The Honeymoon is OVER - Page 62

Originally posted by: ganga16tr

ahhh poor afreen. naughty amrit hurt you? he hurt me too when he closed the door. but i think he wantes his suhaag raat to be a secret thats why he closed the door in our faces. but i am cleverer than him! i fitted a CCTV camra in their bedroom! I KNOW WHAT HAPPENED you will write a scene about what happened next. haha he's not so smart. he might have closed the doors on us but i still saw!

aww afee glad you liked the scene. always a pleasure to read your comments. i dont think everyone liked my scene though. not many people commented on it.😭😭

looking foward to your scene.

write it soon. cant wait to read it!

Oho Ganga why do u always think about the wrong side of the things sweety ?

Originally posted by: alja

Oho Ganga why do u always think about the wrong side of the things sweety ?

Your scene was really great , the thing is that not any people except you, Dunia , Afee , Winky , Sajan n me follow the scenes in this topic !!! Winky to lost hai , Dunia says she will read it soon and the rest have already commented ... so y do u worry sweetheart ???

Be happy 😃 !!!

plzzzzzzzzz ganga don't say like this
we all LOVE ur scene
and as alja said not many ppl follow it
or if they then they don't really bother to write comments
there is only 5-6ppl who take time to write comments
and winky is not here, so sorry from her
and dunia is preparing to go to jiju, so she haven't read many scenes
and me, alja, and sajan have already read it and commented on it
and we really loved the scene
I am really thankful to u that u really write scenes
it always a pleasure to read ambo scene written by u
thanks for writing dear
btw i am done with my new scene, will post it soon hope u guys will like it

Hey guys I am back with another AmBo scene

hope u guys will like it

here read it and ENJOY!!!

Amrit got a new project; this one is a huge one. Therefore he is really busy with his works, goes to work early in the morning and comes home late at night. One day Amrit comes home tired from the set and goes straight to his room........ Bebo saw him really tired and she goes in the kitchen and makes a cup of coffee for him, as she knows his tiredness will only go after having a cup of coffee......... Bebo brings him coffee...... Amrit is sitting on the sofa............looking completely exhausted. Bebo sits beside him, amrit holds his head in his hands and sighs, bebo puts her hand through his hair softly and say Amrit, Amrit looks up at her slowly with tired eyes. Bebo can see that he is really tired, and need some rest..........
Amrit: kia hai Bebo
Bebo: (sofly and lovingly) coffee peelijeye, aapki thakaan door ho jayegi
Amrit: hmm.........abhi nahi mann nahi kar raha..........ise yaha rakh dijeye plz......baad mein pi lounga
Bebo puts the coffee on the table and tell amrit to take some rest, as he is looking exhausted............ then she gets up to leave.............but amrit holds her hand...........
Amrit: baithiye na yahi pe, kaha ja rahi hai?
Bebo: woh amrit aap thake huwe hai na aap araam kijeye
Amrit: (sweetly and lovingly) mat jaaiyena na plz, yahi mere pass bathiye na
Bebo smiles sweetly and sits back down again..........she take Amrit's coat out, Amrit watches her, then Bebo again tell him to have his coffee. Amrit picks up the cup........he looks at Bebo and puts his arm up on the sofa..........Bebo understands and rests her head on his shoulder and Amrit puts his arm around her.
Bebo: Amrit
Amrit: (drinking his coffee) hmmm.........
Bebo: acha amrit aaj aapne set pe kia sab kia?
Amrit: bebo ye pochiye aaj kia sab nahi kia, ufff aaj ka din bahut hi tiring and busy tha
Bebo: kyun amrit, aaj kuch zeyadah kaam tha kia?
Amrit: nahi bebo,
Bebo: to phir?
Amrit: woh kal raat ko jo maine set ki design banaai thi na woh ek worker se galati se pani mein gir gaye jiski wajah woh deisng puri kharaab ho gaye, to woh mujhe phirse aaj set par hi us design ko banana para. Kyunki design ke hisaab se set bhi to tayyar karni hai na.

