A Goham + Raji story - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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tht was an amazing update...looking forward to read more...plzz update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey thanx again for all of the comments , 😊

at the hospital
the doctors put both rashi and gopi on a stretcher and took them to the icu
aham was holding gopis hand tightly but , her hand slowly drifted apart from his when the nurses rolled her to the icu , aham felt like he was losing her , he ran behind them , to find the door closed in his face , ...he fell to the ground and sat there lost in gopis thoughts ,

jigar came running to the hospital to find his brother down on the ground , he slowly sat down next to him , " bhai , wheres... rashi .. and bhabhi" aham just pointed to the door , he couldnt tell him where they went , it was as if he had no tongue , ... jigar looked at the door and walked to it , he saw rashi , unconscious and the doctors treating her , she had machines tied to her hand and her face ,,, jigar thought , was this really the way he wanted rashi to be , ,,, did she really need to get such a big punishment ,,,okay she did lie to be in the most precious relation in the world , she did betray me and my family members , but no one can be this merciless to give this type of a punishment, jigar kept on thinking about his past and rashi ,

the two boys completely ignored their family members rushing to them panic stricken ,kokila saw her son , he has blood stains all over his clothes " hey krishna bhagwan , aham what happened" but aham was not in a state to answer any questions " jigar , aham , where is rashi and gopi * jigars dad asked concerned ,urmilla ran to jigar and looked into the tiny window of the door , to see rashi in a state that she always begged god for gopi to be in ," hiye hiye mari dikri , look at her , where is the doctor " just then two doctors stepped out, on from gopis room and one from rashis room ,

jigar was about to go to rashis doctor but kokila dragged him to gopis doctor , there was only one person around rashis doctor and that was of course , urmilla shah " doctor what happened my daughters going to be okay na " " well its very hard to say anything , rashi has lost a lot of blood and you did brought her here very late , we are trying but it is definitely very serious , all i can say is that there is only one percent chance in a hundred " " huh" for urmilla it was as if all her world had collapsed , the doctor just told her that her daughter was going to die , what was she going to do , she fell to the chair and cried at her and her daughters misfortune ," aur haan , umh since rashi has been shot this is a police case i suggest that you immediately report this to the police , okay " and with that the doctor left , urmilla got worried , what was going to happen now of all of her lies in the past how is the police ever going to believe what she says,

jigar heard all of what the doctor said , and he himself was in trauma ,rashi had no chance of being alive , if rashi wont live how will he survive ,jigar went to urmilla and said to her that he'll inform the police " jamaiji thank you very much , whatever me and rashi have done to you , it is a huge favour on us that you are still ready to help us" urmilla joined her hands and thanked jigar , but as jigar was he just brushed it away saying it was his duty ,

" well its not that bad but we have to do an operation to check if she is actually all right" the doctor explained to the rest of the modi family ,

ahams pov : all right , he is telling me that my wife needs an operation and her says that its all right
" and also you need to arrange blood for gopi , she has lost way too much of it okay" he added
" ji doctor saab yo can continue with the operation , doctor do anything but please nothing should happen to my gopi vahu , he should be alright , we'll arrange for the blood too" kokila said
"good!" and with that he left

" per kokila , who do we know that has the same blood group as gopi" hetal said worriedly
urmilla heard what they said and went in to volunteer to save gopi , that was the least of what she could do," umh vevanji?" all of there eyes turned to her " ji urmilla ben"kokilla answered," woh i was saying that i have the same blood group as gopi , you can take my blood if you want" they all were amazed , especially kokila she couldnt believe her ears was the greedy , wicked, illterate , selfish , urmilla shah actually caring for her niece ,
" saru" kokila agreed , urmilla was her only hope to save her DIL

