Bahut Hide n seek Ho gaya.

Sanyu was luking In each class Room For Parth.

Kaustu: Sanyu Kya hua ? U seem Upset n Tensed.

Sanyu: I m looking for Parth. Aaj to amin use confess karwa ke rahoongi. Aaj phir he ignored me and left But Its enough Now.

Kaustu: Sanyu please tell me In detail Wt happened.

Sanyu : Today me n Parth went Outside for a walk. While walking I hold Parth's hand and He look into my eyes and hold my hand More tightly. I was sure that he will Confess today becoz his eyes Speak dat he loves me I can see and he knows I love Him too. But I want Him to confess First.

[Flashback]

Parth : Sanyu I wanna tell U something. I was waiting since so Long. But Now I can't wait.

Sanyu Heart beat little fast n her heart Pounced as Parth was coming Near Him. Her ears were eager To hear those 3 words.

Sanyu: Parth yeh Kya kar rahe.

Parth(Putting his finger on sanyu Lips): Shhh ... Sanyu dun speak ..Now let me Speak. Sanyu I ... Sanyu I just wanna say that I ...

Suddenly scene came in Front of his eyes when he confessed To Arpita and all things start Echoed in His mind. Sanyu was standing their closing her eyes and she feels something awkward.

She opened her Eyes and Parth left the place saying He can't do it .It will Hurt Arpita . Parth Ran away and Sanyu was shouting behind his Name "Parth listen To me parth ..please dun do this to me and Dun give pain to urself and me " Tears start Rolling from Her eyes then suddenly she wiped her tears and she was determined to close all this sorrows,pains , confusions Today. She left to search for Parth .

[flashback ends]

Sanyu Took a deep breath and Tears again came in her Eyes.

Kaustu: Sanyu dats very painful for u Both. But Parth should come out of his insecurities. Tell me How Can I help U.

Sanyu: Kasutu just Itna bata do Parth Ko Dekha kahin Tumne .Rest I will take. Now only I can handle This.

Precap: Parth Break downs Watching Arpi pic n Sanyu watching. Sarth together n Confessed. Stay Tuned to Know how šŸ˜‰


Note: Guyzz If u lyk My writing and Os please give feedback and Please I dun want that somebody Use Filthy language on My Post As If u dun read.Comments should Be on the basis of Writing n if U find find flaws in writing then criticism is Most welcomed. 😃

Dun Try To Make it Sandhir vs Sarth war Zone. i love dis couple n I wrote this.

Edited by ShivinkiJas - 11 years ago

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DivineMist thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Here is your first feedback 😊
I liked that part most where Parth almost confessed his love for Sanyu . It's so like him to have an inner war ovr past and present .

Edited by DivineMist - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful start
loved the first part
can't wait to see what happens next
please PM me when you have updated, would loved to read further on, thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Jas its cute os...keep writing more..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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my response
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
see ppl i'm not angry at all

pm me when u update next
aj kal ke stress mein it will act as a stress buster
thanks TM for writing it
keep writing more stuffs like this
🤣🤣🤣🤣

love 🤣
soumya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: krazyinlove

my response

🤣
see ppl i'm not angry at all

pm me when u update next
aj kal ke stress mein it will act as a stress buster
thanks TM for writing it
keep writing more stuffs like this
🤣

love🤣
soumya



ho gaya... Tumhara ...very good...
Dun worry pakka PM karoongi bas wait karna... Sabse pehle PM tumhe hi karoongi n jisne like kiya hai na comment un sabko ko bhi karoongi...laughing therapy is good for health
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb OS...please continue soon.
Thanks for posting here( i suppose its for meii others are on fb right 🄳)
Its really very good...i loved the confession part.
Love ya Jas didz... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Jas for posting here. Let others also know your this talent as well.
Flawless writing. Keep updating whenever possible for you.😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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🤣 šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ 😳😳 🤣
Edited by DamselinDistres - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow osm!!! Nice story :) Sarth šŸ˜‰ ā¤ļø

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