Hearing this Bebo feels sorry and then she looks at amrit lovingly but with a questioning eyes
Amrit: kia hua bebo aap mujhe aise kyun dekh rahi hai
Bebo: amrit bas aapne itna hi sa kaam kia???
Amrit:(is like what???) itna kuch to kia................aur kya karna tha???
Bebo: sits up properly and crosses her arms......
Amrit: kia hua?
Bebo: to iska matlab aapne mujhe bilkul bhi miss nahi kia?
Amrit: (grins) acha ji to ye baat hai..........
Bebo: (nods) hmmm
Amrit: (puts down the cup of coffee) miss kya na bahut miss kia......
Bebo: (smiling slithly) acha...Kitna miss kia? (she question just like a kid, amrit saw and adore her cuteness)
Amrit: (turns towards her and moves closer to her).........bataan kia???
Bebo: hmmm............haaan
Amrit: gives her a longggggggggggggg warm tight hug................
Bebo: (happily) bus itna hi miss kia???
Amrit: nahi baba isse bhi zeyadah miss kia.............par baat ye hai ki aapko batane ke liye ye jagah kam hai. (grins naughtly)...........bed pe chaliye hum aapko batate hai aapko kitnaaaaaaa miss kia aapke is aashiq ne.............
Bebo: (blushes & shy, push him away) haan haan sab jaanti hoon..........waise ab thake huwe nahi hai aap?
Amrit: haan hoon bahut thaka hua hoon.............saying this he lies down in Bebo's lap...........Bebo unable to say anything just admires him.............
Amrit: bebo?
Bebo: hmmm
Amrit: (closes his eyes & say)..............amrit malhotra kaam karke thak sakta hai, par pyar ko lekar kabhi nahi thakta..............samjhi madam?
Bebo: acha...............ab bas bhi kijeye
Amrit smiles, bebo massages his head...amrit feels more at ease
After a while
Bebo: amrit?
Amrit (almost asleep)..........ji
Bebo: khana nahi khana kia?

Amrit: nahi bebo main bahut thak gaya hoon

Bebo: to phir bed pe araam kar lijeye.............
Amrit unwillingly he gets up.............he lies down and bebo puts the blanket over him............amrit holds her hand firmly and puts it beneath his cheek.........Bebo stands there looking at him not amused...........and adores his innocent looks...........Amrit shuts his eyes to get away from her glare.............
Bebo: amrit.........ye kya? ab main kia yahi kadhi rahoon aise?
Amrit: (in sleep) hmmm
Bebo: KYA?
Amrit: maine kab kaha aise khare rahiye?...........leht jaaiye, maine khab mana kia hai?
Bebo: Amrit jaane dijeyena plz.........
Amrit: bebo plzzz.............main bahut thak gaya hoon, mujhe disturb mat kijeye.........

Bebo kneels down beside the bed and puts her other hand on his face and stroke it lovingly and give him a sweet kiss on his cheek and say jaanti hoon aap take huwe ho isliye to keh rahi hoon, aap araam kar lijeye. Amrit looks at her with little angry, and then let go of her hand, Bebo gets up and is about to leave.

Amrit: shuts his eyes and say, bebo kia aapka jaane ko dil kar raha hai (Bebo stops as she too doesn't want to leave) amrit continues, kia mai aapko itna tang karta hoon ke aap mere pass nahi reh sakti?

Bebo: amrit aap bhi na, please aap mujhe youn emotional blackmail mat kia kijeye

Amrit gets happy and cheeckly said iska matlab aap nahi ja rahi hai. Bebo turns and walks towards the door. Amrit's smile fades and he turns his side pulling the blanket over his head angrily, she goes to the door and shuts it then turns back and come to Amrit. She goes up to him and pulls his blanket

Amrit: kya ab nahi jaana kia

Bebo: jaana thaa, par darwaza band karne, ab hum darwaza khool kar to so nahi sakte na. (smiles innocently)

Amrit smiles and pulls Bebo and she falls on him..........then they both stare at each other for a while ...........Then amrit turn side and now amrit is on Bebo, amrit moves her hair from her face and kiss her forehead. Then slowly he moves his lips towards her lips, but bebo put her fingers at his lips and stop him from kissing him and ask him ke ab aap thake huwe nahi hai........... Amrit says Bebo I told u I can get tired by anything, but I can NEVER get tired by loving my lovely wife. Bebo touched with his words. Then amrit ask bebo for permission to kiss her. Bebo blushes and nods, bebo closes her eyes and amrit give her a long kiss on her LIPS, after a while they get apart.

