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hana_y

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Posted: 13 years ago

hi guys it my 3rd ff so hope u will like it but it not like others ff ,os or ss i have change the cast . here we go .

in delhi there is a beautiful resto name gm resto , it a big resto well known in delhi it has been 2 yrs since it exist . they welcome clients with lots of love n respect . the owner of the resto is such a beautiful respected woman she love to talk to know how the client think about there meals , drinks all that there is a wonderful smell in the resto . on the road one day the woman was walking she was on the phone .on the same streets a handsome tall guy was walking he was also on the phone they way face to face but they did not see each ever when sudenly ,while walking they were colse to eachever that there hand has been touch but yet they did not see each ever face . the guy i have heard this voice some where, he turn to see but he saw just a back of a woman the hair was open she was wearing a green salwaz kameez . the lady this touch i know that touch who is the preson she turn but there was nobody it my imagination she go . the same day in the office yes mam that can i do for u a girl ask to the lady . i have an appointment with mr mehta she reply , the young mehta is not here so will u meet the big mehta , yes if pssible what your name please the girl ask , miss modi , sir there is miss modi for u , let her come ok . she tell miss modi where is the cabin the lady thx u n she leave to the cabin . sir may i coming yes come please the man reply , she enter in the cabin please sit down yes wht can i do for u miss gopi modi sir . sir i got order from your office but unfortunatly it has been 3 day since we were contact u but nobody reply tht y im here to know where is the party then we can arrenge for it . u r from gm resto sir im the owmer that was no nessacery beta .u call me beta sir , yes y dont like me calling u beta im sorry . no sir not at all it has been a long time that i hear someone call me beta that y . ok then u can call me uncle if u want as my name is chirag mehta . he give her the adress where will be the party she was about t o leave she turn n say uncle ur paint frame is very beautiful , u like it it my son who did it. this is his time pass he love to do paint whemn he return from the office . oh he is talented i must say , ahem is so talented but dont want to share it . ok bye uncle n she leave . in the evening she has aready arange for the party n went to meet chirag about the arangement for the party n leave . the party goes well ahem hear ringing of phone he take it hello . hello uncle it me gopi i left my cell at your place it will be possible tomorow sent it i will be in my resto ok ahem reply n cut . this voice since familar to me y when ever i hear that voice i dont know what happen to me it like the voice is pulling me to her y he ask to himself . he go to do the painting when he finish the painting he got shoched it was a beautiful woman he never met her how can he paint a face which he never met or even know her . he was lost in the beauty of the face do i know her or met her if in the paint she is so beautiful in reality how she will be wow i must search her . next day mom im leaving ok dikra , chirag ; y r u so hurry we have time wait for me no dad i cant . dad will you sent his cell to gopi with a driver she left it here ahem said . ok but how do u know it for her she call on that when i receive the call i got to know ok bye . ahem kai papa im praying to when ahem will tell us he want to get married as u know we cant force him but we cant wait to long also . u r right hetal give him some more time as you know he has a problem so dont force him ok . so i stop here let u think what problem ahem has hope u will like it do comments please n press like button

i will come soon 😊

part 2 pg 2 part 23 pg 37

part 3 pg 4 part 24 pg 40

part 4 pg 5 part 25 pg 43

part 5 pg 6

part 6 pg 7

part 7& 8 pg 8

part 9 pg 9

part 10 pg 10

part 11 pg 11

part 12 pg 13

part 13 pg 15

part 14 pg 17

part 15 pg 19

part 16 pg 21

part 17 pg 22

part 18 pg 24

part 19 pg 27

part 20 pg 29

part 21 pg 32

part 22 pg 35

Edited by hana_y - 12 years ago

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-Nafisa-

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Posted: 13 years ago

The concept of your story is great. Love all this rebirth/reincarnation type of stories, even Tinks story is a hit because of the supernatural interference.

