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Posted: 12 years ago
Really superb update.

Gopi meets the Modi family and they get to see Rohan.

Kokila is suspecting that there is something there but cannot quite place it yet. Ahem yet again had to face his guilt. It looks to be a wise decision to talk to Anita first before telling the rest of the family.

The dubious sub theme is the introduction of Umang and his role. It seems to be a negative one.

Looking forward to knowing how Ahem will resolve this.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful Update Delsi😛
Waiting 4 Nxt Part😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update delsi...loved it! and hmm precap is interesting..so much want ahem to tell the truth and bring gopi and rohan home..even then liking your pace..and thanks for pm..do continue soon ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: archanakarthik

Awesome update Deepika👏 story is interesting and developing very well⭐️ very emotional part


Hope soon ahem will tell the truth to family as he is taking more time problem is getting bigger soon he says it better for Anita,gopi and Rohan. Looking forward to next update will umang find gopi and Rohan?



Thanks archana for loving it
iam sure within few chapters he ill recover most of the problems
you ill definetly love it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Justlikethat1

Great update Delsi⭐️

Poor Rohan😭 How horrible for him.. It is good that Koki now suspects that something is wrong and Ahem better not procrastinate anymore.. He is hurting everyone close to him by doing this. 😕 I hope that the next update is far better for Gopi and Rohan.
Anitha also needs to know the truth. Shouting at her is not the answer

thaks Harini
i know Rohan had lot of trouble in this chapter i write this chapter after lot of struggle
don't expect anything Harini within 3 or more chapters it all will be changed
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: swasthi

Really superb update.


Gopi meets the Modi family and they get to see Rohan.

Kokila is suspecting that there is something there but cannot quite place it yet. Ahem yet again had to face his guilt. It looks to be a wise decision to talk to Anita first before telling the rest of the family.

The dubious sub theme is the introduction of Umang and his role. It seems to be a negative one.

Looking forward to knowing how Ahem will resolve this.

Swasthi thank you so much iam glad that you are loving it
Umang ill be the villan for some more chapters
hope you ill enjou other chapters too
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nilani19

Wonderful Update Delsi😛
Waiting 4 Nxt Part😛

Thanks nalini for loving it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: scarlet167

awesome update delsi...loved it! and hmm precap is interesting..so much want ahem to tell the truth and bring gopi and rohan home..even then liking your pace..and thanks for pm..do continue soon ⭐️

Madu iam glad that you like the part
next cahpter ill be interesting too 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments
you all ill enjou the upcaoming chapters
Part 13:

In Gopi house

Gopi trying her best to make Rohan quite but the incident that happen in the mandir make toll on him, he constantly asking for Ahemji, she don't know how to console him. On the other hand she is ,more worried for Ahemji, what happen there how he handled the family member, other side she has a fear whether he told the truth to the family, in her confusion she left the food burnt, she stood there in thinking mode without realizing the food has been burnt until Meethi come and switch off the stove.

She shook Gopi "Babhi are you ok".

Mee…. OMG she realize the food is burnt, quickly went to take it stooped by Meethi, " Babhi you leave it I ill prepare the rest, babhi I think you are worried about something, once returning from the Mandir you were lost one side on the other side Rohan keep on crying, what happen babhi?"

Nothing Meethiben you plz quickly prepare for lunch until I ill try to console Rohan, saying so Gopi left where as Meethi looks puzzled by Gopi's behavior.

Gopi reached the room saw Rohan with Ahemji photo constantly asking him to return soon, Gopi heart burst into tears she went towards Rohan and sit beside him and caress his hair and slightly took the photo from him, Rohan looked at her with eyes full of tears.

Mummy when ill papa return, tell me mummy.

Gopi wipe his tears munna why are acting childishly you know na papa is gone out for urgent work, but mummy in the Mandir, munna that is not our papa he looks similar like him, tell me one thing once papa see you what he ill do, "He come running, hug me and give lots of kisses to me" said Rohan with a wide smile, "ah… exactly! so now tell me where is your papa?", he went to office, " now stop crying you not at all look good while crying, so you ill cry again" Rohan wipe his tears and shook his head, "Ha this is wat my munna, he looks so so cute while smiling". With that he carry Rohan and went to the dining table.

