FF: Teri Ore.. Updated Part ten on pg21 (21/5)

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Vinder90

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

WOW: super awesome, LOVED IT

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Madhura

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

i just caught up with the parts... brilliant work... 👏

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varshu27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

absolutely loved the teasing ahem...cant wait for the next part..

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Wonderful update.

Hmm...I like the direction its going in, keep them coming.

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anu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

wonderful yaar awitimg for next part add me in ur PM list...

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Savi_S

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Loved the teasing ahem. Update soon n plz pm me.

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FlowerHater

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

awww dat was so sweet!!!!! Atleast we can have some sweet romantic moments here until these idiots are airing this crap!!!!!! Eagerly waiting for the next update dear!!!

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JJ15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Prithi, that was beautifully written. I love the Ahemji you have created. Naughty naughty!! Our Gopi is clever. Can't wait till he finds out about Holi. Ahemji is going to get lots of flashbacks when he goes on that trip ;) I love how you have described Ahem's thoughts. Thanks for the PM. :)

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navyab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Lovely part...if Ahem can be naughty & romantic just before the start of the trip...Im sure in simla with her alone, with the beautiful weather & sights he will woo her till she herself will no more think of escaping !!!

I liked how Ahem wanted his wife not to take the blame of others...though he actually piled up guilt on her, he knew this was the way to make her see the truth !!!

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Raunika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

nice angle 2 d story.plz do continue.

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