OS : The First Step to New Relation

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad
Superb and awesome OS...👏⭐️

very well written👍🏼

Thankyou, for liking it... I just love the chemistry of GOpi Ahem...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: varshu27
fantastic os...loved how ahem looked for gopi as soon as he woke up...loved it...

Thank you, and Yes, I want to see this in the show... he wakes up to find her...its a sweet thing when a husband looks for his wife early in the morning

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bunny_fun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Dhabu89
👏So Ahem babu finally got around to making the first move...I hope we get to see this on screen. I would love to see Gopi's face at his intimate touch😍 This is a beautiful OS and you did a wonderful job penning down the emotions of both of them 👍🏼 Next time no Koki...Just them two and their passion for each other😉

Yes, Ahem finally made the first move... Both Ahem and Gopi are so shy... and reserved...but being a man... as we have been seeing in few other scenes where he is initiating things... I thought it needs to be Ahem... or it is bound to be Ahem as Gopi is never going to do anything like this in fear of being hurt again... and Also she still does not know completely that Ahem is falling for her...

I would want to see this scene on-screen... I hope they show it... because it is not something they cannot show... it is just a private moment between Husband and wife... nothing that cannot be shown on television...

Thankyou, for liking it... and penning your views here... I love to read comments...

There will surely be a next time... i will surely write more...as I am a complete romantic at heart... will try not to interupt a private moment and continue to see where it leads them...