OS:Alone in the dark..part 2 pg 2 part 3 pg 3 updated - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
You stopped at the best part! Now I can't wait for your next update, hopefully won't have to wait too long :) could the next update be a li'l longer though ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Plz can you update soon? Such a small part and no update yet :( can't wait for next part^^
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
super.
i can't wait update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Part 3..
It starts from randhir slips n falls on sayu n they share a eyelock ..
Sayu:wat r u doing? ..u ..i will shout if u dont get up
Randhir:wat ..see u dont misunderstand me ...
Randhir gets up n giv hand to sayu but she gets up on her own
Sayu: wat was u doing ?..
Randhir:i didnt did anything ..my leg slip n i felt on u ...n
Sayu :u u ...
Randhir comes closer n says shhh n puts his finger on her lips
N they share the eyelock ..
Randhir :remember on thing...i am not interested in u...aur tum apna mind galat bato me sochne me mat lagao ...
...think something to get out of this problem ..
Sayu moves his hand n moves ...
Randhir:tum ladkiya kitna galat samajti ho ...
Sayu : window ...
Randhir : wat
Sayu :yes humlog window se bahar jate hai ..
Randhir : window se ?
Sayu :haan ..kyu tum toh expert ho ...jab jump karke girls hostel asakte ho to phir yaha se bahar toh nikal hi sakte hai na ..
Randhir :ok we will go out from window ..
Both goes through window ..n sayu about to slip but randhir saves her ...
Both by helping each other goes ...
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Sayu :randhir watchman ..
They both hide ...
...
Both hand in hand r going to their hostel ...
Sayu says my hostel is dat way n she is about to go ...
Randhir pulls her n shut her mouth with his hand ...n ...
Says watchman is awake ..
Sayu :thanks..
...
N they both goes to their hostel ...
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Randhir has sayuktas bracelet ...n he keep it ...[BRR]

Flashback ..wen sayu was going back to her hostel she drops her bracelet n randhir oicks it up ...
...
Randhir sees it n keep it ..
On other hand ..
Kaustuki:where were u ?..
Sayu:i ..nothing ...i just went to take my mobile ..
Kaustuki:mobile lene keliye ...itni late ..
Sayu:i was locked in the room ...
Kaustuki :wat ...
Sayu:leave that lets sleep ..
Kaustuki:where is ur bracelet ..
Sayu:huh ..may be i drop it somewhere ...will check it tomm..
Kaustuki:ok lets sleep now ...
Sayu n kaustuki both goes to sleep ...
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Edited by honestyfirst - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Beautifully written 👏 waiting for next update 😃 loved it 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
OH MYYY!!! this is mad cuuuttteee!❤️ please continue ASAP! will be waiting!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
its so lovely...👏😳
aww...Randhir kept sayu's bracelet😳
waiting for the next😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Awesome update! Plz update soon^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Awesome update...
OMG!! Randhir hs Sanyukta's bracelet. Gosh! I really can't wait to know wht happens nxt...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
He kept his bracelet???? Awww...d chap ws cute!! Them bickering wid each other frst, then helpin each other to escape n then him pickin her bracelet n staring at it!! All in all, a gud one!! Keep it up...plz Dd me to ur pm list!!😊

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