In MM

Kokila pacing her room restlessly, confused about the incident happen in the Mandir she is very sure that there is something between that Gopi and Ahem, she could see the delight on her face once she saw Ahem the look exchanged between them, after Anita interfered them Gopi become disappointment and fear on her face.

OH kanaji plz make my mind clear I don't know but my heart says something going to happen, make this confusion clear my Ahem should be happy with his wife.

Outside Gopi's house:

Umang standing outside of Gopi house he secretly peek inside and went towards the window he saw Gopi engrossed in feeding the boy and telling some stories so he decided to search for some clues, and he went by the other side were the bedroom he silently peek in where he find a photo of Ahem hugging Rohan, he is shell shocked, but he can't able to come to any conclusion as he Know Ahem very well he ill not do anything against his mother wish so he decided to clarify the relationship between the three by their neighbors , he went out to enquired about the families in the house to the neighbors by showing the Ahem photo in his cell phone, they confirmed that it's the girls husband and they had 3yrs old son, residing there for past 9months.

Umang became shocked on hearing the news he can't believe his ears, first thing he remembered is the incident that happen in the morning how they both acted as if nothing happen his anger boiled he need to humiliate him and show his true face to his family and rush towards MM.

Ahem and Jigar come home, Ahem saw Anita is busy with her phone near juladhi, "Anita I need to talk to you privately come to room quickly", she saw him and continue her call Ahem become irritated and raise his voice but immediately calm down "Anita plz listen to me its urgent".

Anita turned towards him "Ahem can't you just wait for few more minutes, I discussing abt the important party tomorrow with my friend, just spare for few more minutes". "OH ….PARTY PARTY you always need party, saying so he grab her phone and throw it on the floor".

All the MM members come running on hearing Ahem's shout, "Ahem what's wrong with you? Why are you behaving like a child? Ah, now tell me wats the matter, before he could open his mouth. "I ILL TELL ABOUT THAT DIDI" Umang said while entering into MM.

"DIDI, he is going to tell abt his secret relationship, saying so he turned towards Ahem "aim right Ahemjiu", where as Ahem and Jigar both are shocked by Umang confession.

"Didi this family betraying you he has illegal relationship with the women we met in the Mandir", STOP IT UMANG, this your limit shouted Kokila.

"How can you say such thing abt my son ah, before open your mouth you should know abt him", oh Anty do you have lot of confidence in your son then ask him, on hearing his mothers confidence in him Ahem bend his head in ashamed not knowing what to tell he.

SEE your son Aunty how he bent his head just go and ask him whether it's true or not, he has illegal relationship with that woman before marrying my sister, he brought a new house to her and leaving happily leaving my sister in this dark.

Kokila went towards Ahem "Ahem what he is telling ah (holding his shoulder) tell me the truth" mom woh… woh… he is telling the truth, "WHAT", ha mom I love Gopi before he could proceed any further Kokila gave him a tight slap.

Anita came towards and hold his collar Ahem why did you betrayed me ah tell me Ahem, "Anita plz listen to me" just stop it iam not going to hear your lies again.

Ahem iam not going to spare you, you and your illegal sl**t should answer for my sister.

Umang mind your words if you utter any wrong words on Gopi then you are gone, "Listen Ahem and your illegal s**t ill going to pay for my sister tears" saying so he Grab Anita's hand and went out.

Ahem closed his eyes tears roll down from his eyes, when he open his eyes the only thing he could see is his mom and her faith in him, Kokila stood there as a statute only regain her conscious when Ahem touched her, mom listen me I did that coz…. Before he could tell anything further Kokila moved from there.

Ahem see all the members leaving him none of them try to listen to him all are move towards to their room expect Jigar who approached him, but before he could tell anything Ahem went to his room. Jigar stood their not knowing what to do further, his first think abt his bhai and determine to convince him to tell whole truth to the family.

When Jigar reached Ahem's room and saw him standing by the window looking towards the sky, Bhai before he could proceed anything Ahem phone rang, when he saw the number its from Gopi immediately he wipe his tears and attend the call.

"Hello, papa when are you going to come without you its very boring" goes on Rohan without letting him to answer, once Rohan finish, "ah at last you finish ah, I told you I ill come by tomorrow, what you don't believe your papa ah".

"No papa its not like that I saw one man as exactly like you na after that my mind thinking abt you papa, sorry" Finished Rohan after giving his explanation for his nonstop questions.

