Vivah SS last part-pg5 Samar Piya,Dheera

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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is originally written on other couples.I'm presenting SNS version 4 Mansi.
Piya is Madirakshi.
Mihir Juhi r Ronit Roy Gautami


Urmila was writing in her note book.
Her mother Kalpana came:Urmila..why are you sitting and writing in late night?
Urmila:I am doing my assignment mom.
Kal:Enough of this.You will have dark circles.Now you should not sacrifice sleep and study.It will affect your beauty.Tomorrow boy's party is coming to see you.You should look nice.
Urmila was shocked:What?Boy's party coming to see me?
Kal:Yes.You should dress well.
URMILA:Mo mom.I don't want to get married.That's final.

Kal:What nonsense!
URMILA:I want to study.
Kal:You and your studies.Nice proposals don't come always.So without making any fuss tomorrow you should dress well and come before the boy's family.

Urmila got tensed.

The next morning...

Urmila went to meet someone.Seeing him she embraced him.
URMILA:Laxman...
Laxman:Urmila,..what happened?
URMILA:Today a boy is coming to see me.Mom is forcing me to go in front of him.
Laxman:For such a silly thing you are worried?
Urmila kicked his shoulder:You dumbo..you find it silly?
Laxman:Come on chill baby.A boy is only coming to see you.Not your wedding.Reject him.I don't think your dad will force you.
URMILA:That's right.
Laxman:It's so simple.
URMILA:But still I am tensed.
Laxman:Don't worry baby.When I am there why should you worry?

He pulled her cheeks making her smile.
Laxman:Why don't we go to the canteen and have icecream to cheer up.
She smiled.
They both had icecream in the canteen and enjoyed.

After classes Urmila went home.
Kalpana:Urmila...get dressed up grandly before the boy comes.
Niranjan:Kalpana...why are you not telling Piya to dress well ?
Kal:Why should I tell Piya to dress well?The boy is not coming to see her.
Nir:What nonsense!The proposal is for Piya.
Urmila smiled with surprise:It's for Piya jeeji?
Kalpana was shocked:What?The proposal is for Piya?
Nir:Yes.
Kalpana was frustrated:I thought you are taking interest to get your daughter married to a very good guy.But no..I was wrong.You are only interested in your late sister's daughter Piya.Our daughter is nothing for you.
Niranjan :Kalpana..what are you saying?Urmila and Piya are equal to me.Urmila is only studying and Piya is the eldest one.That's why I am thinking of getting Piya married first.

Kal:Don't give silly excuses.I can understand everything.
Niranjan became upset:Why are you always like this?
Urmila:Mom..don't over react.I am happy that Piya jeeji got a nice proposal and I am also not ready for marriage.
Suddenly they saw Piya with wet eyes behind them.
Kalpana:Are you happy that you got a good proposal while my daughter is single?
Nir:Kalpana...why are you always rude to Piya?
Kalpana walked away angrily.Piya's eyes were full of tears.

Nir:Piya..don't be upset.You know how your mami is.
Urmila wiped her tears:Let mom say anything,But jeeji...you should smile.Your smile is so beautiful that the boy will fall for your smile.


Piya smiled.
Urmila:I will get you ready.

Meera put shirt and pant on the bed and looked at Samar.
Meera:Wear this soon Samar.We have to go and meet the girl.
Samar was tensed.
Meera laughed:Look at his face.
Dharam too laughed:So tensed you are.
Samar:Don't laugh bhaiyya...I remember you were also tensed when you had to meet bhabhi for the first time.

Meera:Right Samar.When he came to see me he was shivering with tension.He was so weird.
Dharam was embarrassed.

Meera:Anyways get ready fast.
Samar Dharam's parents Mihir Juhi came.
Juhi:Samar..you did'nt get ready yet?
Meera:Poor guy is so tensed that he is shivering when he touches the clothes in his wardrobe.So I selected a suit for him.
Everyone laughed.
Mihir:Good that Samar got a nice bhabhi who does all these for him.
Samar:You are right dad.Bhabhi is my strength.
Everyone smiled.

Meera was taking her hand bag.Suddenly Dharam embraced her from back.
She blushed:What are you doing?

Dharam:You said I was shivering when I came to see you.I just wanted to prove that I don't shiver when I touch you.
He pulled her closer.
Meera:Naughty!
She pushed him.He smiled.

Urmila got Piya ready.
Urmila:You look so pretty jeeji.
Piya smiled.Kalpana fumed with anger.

Mihir Juhi Dharam Meera and Samar reached there.Niranjan welcomed them while Kalpana stood at a corner angrily which made Niranjan feel bad.
Mihir:Here is the boy.My youngest son Samar.
Samar was shy.He touched Niranjan's feet.
Nir:God bless you beta.You are so well mannered.Now a days where can we find such guys.
Everyone smiled.
Juhi:This is my eldest son Dharam and this is my eldest daughter in law Meera.
Nira:Namaste!
Dharam Meera:Namaste uncleji.
Juhi:Where is your wife?
Niranjan looked at the corner with a dull face.They all looked that side and saw Kalpana looking dull.
Mihir Juhi smiled:Namaste!
Kalpana did'nt care and said :Namaste!
Mihir Juhi felt bad.
Juhi whispered:Why is she behaving like this?So indifferent.Did she not like our arrival?
Mihir:Don't think too much about it.What difference does it make?We are here to see Niranjanji's niece.

