OS: A helping hand - Page 3

Originally posted by: Nihira-fan

that was absolutely fabulous!!had tears in my eyes.i really enjoyed reading it!great work!

Thank you Nihira!!

Originally posted by: vibz88

i was having naughty thoughts while reading. I liked tat he was standing closer to her than necessary.ha ha while closing her blouse. Am glad she confessed her love.

😆 Thank you dear. Well don't really now how he managed to close her blouse afterall but that is the freedom of creativity I took😆

Originally posted by: shruthi2010

ow, how sweet and cute.
the ending had tears in my eyes.
nice story.

Thank you shruthi!!!😃

Originally posted by: navyab

Guess what Kirstin while reading the OS ...I had the entire scene played before me...I could imagine Ahem in the hospital...Ahem running down to eat his dinner...Gopi entering into the rest room...Ahem standing out & asking her...& evrything...

Wonderfully written !!!!👏

Thank you 😃 navyab!!!

Glad it was so vivid for you while reading it.

Originally posted by: taniks

Omg that was just too awesome, jeez u made me cry again . That last line was incredibly beautiful . That sindoor is a pet peeve of mine , I promised myself I will never be satisfied until he fills her maang on his own , but what u did with it in os makes it almost realistic , and so stunningly choreographed as it was reaffirmation of his committment to her leading to the sweet vow of love. I hope the cvs steal this scene from ur os and use it in da serial.love it

Thanky you taniks for this fantastic comment!!

Yeah I like the fact that he makes up for his past mistakes but as I have mentioned that wasn't my idea to start with but navyab's and I just made it happen😃

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

Awww Kristin here a big 🤗for writing such a sweet story... but at the same time reading the sindoor part... my throat became dry... it's emotional

-munni

Thanks munni!! Here have a 🤗 back

I am really glad you enjoyed the OS so much and that it made you emotional

Originally posted by: tina_1234

aww such an awesomely cute os

Thanks a lot tina!!! 😃

Originally posted by: rsshree

no word to explain, WOW🤗

🤗 Thank you dear!!

Wow...fantastic post kirsten...this is something cvs can show in saathiya...and sindoor part was cool...👏 Beautiful OS...Do write more...

Originally posted by: gohem123

Wow...fantastic post kirsten...this is something cvs can show in saathiya...and sindoor part was cool...👏 Beautiful OS...Do write more...

Thank you dear 😃

But I'm not sure they can show the sari scene in the serial. A little to much skin, if you asked me 😆 But I wish they would show the sindoor bit or something similar to it!!

Originally posted by: Rafaal2

Great one 😊

Thank you Rafaal!!! 😃

That was beautifully written...hope to see more OS from U😊

I had tears in my eyes. Thank you so much for posting this. xx