OS:Ahem Helps Gopi to Wash-updated 10/01/2012

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kavya

@Kavya.S

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

the update was very good...loved it

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-Eris-

@-Eris-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Great update xarina!!!! You are the steam queen

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shaina

@shaina.sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Hai hai hai hai

wow yaar..i never read such a indepedent gopi before..u really brought a huge change in her.

its so good to see ahem being a puppet in her hands and i love the part where he thought he was too transperant😆

very sweetly and nicely described a simple love essence...

sooo good and so hot too at the same time😆

i have to give credit to u...u can burn computers down😉

and i love the last koki scene...the way she thought about them being mishceivous..😆

well done once again...

and yeah i remembered breathing this time.

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Wow that was amazing , u are one brave woman , hats off to you.you handle the porridge /honey /mint tea challenge with such aplomb , it far exceeded my expectations .your title of 'queen of steam ' is well deserved

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Xarina

@Xarina

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: taniks
Wow that was amazing , u are one brave woman , hats off to you.you handle the porridge /honey /mint tea challenge with such aplomb , it far exceeded my expectations .your title of 'queen of steam ' is well deserved

Thanks, taniks.😊 It was fun writing it, even if I did have to change one bit.

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

gosh.this was truly amazing.loved each n every part

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Scarlet28

@Scarlet28

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Really hot Xarina, love the steamy scenes.

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maddy311

@maddy311

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Xarina came back to read it again😉 Don't know why but its getting hotter the more I read it😆

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Xarina

@Xarina

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: maddy311
Xarina came back to read it again😉 Don't know why but its getting hotter the more I read it😆

I know. I keep reading my copy too. ☺️ Blush like mad and then realise that there is a typo or something. Makes me want to redo the whole thing.

And Shaina? Thank you for breathing.😆 Didn't want to be doing a murder mystery on the forum.