Amrit: Bebo ek baat kahoon

Bebo: ji kahiye

Amrit: woh bebo aap us waqt pooch rahi thi na ke maine aapko kitna miss kia,

Bebo: hmm

Amrit: main bataaw maine aapko aaj aur rooz kitna miss karta hoon. (Bebo understands what he meant and what he wants right now)

Bebo: nahi amrit mujhe nahi janna aap mujhe kitna miss karte hai

Amrit: plzzzzzz bebo mujhe batane dijeyena main aapko kitna miss karta hoon,

Bebo gets agree and nods her head

Then amrit puts his hand around Bebo's waist, he gets closer to her, she closes her eyes he slowly kiss on her shoulder, then on her neck (everywhere), he moves toward her cheek, he kiss on and finally he kiss on her lips (a long one), he moves back and he was just going to kiss once again but this time bebo put her finger on his lips and stopped him from kissing and tell him that he should go to sleep as he have to go to work early in the morning.

Amrit not wanting but helpless moves of her and lays besides her, Bebo rest her head on his chest, he lock her with his arms and soon they fall asleep.

Hope u guys liked the scene

feel free to comment or criticise

Afreen

awwwwww afee what a scene yaar! sooooooo romantic! i was totally in AmBo dreamland! awwww sooo sweet! amrit missed bebo soooo much. lol! totally cool scene. loved the whole concept of it.

aaaawwww

Originally posted by: ganga16tr

awwwwww afee what a scene yaar! sooooooo romantic! i was totally in AmBo dreamland! awwww sooo sweet! amrit missed bebo soooo much. lol! totally cool scene. loved the whole concept of it.

Ganga thanks for reading
glad u liked the scene
chalo acha hai kuch der ke liye hi sahi u went in AmBo dreamland
haan yaar ye amrit bebo ko bahut miss karta hai
thanks once again for reading and lovely comments

Originally posted by: alja

aaaawwww

Afee thank u so much , I totally loved the scene 👏👏👏

It was just fabulous , the whole concept and the Ambo conversation n gestures were too lovely !!

Mein sachi totally fida ho gai scene par, u hve made my day 😃 !!!

It was so sweet when Amrit extends his arm and Bebo rest herself on him ...

And then when she kneels down , Amrit having his hand under his cheek...

And when he says k bataon kitna miss kia....

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I must say that it was a fantastic scene with all the Ambo care, innocence n love 😃 !!!

Aaj ki episdoe se pehle it was a must dose 😊 !!!

Love u sweety

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You are most welcome sweety
I am glad u loved the scene dear
OMG ur fida on my scene, not on Amrit😆
wow i made ur day, thats good, thanks dear for ur such a lovely comments
it made my day
and don't talk about today's episode, i haven't watched laadli from 2nd June, and i don't think i got that much courage to watch 4th June episode, OMG it will be a heartbreaking episode
whatever, I am glad u loved the scene and it made ur day
thanks for reading, hope i will get to read something from u too soon

A small one from me

Its Amrit-Bebo Wedding anniversary, Amrit is taking bebo to Goa to celebrate their 1^st Wedding Anniversary and spend some good times together, but bebo doesn't know where she is going and why?

Bebo: Amrit, amrit ye hum kaha ja rahe hai.....

Amrit: uffoo bebo aap bhi na kitne sare sawaal poochti hai, u will know when we will reach there.....

Amrit car stop at a big hotel and he goes to receptionist and ask for a room, and then they go to their room. Amrit closes the door and tell bebo to go and freshen up, Bebo keep looking amrit and wondering what he is really doing. Amrit saw her staring at him and ask her what happen? Why is she looking at him like this? Then she just burst,

Bebo: Amrit ye kia hai main aapse kab se pochi ja rahi hoon hum kaha ja rahe hai, but aap hai ki kkoi jawaab hi nahi de rahe, aur ye hum is hotel mein kyun aaye hai???