Juhi:Ok.
Meera:I can't wait to see my devrani.
Juhi:Even I am eager to see my bahu.
Niranjan:Kalpana..call Piya.
Kalpana went inside angrily:Piya..your guy and family have come.
Urmila:Wow.
Piya was nervous.
Urmila brought her to the room.Everyone smiled seeing her while Samar was looking down in nervousness.
Juhi went near her and caressed her:You are looking so cute.
Piya smiled and touched her feet.
Juhi:God bless you beta.
Niranjan showed Mihir to Piya:Piya beta..this is the boy's father .
Piya touched his feet too and got blessed.
Meera:Hi..I am Meera..hopefully very soon I will be your jethani.
Piya smiled.
Meera:And this is my husband Dharam.
Piya smiled.
Juhi:I feel like taking you home now itself.But before that you see whether you liked my son.Only if you both like each other I can claim my rights on you.
Mihir:Yes right.
Meera:Hey Samar...now shed your shyness and look at the girl.See if you liked her.
Urmila:You too look at the boy di.
Samar and Piya slowly looked at each other.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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First of all a thank u soo much for converting this SS for me on my fav couples 👍🏼...The first part is really super best loved it u have done it Soo amazingly 😊poor Urmila got scared when her mother told her to be ready on time as boy's Family would be coming to see her 😭... Urmila ran and huged a person n he turned out to be laxman ...Loved their passionate hug 😳... Urmila is scared n tense but our laxman is in a mood to do masti with her ...She hit him on his shoulder...Loved laxman saying to her her dad won't force her 😊...Urmila got happy to hear that...Loved Laxmila enjoying ice cream 😳...I hope kalpana doesn't create problem for Laxmila union...Urmila reached home n got to know the Rishta is for her elder sis Piya n got very happy for her 😊...But kalpana dint liked that n taunt Piya 😡...Our Samar babu is tensed n so his bhabhi Meera takes out his clothes for him to wear soo sweet of her...Samar saying to Dharam he too got tense when meeting first time Meera 😳...Loved Dharam hugging Meera from back 😳...Wow Ronit Roy as mihir n gautami as Juhi...Juhi n mihir got doubt on kalpana...Loved the bonding between Piya n Urmila (PiMila)...Piya taking elders blessings 👍🏼...Loved Samar n Piya shyly looking at each other 😳...Wondering what will happen next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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i'm happy that u read n commented .loved ur detailed comment.never epected such a long comment.Mihir Juhi are from Kyunki saas bhi kabhi bahu thi.I used to love their chemistry a lot in KSBKBT.So I paired them up here.

Originally posted by: Vampire2468

First of all a thank u soo much for converting this SS for me on my fav couples 👍🏼...The first part is really super best loved it u have done it Soo amazingly 😊poor Urmila got scared when her mother told her to be ready on time as boy's Family would be coming to see her 😭... Urmila ran and huged a person n he turned out to be laxman ...Loved their passionate hug 😳... Urmila is scared n tense but our laxman is in a mood to do masti with her ...She hit him on his shoulder...Loved laxman saying to her her dad won't force her 😊...Urmila got happy to hear that...Loved Laxmila enjoying ice cream 😳...I hope kalpana doesn't create problem for Laxmila union...Urmila reached home n got to know the Rishta is for her elder sis Piya n got very happy for her 😊...But kalpana dint liked that n taunt Piya 😡...Our Samar babu is tensed n so his bhabhi Meera takes out his clothes for him to wear soo sweet of her...Samar saying to Dharam he too got tense when meeting first time Meera 😳...Loved Dharam hugging Meera from back 😳...Wow Ronit Roy as mihir n gautami as Juhi...Juhi n mihir got doubt on kalpana...Loved the bonding between Piya n Urmila (PiMila)...Piya taking elders blessings 👍🏼...Loved Samar n Piya shyly looking at each other 😳...Wondering what will happen next

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

i'm happy that u read n commented .loved ur detailed comment.never epected such a long comment.Mihir Juhi are from Kyunki saas bhi kabhi bahu thi.I used to love their chemistry a lot in KSBKBT.So I paired them up here.

Ur welcome dear 😳...Even I too used to love their chemistry a lot 😳...It's really very good choice from u 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update 😊
Loved Dheera hug 😳
Waiting for the next update 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Really?Have u watched kyunki?

Originally posted by: Vampire2468

Ur welcome dear 😳...Even I too used to love their chemistry a lot 😳...It's really very good choice from u 😳

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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Really?Have u watched kyunki?

Yes...I have watched Kyuki saas bhi kabhi bahu thi...I loved this serial a lottt 😳...It's title track was awesome too 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Happy to see a new Dheera lover.thx a lot

Originally posted by: faby16

Nice update 😊

Loved Dheera hug 😳
Waiting for the next update 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Really nice. Waiting for the next instalment
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice to see one more dheera fan

Originally posted by: Pollyanna

Really nice. Waiting for the next instalment

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