Sandhir OS- The Silent Guardian

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Nessie

@justinsgirl

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

I loved d whole story...beautifulll...it was aaamazing...h to sy *tum me kuch spark he*in vardhans stylr..i really loved it..specially d way u described randhir whn he entrd d class...i knw randhir is as good as u described in dis story.must say vry innovativeilent title ..no1 evr thought abt dis S

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anju101

@anju101

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Your writing is always full of emotion and I love it! This OS was perfection!

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simran.284

@simran.284

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

wow! wow! wow!! that was so wonderful! i loved it ❤️ 😳😳😳

keep up the good work!

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

wow...awesome os
i wish something happens like this in our show also...

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: supriya.ipkknd

You can't imagine how glad I am after reading your comment. You just made my day😳
I was daydreaming about such a scene while I was in metro and I thought why not pen it down. I had know idea people would like it so much. I don't think I deserve such applause. Thank You so much.

And about the vocab thing I agree fully. M polishing it, working on it.

The way you described Sanyukta is probably even better than what I have written in any of my FFs\OSs 😆 I was relating myself to her. Even if I know what to do or how to do it, when I am in that kinda zone, I am just completely clueless.

'No romance, no best pals, no being civil, nothing changed. If anything did then it was understanding between them. They understood each other on a better level now. '

You have put it across so aptly. I was kinda thinking that OS would bore many since it had no romance or no realization of feelings or anything of that sort. You have made me so glad.

Thank you for your honest criticism. I would love to hear more from you.

Glad I made you happy, unlike my friends who want to kick my ass for not reading their works since past 1 year🤢🤣. You very well deserved the applause. I read all your works being a silent reader and the commendable work you did forced the comment out of my system. You see, not everyone gets the opportunity to get my million dollar comment😆. Now coming to your vocabulary thing, you better improve it soon as it will take your writings to another level. Lmfao. The perfect analysis of Sanyukta is the effect of my keen interest in psychology and these kind of conditions occur to almost everyone.

Thank you😳 I am glad to know that the writer in me is still very much alive else my readers would have hunt me down for a crappy update.😆 And to your OS, I don't know about others but I do find interest in stories with emotional investment rather than super sweet, sticky, mushy, fairytail-ish love story. Eeks. The thought itself creeps me. You are thanking me now. trust me, after few comments you'll ask me NOT to give honest reviews in thread but in PM. I DO NOT Feel satisfied with writings easily (including mine😛)

- Aditi

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

ola babes... finally here to give my precious comment 🤣

like i told you i simply loved every damn thing about the OS!!
right from the beginning where the usual bickering followed by the ahmazing confrontations..!!

and ofc hw can ny of us forgt the extra smart Randhir helped out Sanyu...!!
Silent Guardian...Definitely the best title.. i wont have been much of help anyways... as i suck with titles...!! 🤣

He is definitely her Guardian wont let anything wrong happen to her..!!
they have the bickering but deep down it shows how much he cares..!!
that for a change he gave up his victory to make Sanyus dreams come true..!!
how selfless is that? something although i wish to see Randhir do i know he would do no such thing...!!!

a beauty in the simplicity for sure...!! and i cant tell u how much i love the real approach towards the entire situation..!!

ur definately a fab writer...!!!

gosh girlie... loved every damn thing about it if i havent already told you that... 🤣

regards

safrena

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Anysia

@Anysia

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

I am confused 😕 what to say ???

Superb OS . . . nope! Awesome . . . no! . . . Excellent . . .

Nahi yaar, these words are not enough . . .
am really in lack of words. . .

I had read it days back . . .
couldn't get time to comment at that time, *sorry* for that 😛

Just now read it again . . .

All i can say is "i loved it"
Hope you figure out from it, how much happy am to read an awesome OS . . .

You have penned it so well so beautifully . . . 👏 👏

I could really picturise the whole sequence playing in front of my eyes . . .

You are a fabulous writer
Keep writing
Stay Blessed 😊

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Anysia

@Anysia

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

When i first saw the title " The Silent Guardian " i thought its an Sanyukta - Prof. Vardhaan OS . . . 😛

Glad to know, Randhir is Sanyukta 's Silent Guardian 😊