SanDhir OS : Falak Tak Chal - Page 6

Originally posted by: forevermine

Sonia gal ohmygod i am still in the SanDhir world!!!

OHMYGEE OHMYGEEE

this is so wowie...!!

i jzz cant find the perfect words to say to u!!!

lemme strt with the ur 1st OS thats Kiss Of Love? forgive me if i have the name rong..!!

the first part of the OS to be more specific 🤣 was so beautiful...!!! JEALOUS another emotion after SADNESS i completely adore and love to read in stories...!!! Was so simple and beautiful written..!!! Gosh it was simply cutesy... the way randhir was afraid of losing his love as he lost his mother...the fright in him...his possessiveness couldnt see a guy hold or hug his girl!!!

that was so cute how he walks away and dear Sanyu unable to figure out what is rong runs behind him!!!

the agression was so well written...the KISS ..was epicly described and hwatness...!!! Ohmygod...the entire scne was so hwat <3

i loved how Sanyu did remain in her character and didnt ggive up and the understanding Randhir OHMYGOD!!!!

coming to the Second part Falak Tak Chal...!!! just when i think these to cant get adorable and noone else can beat the above OS in cuteness...u go ahead and show me how utterly rong i am..!!!

Jzz such a brilliant OS..the discription and epicness of their love was so awesomely show..!!

it was such a romanticly cute OS..i cnt get over the two of them!!

and hands of to u actualy for making me fall in love with this time of OS agen..!!

hands off girl i was imagining SanDhir on the beach...Thinking of their secert relattionship...the cute teasing of RanDhir and their date on the beach..where randhir tell Sanyu he wants to stay der with her forever and always...!! how much cuter can it get..!!

gosh simply fabulous and wow!!

hahaha i guess i am out doing my lenght og commenting and better stop before i out do the lenght of both ur OSes...but fabulous job..thanks for the PM before.. i know it took me so long to actually go through both OSes but i am so glad i did read them..AHmazing

do write more such OSes would love to read them..!!

regards

safrena

Originally posted by: priyu03

Awww such cute OS

Originally posted by: --Ari--

Finally me here to comment.!
You chose such a perfect song for sandhir...it increased their cuteness and chemistry even more...
and you blended it perfectly with the sandhir scenes...
really beautiful and romantic OS

love it,!

Originally posted by: Anysia

Thank you so much 🤗
Am glad that you liked my OS ... 😃
And about song, these days i find all songs good for SanDhir

Originally posted by: --Ari--

ab toh hot hot songs bhi good lagenge...sandhir just got hotter man ☺️

Originally posted by: Anysia

Oh My God! Safi you don't even have a slightest idea of how happy i am ...
You made my day ... No! you made my week ...

Am now in nothing less than cloud 9 ...lol

Thank you so much for reading 🤗 it means a lot for me ❤️

its beyond words to explain how i feel seeing all big big comments and appreciations ...

Am not a writer ... i always feel writing is not my cup of tea ...
It was Ayesha for whom i wrote my first 2 OS ...

And later, after seeing all the appreciations, gave 2 more try " Kiss Of love" & "Falak Tak Chal"

Am super glad that you liked it

Once again, Thank you so much for reading and commenting ... 🤗

Love ❤️
Sonia 😊

Originally posted by: forevermine

and i am super duper happy that u think i made ur week babes..!! honestly it makes me feel like sum celebrity reading this reply but ur nothn but a sweetheart!!! and i am so glad u friend made u write

coz u have sure turned into and awesome one..!!!!

and reading ur feedback looks like even il go to 7th heaven 🤣

Originally posted by: KAJU10

OMG!!! I'm dead again...
While reading d title I nvr thought dat u wuld come up wid sumthin' as fantastic nd superb lyk dis.
I wanna hug u tight Sonia di!!!!!

Frst of all I wanna apologise fr d late review. Though I had read it quite early by due a fracture in my ri8 arm, I culdn't write it then. So I'm srry again fr breaking my promise.

Secondly, di aaj kal aap kaafi romantic stories likh rhe ho. Baat kya hai???
Well, dis OS ws brilliant!! It felt as if I ws watching a movie. While imagining it I had a wide grin plastered on my face nd my mom thought I had gone crazy.

Di I cn't expresses it by mere words hw everything ws perfect. Every line of dis story, every emotion of SanDhir wr in perfect sync wid d song.
U hv so beautifully penned down the whole dream sequence dat I ws mesmerized. I guess u hv casted some spell on me, tabhi toh 5 times yeh OS padh chuki hoon main bt still can't get enough.

I ws hell shocked to see dis avatar of Randhir. I nearly had a heartattack. Nvr in my dreams had I thought ths aspect of SanDhir relationship.
Hats off fr ur unique nd creative ideas.!!

Ab main jitna bolun utna kum hai coz dis OS is so vry special.

So di keep writing more.
Ab toh ek SS likh do...
I'm eagerly waiting fr ur nxt write up.