meanwhile jigar phoned the police and they arrived , the family members were surprised to find them there ," jagr modi?" they turned to jigar " yes , umh ive called you to catch the kidnappers of my wife and SIL " " very well , where are they" " umh actually my wife has been shot and my SIL has been injured " " okay so is there anyone who was with them there" " yes me and my brother" " great so can you just describe the kidnappers and then we'll get the statement of your wife and SIL after they have regained conscious ," " okay well let me ask my brother ," jigar turned to aham and went to him " bhai?" no response " bhai we need to get the people who hurt bhabhi in jail , they need to suffer like bhabhi is inside there " this time aham looked at him and agreed , " okay lets go"
aham and jigar gave the description of the kidnappers , after a while urmilla returned from giving blood to gopi , then rashis doctor came
urmilla , jigar and this time even hetal went to the doctor ," doctor , what happened , rashi is okay na" jigar asked ," array say something , my daughters life is at stake , please say something" urmilla begged," ji doctor , please , is rashi okay "

" im deeply sorry to say this ... but " the doctor looked down ,for jigar it was as if his heart beat stopped, urmilla felt herself falling down ,hetal managed to say something " ...but?", kokila and the others heard the doctor and went to him ," kya baat hai doctor , is everything okay" kokila asked
urmilla leaned back to the walll , jigar couldnt say anything ,
"umh what happened" this time kinjal spoke ,they all kept on asking him but the doctor just stood there like a statue , with his head down

is rashi dead !!!!!
will they find the kidnappers !!!!!!
what will happen to gopi !!!!
will the couples ever be together !!!
what do you think😊
keep reading to find out
please comment ,😊




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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
This is interesting. Please continue.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really nice. Continue soon
*bump*this is wat rashi wants us to read
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am having my hubby read it to me when he get home ... My hindi is so . so
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great work...cant wait to read more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this was amazing...just can't wait to read the next part...plzzz update soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I don't know how i missed this one... sry for commenting late

This was awesome dear. U r an extremely great writer 👏

waiting eagerly for d next part...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
hiyah!!!😉
thanks for the comments 😃

heres the next part

they all repeatedly asked the doctor about rashi , but the doctor just stood there ,,,,,,, finallly he looked up and said ," we're sorry , we tried everything but we just couldnt save-" jigar couldnt believe his ears , (jigars pov: this cant be true, this must be some kind of a joke , rashi cant leave me , ,,, no she cant ,,) " shu , what do you mean you tried everything , you have to save my daughter , your the doctor , we count on you" urmilla protested , trying to avoid what he said ," i know how you must feel but we cant do anyt-"

the doctor was about to finish when the nurse rushed out of the room , interrupting him," doctor , come inside fast ,shes breathing" the nurses words gave each one of the members a sigh of relief and happiness ," what do you mean , thats impossible" the doctor replied ," no its not come look for your self" the nurse took the doctor to rashi and closed the door , all of the members gathered around the door to see what was going on inside ,

the doctor rushed to rashi , and it was true she was breathing , he started attaching some wires to her and started to check her heart beat ,
everyone outside saw rashi , she was still covered in blood , she still had an oxygen mask on her face , but then she leaned up , it was as if she wanted to get up , but then she fell to the bed again , it was then they noticed that the doctor was giving her shocks
it hurt jigar to see rashi in so much pain , how could he tolerate it ,
urmilla was crying so much that there was a chance that she could drown in her own tears
while rashi was getting closer to death , here gopi was in coma ,
aham was the first to notice , he saw gopi as if she was lifeless, she didnt move or slightly jump up like rashi , she was just lying there ,

gopis doctor came outside , " well we've given her an injection to put her to sleep , we will do the operation in a while" he said , aham let out a sigh , for he was thinking that she had gone into the longest sleep in the world , a sleep which no one can wake up from , but thankfully it wasnt that case . kokila turned to aham and said " aham , you have go to the receptionist and fill out the form , for gopi vahu" aham looked at her and nodded ,