Amrit: to ye baat hai

Bebo ( in angry tone): haan, ab to bataaiye hum yaha kyun aaye hai?

Amrit: Bebo bas younhi, mera dil kia ke main aapke sath kuch time spend karo....

Bebo: who to hum ghar pe bhi kar sakte the na phir yaha aane ki kia zaroorat thi?

Now amrit get angry and goes near the window. Bebo feels that he is angry and feel guilty that she shouldn't have asked these question..... akhir amrit ka pura haq banta hai mujhpar and she goes to him and hold her ears and SAY SORRY, and then amrit take bebo in his arms and give her a warm hug......bebo still in amrit's arm and ask

Bebo: amrit ek baat pucho

Amrit: hmm...puchiye

Bebo: aapne abhi tak nahi bataya...

Amrit: Kia..?????

Bebo: yahi ke hum yaha kyun aaye ..smiles

Amrit: BEBO...and they both burst into laugh...

After a while they both go to sleep. In the middle of night Amrit get up without making any noise and decorate the entire hotel room with red roses. and then went back to sleep

Early in the morning he gets up and he takes a rose and goes to Bebo and moves the rose on her face. Bebo gets irritated

Bebo: Amrit ye kia kar rahe hai sone dijeye na.....

Amrit: uthiye na bebo.... plz.....

Bebo (opens her eyes) amrit aapne raat ko bhi theek se sone nahi dia tha..... aur abbb....but then she suddenly stops in the middle, she is surprised to see the room

Bebo: Amrit ye sab kia hai, its beautiful.....

Amrit (with angry): nahi-nahi bebo aap so jaaiye kafee thaki huwi lag rahi hai.....

Bebo: amrit sorry, but mujhe abhi bhi samajh mein nahi a raha ye sab kyun???

Amrit: goes near her and kiss her check and wish her Wedding Anniversary

Bebo then remembers that its their 1^st Wedding Anniversary she also kiss his cheek and wish him a "Happy Wedding Anniversary." Amrit is on seventh sky now he goes near her and softly kisses her neck. Bebo feels shy and try to run from there but amrit holds her hand and tell her that he have putted something in bathroom for her and she should wear that then he give a kiss on her head and bebo took her hand from his hand and runs out of the bed, and goes to the bathroom.

After sometimes, she comes out, wearing a beautiful red saari. Amrit saw her and mesmerized and adore her beauty, he stares at her, Bebo smiles

Amrit- beautiful....

Bebo gets shy....She moves her hair and some drops of water move from her hair and it falls on amrit's face, amrit is no more in control, he goes near her, she shies away and moves backwards..... But soon she just bumped with something and she turns and see the DEAD END as she bumps into the wall. Amrit is getting closer, more closer to her. Bebo closes her eyes, her breath is faster now. Amrit starts kissing her ears, neck, all over.

Bebo feels his touch, he expresses his love to her. Bebo faces the other side and he kisses all over her back.

Bebo: amrit ye sab din mein???

Amrit (switches off the lights): din mein raat kar doon? Aur waise bhi madam pyar karne ka kkoi waqt nahi hota hai, din ho ya raat pyar to kabhi bhi kia ja sakta hai.....

Bebo gets off him naughtily. But amrit holds her hands, bebo struggle with her hand but amrit don't leave her hand.

Bebo: amrit, bas kijeye na.....

Amrit: shshh, bebo aaj mat rokiye mujhe please....

Then he draws the curtains and moves towards Bebo

Bebo bump with the bed and falls on it. He then move closer to her and lies down beside her and strokes her face lovingly and bebo's breathing get really fast. He gets extremely closer to her, she too eases herself now. Amrit then licks her neck, and she gets shy.....

She gets hold of his shirt and kisses his ears softly, he stops and looks at her, she smiles shyly, he too smiles and they kiss each other, Bebo loses control over her desire and holds him tighter. Amrit unbuttons his shirt and throws away, they get lost in each-other and they zoom out
Hope u guys liked it
please comment or criticize
Afreen

omg afee. another excelent scene! wow...

wow Afee, these days aapka dimaagh brillaintly kaam krne laga hai madam ....😊