OS: By Chance. ~Thank you~ pg 9

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ANJ4

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Shit... I read this at the wrong time. I read this in the morning while brushing my teeth... I should have read this at bed time. My mistake.

this was just beautiful the way it was written and the VM really helped ...thank you

Next time please put WARNING READ WHEN HUBBY HOME AND IN EVENING.😉

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navyab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Wonderful OS & VM...love can never hold on for long without being expressed 😊

Finally Ahem & Gopi have become one expressing what they feel for each other !!!

Thank you Shilpa, Swasthi & Hanagohem for the OS, the VM, & the song selection 😊

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FlowerHater

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

😊 freakin awesome!!!!!😉 loved it and vm too!!!!!😳here comes a big 🤗

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Dhabu89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

😍 OMG, the best SR I have read so far. I really really need a very cold shower now...not kidding anymore😕 Thank you for updating. That was wonderfully written and described. I was feeling like I was there watching. I almost closed my eyes😆 Please continue updating and pm me when it is updated...please😃

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Justlikethat1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Shilpa and Swasthi.. Fabulous.. Wow..WOW..WOW...👏

Your combination has created wonders.. Fantastic and I can go on and on.. What a beautifully written piece.. WOW.. I cannot seem to go any further. to explain what I feel.
The best written piece of consummation I have read till now.. Well done both of you. I could feel the innocence and purity that their love is, in the physical act of coming together too.. 👏 You have both outdone yourself... Way to go😃

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varshu27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

fantastic update...shilpa and swasthi together u guys have created magic...im sure every one reading this are going to be transported to la la land...and what a wonderful vm...thanks hanagohem for a great song choice...

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tina_1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

that was really haawwwtt nd beautifully written

just a doubt..y did old man's mentioning mechanic left ahem perplexed ??

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hana_y

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

shilpa wow amezing your os love it the love make wow so hot lovely work u n swasthi tp good hope we can see that in the show

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--HANISA--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

so hot shilpa well done love it yaar u both did a good job so finaly they make love it just i our ff os or ss they ill make make not in the show i think 👏

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Maham

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Wow, wow, wow, wow, wow! That was so freaking sexy...one of the best written SR/first time scene ever...serious props to both Shilpa and Swasthi for this perfection!

And the VM is absolutely fantastic, Shilpa! The song, scene selection, everything was beautiful <3

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