After hearing Mandir incident his smile disappeared, for few seconds stood silently by the time he try to answer him he hear Gopi's voice, "Ahemji are you alright na", "ha Gopi iam alright, what abt Rohan is he trouble you lot ah", "no no Ahemji its nothing like that after coming from temple he is little bit upset but now he is ok".

"Ahemji are you alright there is no problem na" for a second Ahem became silent "no Gopi everything is alright hear, you take care I ill meet you both of you in the morning" saying so he immediately cut the call knowing that if he wait another second he ill brunt out whole truth to her.

Gopi became puzzled by his sudden behavior immediately became worried that there might be some problem.

Bahi I think you should tell whole truth to the family, JIGAR I told you before itself don't drag that matter, can't you hear me.

Ha bahi but you see after this all ill be angry on you plz don't let that happen, Jigar once again iam reminding you myself and Gopi both are living for Rohan and his happiness, if he knows that abt his birth and we both are pretending to be his parents he ill be heartbroken we both can't see him like that, so plz forget abt that, me and Gopi can face whatever problem to maintain this secret.

Ok bahi its up to you just think twice before taking any decision, saying so he left to his room.

Later in night after lot of struggle Rashi convince and bring all the members to dinner when Jigar came to the dining table he notice all are there expect his Bhai, he went to bring him after little bit effort.

All the members ignore him and started to have their dinner Ahem became heartbroken and try to leave the table but Jigar stopped him and insisted to have his dinner, in the middle of the dinner Ahem's phone ring from the unknown number first he ignore that but the phone keeps on ringing, with the irritation he attend the phone.

Before he could answer he heard a panic voice of Meethi, "Bahi plz come home soon"

"Meethi wat happen is everything alright na" asked Ahem with worried after hearing her Meethi's voice where as all the family members look puzzle by the conversation.

"Bahi there are some goons come inside the house and… and they started to hit Gopi Babhi and Rohan"

He stood from the table "What!… What happen to Rohan and Gopi is both are alright na" once hearing Gopi name family expression changed from concern to anger.

"No bahi, Babhi sent myself and Rohan in the backside door but she caught up inside itself, plz bahi come soon", aim calling from nearby booth bai.

"What Gopi is alone in home…ok ok , you just be there I ill be there within 5min, be safe ah, iam coming" saying so he went running towards the car, where as the family are disguised by his behavior.

Ahem collect Rohan and Meethi and went towards Gopi's house once reaching there he saw the goons gone from there, he left Rohan inside the car and went to look for Gopi and all the things are trash on the floor but he could not find Gopi.

When he reached Back door he found Gopi got hurt lying unconsciously on the floor Ahem try to wake her but there is no response from Gopi he carry her and went to the hospital Rohan started to cry on seeing Gopi in this state he keeps on waking her.

Gopi gain her conscious in the Moring She saw that Ahem sitting beside her and Rohan sleeping nearby couch, she recall the incided happen in the night it was her fault they are from Anita's side one of guy told to move out of the Ahem's life, she started crying by thing her faith, that she is not worthy to live for a normal life.

Ahem realize the movement he wake up to see Gopi crying silently, "Gopi what happen is its paining ah" Ahem got more worried on seeing her crying.

Ahemji wat did I do wrong why I can't live a normal life, I am I that much wrong soul, Ahem tightly hug her no Gopi you didn't do anything it's me, all the fault is with me I can't even protect you I am sorry Gopi.

Before they could talk anything further Rohan wake up from sleep, he came running and hug her, mummy are you alright na, "yes Munna I am alright you see how mummy is nothing ill happen don't worry".

Later Doctor discharge Gopi from hospital Ahem drove Gopi and Rohan to home while traveling Gopi realize that this is not route to her house, "Ahemji where are you going, plz take us home".

"Gopi wait for some time I am taking both of them to home only" Gopi and Rohan see face to face but dint speaks anything.

Once reaching the destination Gopi caught up with the name Modi Bavhan, Ahemji why did you bring us hear, plz we can return Ahemji saying so she started to backup but Ahem hold her hand " Gopi if you really have faith in me keep quiet and come beside me". Ahem carry Rohan in one hand and hold Gopi's hand.

This what the family noticed Ahem carry Rohan in one hand and with the other hand he hold Gopi hand.

Next part: Rohan told Ahem that he dint like this house and ask to move to previous house.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update delsi.. the ending is for this capter makes me want to know what is going to happen and i liked the precap awesome.

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