SS-The Boon and the Bane(04/18 - Part IV)

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Harini that was awesome , this is exactly what I want this girl to be like , a bit fiesty ,naughty ,confident, but honest with no airs about herself. You have done an incredible job wud her character , can't wait to read more .I wud luv her to play cupid for gohem as they can't do for themselves they need a push ,I am sure u have some kinda plan for this as ur ss moves along. Pls update soon ,can u pls pm me

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Nandita / Tina

@5cents

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Harini, this is exactly what I needed to read...PERFECTLY wonderful⭐️. A captivating start👏

WOW! Preethi, is super cool...you have shaped her just the way we wanted...a feisty, touching, endearing and realistic character. She is so in... I-will-help-Gopi Bhabhi-Mode.

Loved her and the flow of the story. Please continue...

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navyab

@navyab

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Harini...how do you come up with such wonderful stories 😉 !!!

Loved every bit of it...loved preeti & her irritating Ahem...

Ahem is longing for Gopi's attention & Preeti is constantly taking her away...😛 ...he needs to step up his gear to ensure he matches Preeti 😉

The saree scene was cute...but does Ahem realise that he has gifted her only one saree till now & Preeti understood the family dynamics between Koki & Hetal...& Rashi's extra sweet nature...

Gopi gets along with everyone...thats normal...but will she be able to become frens with Preeti & will Preeti also become a fren with Gopi???

So what happened that Gopi was being blamed of the threat ???

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shruthi2010

@shruthi2010

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

beautiful story harini.
i love preeti, i love preeti.
oh how much would i love her if she is really there in the show.
but i will not worry. i have your wonderful story to read.
excellent