Os: After the fire incident

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello friends. This is my first os. I Could not get the fire incident away from my mind so, i have written how i wished for gohem after that.
Ahem and gopi had just come out together from the fire, wrapped in a blanket and hugging each other close enough. Kokila saw them and hug them and ask for their well being with tears rolling down her eyes. Gohem informed that they were fine. Hetal advised them to go to their room till doctor come and jigar hurriedly called the doctor and told the whole incident. Meanwhile rashi tried to approach gopi but stand still when she saw that gohem had already started stepping the stairs and were lost in their own thoughts. Both were trying to manipulate what just happened in a couple of minutes and didn't know when they had reached their room.
Here, ahem was thinking what would have happened to gopi if fire had incresed? He tried to push away his thoughts by shutting his eyes but his mind pictured the scene when he found gopi in the debris and was trying to wake her up but nothing helped.
And on the other side gopi was thinking only about his ahemji. What if something had happened to him?
And suddenly ahem shouted in his most angriest tone how dare u gopi? How dare u enter the kitchen? Could u not see the fire there? What if something had happened to u? How i would be able to survive? But gopi was too shocked with both the incidents and the words. She was absorbing the meaning of his words. When ahem did'nt get any answer he called gopi and started shaking her and gopi just threw herself in his arms and starting crying bitterly. Ahem tried to calm her by rocking his arm on her back. After sometime gopi said in hiccups- Ahemji, at that time i was only seeing u and that too in fire. I couldnt held myself. What if something had happened to u. I cant bear a scratch on u. Ahem said- Gopi, as u want me to be healthy and sound i too want the same for u. I love u gopi and i cant live without u to which gopi said- i love too ahemji. No gopi exist without her ahemji by tightning her arms around his waist. Ahem too responded the same by making her more closer to him and said i love u gopi and promise me u will always be with me forever and ever to which gopi nodded and hugged her more tighter than before.
And this was how anita, doctor, and other family members found them. Hugging each other and confessing their infinite love for each other.

So, how was it. Gud or bad. Plz comment with your opinion.

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A2ZVictory thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderful. Really emotional confession. Loved it.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: A2ZV

Wonderful. Really emotional confession. Loved it.


Thanku. I am glad u like it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely OS svtsns 😉 !!! I enjoyed it !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it...filled with true love. Gopi or Ahem would have ceased to live if they lost the other...doh hanson ka joda.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb OS Savi. What a wonderful end to the awful situation they are in.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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a very nice os
hope to c such scenes in the show as well
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely. i would love if something like this is shown today
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely touching. . . OS. . . pretty awesome 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kafa

Great OS, please continue


Thanku. Will try to continue.

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