Eagerly awaiting your next update as it's a beautiful story. 😊

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@MereMahiyaa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

uhhhmmm... very intresting start🤔

you made me very curious ,Cant wait too Read the next part

if you are going to pm when you update pleas pm me!

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Amal Aziz

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome!!!👏

waiting 4 next part😍

Add me to ur PM list

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hana_y

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Posted: 13 years ago

thx nafisa i will do it on week end

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swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

A really fascinating story with lots of intrigue set in in the first part.

Looking forward to the next update soon.

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hana_y

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Posted: 13 years ago

thanx i was not expected that u will love it but now i will do it to night im so happy thx a lots

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-Eris-

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Posted: 13 years ago

I like rebirth stories. Write more. Pl pm me

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--HANISA--

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow amezing love your ff continue please

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hana_y

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Posted: 13 years ago

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hi thx all of u for loving my ff n the coments the support here we go next the same dat in the office ahem was in his dad office he heard tring tring the cell is ringing then it cut . dad u did not sent gopi cell oh i forgot beta chirag reply . will u please go n return her as she can got some important call ok dad i wll go right now , he leave . in the car the cell ring again he take it , hello hello gopi no it not gopi she forgot her cell in my house . im gopi mother who r u he was about to say but could not as there was police he just say i will sent your massage n cut . in rajkut kokila whom did u call dawal qey papa the voice i heard the voice after 5 yrs who's voice u r talking about kokila . about our she stop , dadi dadi did u call fuiw to know if she will come for my birthday the small cute boy ask . no krish i did not get her later i will try again ok ji . back in delhi in the resto ahem ask for gopi , the boy say she is not here ok then give her this cell and tell her to call her mom ahem said and was about to leave . sir y dont u try any thing drink or eat i asure u will like it , ok give me the menu book he look n see green tea have do green tea here yes sir . ok give me i cup please . when he finish he pay for tea he was going out from the back door gopi is putting her leg in there ahem is getting out one is totally out the over is totally in . she greed the boy didi your cell friend is in his room as usewell , he knock at the door room hey come in yaar he enter in the room . how r u ahem ,do mr mehta leave a message that u must call your mom ok she said . after 15 mins she call her mom , hello maa she greed her , how u n all the members , it now u got time to call us what that gopi it one month since u did not call y . threre was so much work that y ok now tell me u did not forget that in two days is krish brhday , non mum i will come may i talk with him , hello fuiw r u coming yes beta im coming love u love u too he cut the phone . in mehta house beta how r u , im fine aunty n u fine so your u want to know how i im as a friend or a doctor he reply . the both , ok im fine ,y did u call me , jigar i want to show u something wait a minite ahem u r not fine tell me.ok its just my head is paining i know i cant hide u anything we r friend since child ..y u did not tell aunty u know its not good for u y u dont understand this . ok just look at this picture how is it , wow ahem it beautiful what her name tell me , i dont know her ,i did not even see her just her voice i hear n i make this . not possible ahem without meet some one u did her face so beautiful i must say she look very pretty if just in this picture she is looking like this how she will be in reality . i must find her ahem said her voice pull me to her when i hear i dont know y . ahem how many days u did not sleep jigar ask him , 3 days since i heard her voice , not only that come with me i will show u more . in the store room ahem take out the sheet on the tablaux , jigar get shocked when he see the photo of the lady how it was looking so real like some one was there .ahem r u sure u never see the lady before he ask again , bsz this cant be possible the way the lady is sitting all around her the beautiful flowers the bird to do it we must be around there n u r telling me u were not there . n this one like she is so happy n her hand on her stomach like she is saying of pregnant thats means she is pregnant . ahem lets go from here if i stay here i will go mad like u will go mad stop it i dont want u to do any paint do u hear me . i cant it a part of my life now i will find the lady im sure i will get her n the baby . what baby r u yes if in the picture she is saying about pregnant that means it must have the baby .they must have some thing which is related to me . i stop here i will continue tomorow hope u will like it n press like button please do coments .

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