urmilla was in a deep thought , but then she stood up , and walked off, the others just stared at her
" urmilla ben , where are you going" hetal asked but she got no reply.
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at the mandir
urmilla was praying to the god for her two daughters , for the first time she considered gopi as a part of her family ,just then the priest came to her ," urmilla , what happened" urmilla looked at him with teary eyes , she explained everything to him ,the priest sighed" what a fate your daughters have got , both were born on the same day , both got married at the same time and now both are fighting for life in union too ,urmilla dont worry , today is a day to improve and change in a better way, they are a team of warriors , if one can fight for her rights verbally , the other fights with her belief , , none of them were completely wrong and none of them were completely right , it was their surroundings that have put them in this type of situation , they need to learn that even one of their smallest mistakes effects everyone around them , they both have strengths and both have weaknesses , but they will never be defeated in life because of the *saathiyas * they have , their partners will always protect them , support them and always be beside them , that i can say for sure . if one is in pain the other one will heal it , if one is sad the other one will make sure to put a smile on their face and today ,if one is on the edge of death the other one will pull her back , urmilla , no matter how you have raised both of them , they were supposed to turn out like this , urmilla you have united both of them to their life partners , in other word your a kind of messenger of god , even if the intention and way was wrong , it was all predestined , urmilla i dont see death in their present for a long time, in fact today is the day for them to realise their mistakes , for forgiveness , if they have sorrow today , god wont call them to him without giving them real happiness , you just need to believe in him " and with that he patted her head and left
urmilla kept on thinking about what the priest said and prayed for both rashi and gopi in tears
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at the hospital ,
ahams eyes were still glued to gopi , he kept on thinking about what he said to her , the way he behaved towards her , their first nuptial night when he went sleep leaving gopi sad and lonely , when everytime gopi was in front of him how he scolded her and told her to get out , and all the time he kept on making her realize how much he hated her , how he didnt need her in his life , how worthless she was and how illterate she was . the thoughts made aham soo angry that he wanted to hit himself , he was so brutall and cruel to her when she was with him and now when she is in coma , not speaking , moving or doing anything he wants her in front of him . aham looked at rashi , what was the difference between her and him , she had a nice husband , a nice MIL , a good father in law , and she didnt care about them , she always wanted more , and so was aham , he had a nice mom , the best wife, a good job and a perfect family and he didnt care , he too wanted more , like someone better than gopi , like anitha who left him and didnt even care about him , while gopi ignored all of his betterness and kept doing her part of being married , and of a dutiful wife , but what did he do , he cried over somthing he lost and forgot the diamond that he had found .
aham kept thinking about the things he had done and promised to himself that he will always be nice to gopi always love her and be the perfect husband that he never was when she is back to normal ...


jigar was in deep thought ,for in his case it was totally opposite , the person who had betrayed him, and hurt him was in hospital ,and she was the one who got shot, but that didnt make a difference to him for he always loved her trully , no matter how she was he had faith on his love and god , he thought that he would give all of the happiness in the world and always keep her happy , he had positive thoughts and point of iews for everything but all his hopes were shattered when he remebered what sonal had told him , how she lied to him every time how to her he was worthless , jigars hands clenched into fists in rage but when he glanced at her ,,, all his rage diappeared and turned into love , of course he wanted to punish , he wanted to make her realise how he felt but not in this way , he never wanted to see her in this state , he wanted to change her with his love , jigar looked at rashi and thought ,,,,,, he needed to believe in hs love , he needed to get the thought that he had lost rashi forever out of his head , nothing had happened yet there was still a chance , a big chance ,,, he just to believe in his love ,,,,, jigar kept repeating those words and tried to console himself.

rashi still in danger ...
gopi lifeless ...
and jigar and aham trying to console themselves ...
...



what do you think will happen !!!!
will rashi survive
will the boys try to make their married life better
will gopi come out of coma
???????????????
keep reading to find out

plz comment like and tell me what you thing ,
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice samia..👏 please update more often can't wait to read next😍

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